***ROAD TO LOVE*** (sk ff) pg 89 lst prt - Page 57

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Posted: 14 years ago
continue with the next part as soon as possible,,,,,,,,,plzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
good part,sujal and pratham are such good friends,sujal is confused for kash behaviour,kash is very much happy,theyare going to shooping ,cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

part 45

He comes over in the morning.

She is waiting for him in a white casual shirt & a Capri & he comes over wearing a black shirt & a jeans.

k-chalo aa gaye tum, ye kya black kyun pehen liya? Manhus sa colour, shaadi hai tumhari koi kaala rang pehenta hai kya?

He looks at his shirt blankly, he is completely baffled as he is unable understand her point

k-chalo koi nahi, chalo ab.

They sit in his car & he drives on.

He takes her to a big & lavish designer shop.

s-come

the dresses are lavish thier , stone studded etc etc

kashish is checking the things & the salesman is trying his level bets to convince her.

s comes over to her & whispers after an hour.

s-don't you like anything?

k-i doooo ! [she answers him thoughtfully then whispers in his ears] but yahan sab bohot expensive sa hai

s-that's not a problem

k-naaaaa ! main to yahan se shopping karti bhi nahi, wahan mayor bazaar mein whole sale market hai naa wahan sasta aur kaafi zyada variety bhi mil jayegi.

s-you wanna go there?

She nods

k-ok, lets go there.

Both of them sit in his huge luxury car & head towards the market.

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The place is so crowded & congested aur sujal's car gets badly stuck there.

Bilkul bura wala jam hai, ek to market uske upar log, uske upar cars, uske upar tiny roads uske saath cattles bhi.

Sujal is looking here there to find a way to get his car out of that jam.

s-damn !

they had been stuck there for more than an hour.

Kashish is looking at him.

k-i am sorry.

s-hmm?

k-main tumhe yahan le aai..aur yahan tumhe phasa dia.

s-oh please ! [he rolls his eyes & continues looking at the door]

two hours pass wahin phase pade hain wo log.

Sujal is disgusted by the mismanagement.

The heat is rising, so is his anger & irritation.

He is looking at the road to device some method to get out of this mess.

He looks at his side as he feels ticklish on his cheeks.

Kashish's fingers are slowly rubbing on his cheek & making him feel tickle.

He looks at her to see her grinning at him.

As he looks at her, without he could even understand she plants a juicy kiss on his cheek.

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Posted: 14 years ago
sujal stuck in traffic....................but kashish's way to cool him down was nice........................when will sujal come to know that kashish is happy and loves him equally..................cont soon dear..................
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Posted: 14 years ago
your ff is nice....i specially liked the first few parts of introduction, it's quite different how they meet and slowly came to know each other
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Posted: 14 years ago
traffic jams are really irritating 😆😆😆..........like me sujal also hates it 😆 😆 😆..........
lovely part 👏👏👏👏.............

hope they gonna have more fun on shopping 😉😉😉.......guess this is just the beginning 😛😛😛😛

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Posted: 14 years ago
wowwwwww
very middle classsssssssss ..very meeeeeeeeeee
i meam i also prefer to shop at such places b'coz of variety....n ya cheapr then such highhhhhhhh class showroomab s kya kare agar showroom mein nahi lejata to kaha e jata..ek to janab style marte wahe aaye aur yaha k ko yaha se lena hi nahi.use to use bazr se lna tha..aur dekha jaye use baar jana kafiiiiiiii romatic tha kyun s ;)
well the way u potray difficulties to travel n such markts r jus too gud...u very aptly describe each n every thg...so s get very frustrate n angry by suffer all this .poor him ab ye habitual jo nahi..abhi to middle class logo kafi brave hote hai..wat say..
well k ko bhi realsie horaha hai ki wo use kaha le aayi as he is not used to all this na...but its grt that s doesn't get angry o her..sweet of him as he readily garee to take her in that mkt witout any argument..well reallyyyyyyyyy love the way kash pampering him,touch him,tickle him n last but not he least kissssss him..
like the sentences which she said t him rgd is dress...wo man she is so excited abt this marriage..main bi......................

pls pls cont son ASAP....
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi 😊
the up bohot he baariya haai yaar 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😛😛😛😛😛😛
sujal aur kashish shopping par jaate haai😊😊😊😊😊😊 par kashi ko toh shop mein kuch pasand he nahin aata haai
are usne ke kahene par becchare sujal ko us bheer bhaar bhare market mein jaana paarta haai 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
par kashish what to do she placed a kiss over his cheeks wow😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉
plz ab jaldi se up karna itne dino bad kiya tune up aur haan pm karna
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww such a sweet part thanks a lot
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part loved it cont soon

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