MaanEet FF: Once Upon A Time... Chapter14-Page125 - Page 47

Originally posted by: solicitude

was wondering whether you'd updated or nor as hadn't received a pm but still managed to catch the last two updates!

Ur ff is just amazing! U are a incredible writer!

Thanks!! I'll be updating on Tuesday hopefully! -Jassi

Awesome, superb, fabulous update!!

OMG great update jas ur azaming plz update soon... loved the whole maaneet scenes the were so perfectly cute and hawt so count soon, and thanks for the pm!

awsuuMMM!!!!


maan kissed geET!!!!...n got a slaPPP!!!lmaoOO!!!


update soON!!!

Jassssi jiii!!!!! 😆 🤗 awwwwwwwwwwwwwww what a beautiful part!! I have another new favourite Chapter from the ff now!! This is officially it! Damn u topped my previous fav pretty fast didnt ya! 😛 fehgieqhgeryiefjmvnwhriqwuieqrip204TJAWIHAKVGAJ!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Speechless!!!
let me take a breath...!! *gulping some oxygen*
okay.. a little more..!!

Now.. U know what sweety, this was absolutely fannnntasssstically written!!! It felt like I was playing an epi of Maneet or something - it was freaking brilliant! I dont care how convential the 'sharing one room' idea is cos I think its an awesome one and i'm So happy with the way u used it - I would never imagine them to have a pillow fight 😆 Now that I didnt expect, which made it original, and ooober dooober funny!! I cant believe the child that Geet has turned Maan into - its sooo cuuuute but as if he's ever gonna stop his sexiness? lol Jas - girl u have an Awesome imagination! I laughed, giggled, smiled like crazy, was left eyes wide open at various parts in the chappy!
When he pinned her and actually Asked - "what would u do if i kissed u?" OMG!!!!! My heart was bhangra-ing lol and the fact that he went ahead and did it anyway after her response..?? jeeez Jas, rocking bit!!! Go Maan!! 🥳
and then the next shocker... she slapped him??? TWICE?? 😲 😲 switch to.. "Go Geet!" 🥳
😆 It didnt make anything awkward between them which I thank u for! =D and the slapping also showed Maan that she aint just any other random girl that he can just kiss about (its his Geet - thoda respect kar mundeya! 😛 😆) but still i love super flirty / naughty maan 😉 - i love that u continued to bring out his mischief whilst geet was tryina plaster up his wound (bless her, shes such sweetheart, caring for him! aww! if it were me, i'd probably forget he was in pain and just stare at his gorgeous physique - good thinking though jas, u made her face his back lol) but yeah.. naughty maan telling her it hurt - and then the entire shirt seq after that - Mindblowing! twas hot girly 😳

I was laughing like an idiot with the mention of GC whenever he came up lol and how protective Geet was about GC awww! i would do the same thing though lol
i love that ur geet reads Gurti ff's hahaha and jassssssssssss u mentioned my ff? awwwwwwwwwww!!!! *am pinching ur cheex and then squeezing u in huge hug* lol How much cuter are u gonna get???! I was beeeaming 😆 u could probably guess my infamous *squealing session* began and the big fat grin that ur chapter had caused on my face already, actually grew larger within a split second at that moment! I lovvvvvvvvvvvve you!!!! and I lovvvvvvvve this ff sooo much!
Super-mindblowingly-fantastically-fabulously-insanely-outrageously-A-M-A-Y-S-I-N-N-N-G CHAPTER!
LOVE LOVE LOVED IT!! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

(re: precap... so ur sure this time na - that the engagement topic atleast, will arise lol - cant waitttt!!!xxxxxx)

hey jassi!
srry for commenting sooo late
but my irritating stupid net wz not workin....n finally it is now....(THANK GOD!!)
n d first thing i did wz signed in n read ur update! i wz soooo eagerly waiting for it!
i really really luvred it....beyond words...........
it wz FAB!
i really not got enough time to comment....cuz i got loadzzz of pending skul work...n lyk 25 updates to read :P
but i juz wnna say tat d update wz really awesome!
i really really really really really really luved it!
BIG HUG!
nxt update a big comment!pakka!!
btw how old r u??(if u dun mind answering..)
luv ya

Navpreet

I'm baccccccccccck with replies to ur replies! 😳 😆

Originally posted by: xxJaSsIxx

Awww!! You don't need to ask for forgiveness! I Maafed you! lol Thank you soooo much Sazji I'm also *shmile(ing)! Yay!!! I'm soooo happy u commented finally! Dil Khush Kar Diya! -Literally! LOL! Even I was getting distracted while writing the part about man in vest!

hhahaa...Maan drives everyone crazy!

Thanks again for commenting!!

-Jassi

aww love you! and ur welcome - i cant ever Not comment here! thats a little insane - the first thing i NEED to do when I read ur comment is let u know what I felt about it !!! - i need to let all that out to u! lol
It's true, Maan drives us all crazy, and u know what its so commendable, that the character of Maan that u'v portrayed a little differently in this ff is causing that same insanity - well done for doing such a fiiiiiiiiine job with him! x

Originally posted by: xxJaSsIxx

Wow!!

I just noticed how crazy we are!!

I mean lonnngggg convos over Sallu!

lol

u noe i also lovvedd him in Partner!!

I just love that movie too!

It was soooo funny!!

You know when i was like 2-3 years old

-and u were probably way older

lol

I watched Hum Saath Saath Hain!

and then, me, my cuzzin, and my sis

watched that movie once everyday!!!

like seriously!!

We used to like Salman-Sonali Bendre soo much!!

And then eventually when I was six years old

we started to slowly not watch it

and then we just stopped

and then this year it came on ATN and we watched it

and we're like

"OMG!! This movie has no frickin story!"

lol

but, we still love it cause it's a fun movie

but, then it gets stupid in the end!

and we couldn't help but notice how girl Salman is in the movie!!!

Always just shying away!😳

But we still liked Salman-Sonali Bendre pair

better than the other 2!

Okay!!!!!

I really need to stop with the Sallu talk!

lol

-Jassi

I knowwww our convos about Sallu !!! hahaha its making me laugh now that its ongoing but its not our fault that he has such an effect on us 😉
and omg I'm older than u but i aint that old u little moose!! i'm only 19 + i'm already dreading my birthday this year cos i'm turning 20 😲 😭
but coming back to how i became old... 😆' the film 'hum saath saath hain'Jasss thats one of my sallu 'bachpan ki films' aswell!! lol I remember loving it when I was little too! and to be honest I actually still think its sweet 😳 I completely agree that the end was a bit dodgy but it needed some sorta 'happy ending' na.. but anyways, omgggggg he's shyyyy in the film but its actually cute!!! 😳 I tell u why i dont find it girly, but 1 of my cousins would agree with u and actually call him gay - shes such a cow (i meant that in a loving way of course 😆) she just needs an excuse to abuse salman infront of me, simply to bug / tease me! but anyways, the shyness was a change and he still had something sexy about him (but thats less to do with the character, more to do with sallu!.. )little things like him whispering from behind, those glances, and the whole not much of a talker thing.. he totally made it work! however, i prefer his more charming, stronger characters of other films for defo 😉
the final thing about HSSH - i love saif + karishma the most in the movie - they were the cutest and funniest!!
and awww u really liked sonali and salmans pairing? how sweet! i defo still think shes stunning and I remember when Farah came on his show Dus Ka Dum (btw, u Have watched it right?? Sallu was the cuuuuuuuuuuutest and hotttttttest thing evahhhhhhhh on that show in like evvvry epi!) where was I.. yeah, Farah was saying how onscreen, she preferred him with softer, simpler, sweet looking heroines, cos he's all strong and sexy, he looks best / most romantic with a sweet simple girl (i.e Bhagyashree / Sonali) - but i think he looks great with loadsa actresses! I agree with her to some extent only, his sexiness only enhances with a simple girl! buttt I also wish to believe that I would make the perfect girl for him and well.. i'm not exactly the most 'simple' girl out there!!! 😆
love you!!!
xxxxxxxxxxxx

Originally posted by: punjabi.princes

Awesome, superb, fabulous update!!

plz con't soon! btw ur an amazing writer!

Originally posted by: Mina H

OMG great update jas ur azaming plz update soon... loved the whole maaneet scenes the were so perfectly cute and hawt so count soon, and thanks for the pm!

Originally posted by: Chotii

Jassssi jiii!!!!! 😆 🤗 awwwwwwwwwwwwwww what a beautiful part!! I have another new favourite Chapter from the ff now!! This is officially it! Damn u topped my previous fav pretty fast didnt ya! 😛 fehgieqhgeryiefjmvnwhriqwuieqrip204TJAWIHAKVGAJ!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Speechless!!!
let me take a breath...!! *gulping some oxygen*
okay.. a little more..!!

Now.. U know what sweety, this was absolutely fannnntasssstically written!!! It felt like I was playing an epi of Maneet or something - it was freaking brilliant! I dont care how convential the 'sharing one room' idea is cos I think its an awesome one and i'm So happy with the way u used it - I would never imagine them to have a pillow fight 😆 Now that I didnt expect, which made it original, and ooober dooober funny!! I cant believe the child that Geet has turned Maan into - its sooo cuuuute but as if he's ever gonna stop his sexiness? lol Jas - girl u have an Awesome imagination! I laughed, giggled, smiled like crazy, was left eyes wide open at various parts in the chappy!
When he pinned her and actually Asked - "what would u do if i kissed u?" OMG!!!!! My heart was bhangra-ing lol and the fact that he went ahead and did it anyway after her response..?? jeeez Jas, rocking bit!!! Go Maan!! 🥳
and then the next shocker... she slapped him??? TWICE?? 😲 😲 switch to.. "Go Geet!" 🥳
😆 It didnt make anything awkward between them which I thank u for! =D and the slapping also showed Maan that she aint just any other random girl that he can just kiss about (its his Geet - thoda respect kar mundeya! 😛 😆) but still i love super flirty / naughty maan 😉 - i love that u continued to bring out his mischief whilst geet was tryina plaster up his wound (bless her, shes such sweetheart, caring for him! aww! if it were me, i'd probably forget he was in pain and just stare at his gorgeous physique - good thinking though jas, u made her face his back lol) but yeah.. naughty maan telling her it hurt - and then the entire shirt seq after that - Mindblowing! twas hot girly 😳

I was laughing like an idiot with the mention of GC whenever he came up lol and how protective Geet was about GC awww! i would do the same thing though lol
i love that ur geet reads Gurti ff's hahaha and jassssssssssss u mentioned my ff? awwwwwwwwwww!!!! *am pinching ur cheex and then squeezing u in huge hug* lol How much cuter are u gonna get???! I was beeeaming 😆 u could probably guess my infamous *squealing session* began and the big fat grin that ur chapter had caused on my face already, actually grew larger within a split second at that moment! I lovvvvvvvvvvvve you!!!! and I lovvvvvvvve this ff sooo much!
Super-mindblowingly-fantastically-fabulously-insanely-outrageously-A-M-A-Y-S-I-N-N-N-G CHAPTER!
LOVE LOVE LOVED IT!! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

(re: precap... so ur sure this time na - that the engagement topic atleast, will arise lol - cant waitttt!!!xxxxxx)

OMG!!! This is ur new fav chapter!! U dunno how happy u made me My heart is doing Bhangara-MaanStyle rite now!! You never fail to make me happy Saz Di!!

You are also so

'Super-mindblowingly-fantastically-fabulously-insanely-outrageously-A-M-A-Y-S-I-N-N-N-G '

lol

Copied ur words, Sorry!

About the FF part

I dunno why but I felt like I just have to add that in there!

You Are Wonderful Di!!!

BTW Yes the precap will not be postponed again!

lol

Keep leaving your precious commnets!

They mean a lot to me!!

:-)

-Jassi