MaanEet FF: Once Upon A Time... Chapter14-Page125 - Page 44

aawwww great job dear enjoyed reading it!!!

In response to Chap 8
pehle to.. jassi menu maaf karde!! - got here late to comment!! i wrote the comment saved it cos couldnt post and well.. oye hoye kuriye..!! wot an AWESOME update!! Ek dum vadiya!! Love love Loved it!
So it was a new amazing part! At first I thought aww it was real cuuute the way Maan cared for Geet - and of course he was still the hotty that he is with that temper! lol but damn all that cuteness sure turned super hot! - as I said earlier.. things gonna "heat up" in Shimla?? and my o my, u turned the heat Right up!! woahh, not only the maneet 'kiss' moment, but even after that actually - with maan's flexing muscles overpowering all other senses, it took a moment to come back to the rest of the fiction - all i could picture was that hotty in his vest lol FABBBBULOUSY written! so from cute to hot to super damn hilarious courtesy Ranjit + Bunty Grewal!! but sadda munda maan comedy vich kam nay!! - he confiscated geets gum?? LMAO!!!! i lovvvvvvved that! i thought it was a genius little addition in the part!! girl, you've written this damn well!

And finally the end of it - *shock.. shock.. and more shock..* MAAN ACTUALLY aritculated his feelings.. OUT LOUD??? - did he just tel her that his mind doesnt function due to.. er.. Geet?? wow!! + not even once did he take a moment and think to himself.. "crap did i just let her know/?" lol cannottt wait to read the next update which you've already posted woooooooo! - maneet still in shimla due to landslide?? HADIPPPAAAAAAAA!!!

Jassi ji.. (i am...) *shmiiiiiiiile(-ing)* LOL yay! yay! yay!! rocking update and freakin fab precap!!! ok gonna read the other one in abit and gonna reply to ur other replies as well!!! mwah! xxxxxxxxxxx
Loving it!!xx

Originally posted by: xxJaSsIxx

Hey!!! OMG!!!

I love Veer soooooooooo much!!!!

I got soooo angry whenever sum1 would say

'Veer was a flop!' I'd be like ready to kill them

It was a frickin awesome movie!!!

I especially loved the scene where he tell off the stupid teacher

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y3uDSYfp_64

"Paseena Smell Dhool Mithi Khichar Bloody Pigs Cows Everywhere! DirtDirtDirt"

His expressions were sooooo good when stupid teacher was saying all this!

and then

"Agar humara desh itna hi dirty hain jahan pe Dhool Mithi Khichar Cows Bufallos Flies Smell Paseena toh aap 140 saal se humare desh mein kar kya rahe ho? Safai!"

OMG!!!! i just loved the way he imitated the damn teacher! Italisized parts were my favourite especially 'Safai!'

That was such a good reply and Sallu said it really good!

And seriously Dabangg was just toooooo good!

I loved it sooooo much! he was so funny and hilarious through out the whole movie!!

"Hum tum mein itne chedh karenge ke tum confuj ho jao ge ke saans kaha le le aur..."

The way he starts laughing was soooo funny.

That was soo cute, the way he laughed!

And in the end on such a serious he made me actually laugh, when he was in the middle of fighting Sonu Sood/Chedi Singh

"Pehli baar tumhe dekh kar kushi hui" (something like that) to Makhi!

LOL

I accidentally called my brother Makhi again!

You know I found it so funny the way his shirt rips off in the end.

I actually started laughing

And ya...it was oooo funny how he danced to Jalwa!

And then, he danced soooo funny in Udd Udd Dabangg! lol

also, in Tere Mast Mast Do Nain!

I was ROFLing!!!

(BTW: I was also ROFLing when I saw Maan's bhangra!! It was soooooo funny but I found it soooooo cute!!)

And Wanted was seriously one Amazing movie!!!!!

Salman Khan was too gud in it!! One man army as he is in all movies!

I just loved the way all the bad guys were teriffied in the end!

Reminded me of 'Garv', another of his movies I love!

I also jsut love London Dreams!!

It has a good story to it!

And sallu was tooo funny in it!

LOLzz Enuf Sallu talk!!

I just get carried away when it comes to sallu!

Hawwww!!!!

*IN SHOCK*

OMG!!!! That Veer OS/FF was by YOU!!!

Wow!!!!!

I read it many weeks ago!!!

I was sooooo happy when I saw it was based on Veer!!

I loved it soooooo mcuh!!

I even voted for it!!

And the Namastey London one!

Cause, Namastey London is one of my fav movies.

Wow Saz di!!!

You rock!!!

it was sooooooo romantic!!!

I seriosuly loved it!!

I'm still in shock that it was urzz!

Cauldn't you have told me be4!!

I wish you'd start a FF or SS

Awwwwww

I'm delighted to be called cute!!!

And I wnat to call you Di!

cause I look up to your comments to know if I did good or no!

Okay!! i've been typing this message for an hour now!!

LOL

I shuld work on my update which I'm only half done soo far!

Thanks for commenting Saz Di!!

Love You

-Jassi

Awwwwwww Jas!!! 🤗 u loved my OS? and voted for it too??? no way! awwwwwww! u have no idea how high pitched my squealing is right now! 😆 Ur sooo sweeet i'm actually smiling So much right now! aww thanx bubba!! thats sooo sweeeeeeeet of you to say!!! thank u thank u thank u thank uuu jas!! woops, I never really thought to mention it before I guess.. but with our Sallu+Veer+Maneet chats, I couldnt help throw that in there 😆 and about starting an ff or ss.. u know what, even this MG OS was outta the blue. I've never felt so compelled to write something before - Maneet made me do it + then with veer as an inspiration, my mind went mad and I just did it lol if I write something again I promise to let you know First! Pakka!

Now.. to Sallu 😉 😆
LMAO @ that cheedi singh + makhi dialogues + + + Salman's laugh in the movie hehehe!!! it was sucha funny brilliant role!!! I was cracking up throughout as well! and omggg MAAANS BHANGRA!!! so it wasnt just me who found it funny!!! - u know what, hes a great dancer but his bhangra sure makes me laugh - ESP the one in the dhabba, it was abit hmmm.. just.. butttt soooo cute nevertheless - his expressions make up for his movement 😳
and to be honest with you, I'm not so big on the film 'Garv' or 'London Dreams' although I say that, I still watched them sooo many times i'm so weird, I know. Sallu was absolutely mindblowing in them both of course and they were roles totally different to eachother - how Awesome is he?!! but still... compared to his role in garv, I prefer him LD and films like Dulhan Hum Le Jayenge, Pyar Kiya to darna kya (omg.. love him in that and the film so much too!), Chori Chori chupke chupke and defo Hello Brother - cos he's Super cute + funny in that! and ooo Partner!! LOve that film!!! like.. omg.. i cant even begin to tell u how much 😆
and OMG Jas u made me relive that moment in Veer! I have to say, after a long time I think Salman played a 'character' if you know what I mean. I think after Tere Naam, This has to be one of the most powerful bit of acting he has done, and that scene that u mentioned highlights it perfectly. Uff, he is amazing in that part! Love it tooo!!! + I have to say that in the entire film, he continously stole my heart.. he even made me blush. It was an immensely freakin breathtaking performance there is No doubt in that. One of my favvvvvourite movie's of his Any day!! I'll stop the sallu talk quickly before i start quoting his dialogues which where hell mindblowing!!!!

Jas gonna have sum foood and then i'll come back to enjoy ur ff and oops reply to ur other comment!! + read the update - i wanna read it so bad! lol Love you!xxxxxxxxxx

oh man... i loved this update...

awesome just luved it 👍🏼👏

Heyy...you didnt add me to your list...my name isnt there...next time I want a pm for the update....😊

This part was cute too...pillow fight..seriously who hits her boss with a pillow....????😆😆😆😆😆

Hey!!!! Jazz...!!!!😉...ok..hehehe 😆😆😆😆

Originally posted by: Starry_night

Ok, am running short of adjectives to describe the awesomeness of your updates......so am gonna repeat them.....it was fabulous, wonderful, amazing.......superb! Maan and Geet had to share the room.....what a plight for the two trained ladakoos....lolz. I don't believe Maan.....he asked her if he could kiss her......I was laughing for a good few minutes and despite her saying no...he did that.....and lmaoo.......she slapped him twice......every action has an equal and opposite reaction.....and our Geet madam decides to alternate between the two.....last time she kissed him and this time slapped him......this is one really funny and enjoyable FF! Maan got distracted seeing her in those Tom and Jerry pajamas....lolz.....and she was watching GurTi....lolz......seems Maan was jealous of GC....lolz. Oh, Maan was hurt and it pained Geet......aww.....but that did not stop her from ogling his bare torso.....God help these two! Maan actually offered her to shared the bed as well.....and he made her sleep on the bed.....how cute was that! Hmm.....so now he has begun to realize his love for Geet.....and I forgot to mention earlier.....Maan told her everything about his family.......that was really nice! It showed how much he trusts her to confide in her......all in all a great, great update! Do continue soon.

Gosh, my comments are just getting longer....lolz..

Awww! Thank you soooo much dear!!

Gosh, my comments are just getting longer....lolz..
That's a good thing!!😃😆

-Jassi

Originally posted by: bshah856

gr8 update n just luv dem yr characters r too freaking cool n Dharsti hui paraye is d best part

Thanks so much dear! -Jassi

Originally posted by: jazmeen

lovely ff and its so funny how you added gurmeet drashati and ff lol

can you add me to ur pm list :)

Thank You Jazmeen! -Added- -Jassi