***ROAD TO LOVE*** (sk ff) pg 89 lst prt

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Posted: 14 years ago
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*******ROAD TO LOVE*********

Part 1

Raat ke 12 baj gaye hain. Kashish knows she has to rush to the bus stop fast or she will miss her 12.15 bus. It's the last bus wo bhi miss kar degi to ghar kaise jayegi.

She knows her hectic schedule is taking a toll in her life.

Subah 4 baje utho, khana banao. Narain ke school ke liye taiyaari karo, papa ki savaiyan thik se rakho.

Phir 5 bahe ghar se niklo.

Phir 5.30 se 7.30 ka ek tution jaake padhao.

Uske baad 7.30 se 9.30 jaake padao.

Then her job jo ki 10 baje se sham ke 7 baje tak rehta hai.

7-8 ghar ke lie sabji aur bake saaman lo.

Phir 8 se 10 ek tution, uske baad phir 10 se 12 ek aur tution.

Har din wohi kaam.

Waise kaam se koi aitraaz nahi hai use, bachhcon ko padhana achcha lagta hai use.

Par inn raat ke andhere aur inn sunsaan sadko se ghabraati hai wo.

Kare bhi to kya kare , par sochti hai kuch saalon ki hi baat hai, abhi achche se mehnat karke paise jutaale phir aaraam ki zindagi hogi.

She increases her pace & reaches the bus stop.

Bus stop kea as paas roz ki tarah bilkul andhera hai.

Aas-paas bilkul sunsaan.

Andhere se darti nahi hai wo, par ye bus stop bhi ajeeb jagah hai.

Saamne hi ek bar hai.

Waise zyada farak nahi padta saamne kuch bhi ho, par wo roz dikh jaata hai.

Naajaane kaun hai.

Roz nashe mein dhutt..bar band hone pe bhi nahi nikalta..bar wale nikalate hain.

Pehnta to bada mehenga suit hai, achche ghar ka lagta hai, gadi bhi badi hi hogi.

Kya pata kaun hai, kabhi ankh uthake bhi nahi dekhti wo.

Ba wale sir sir bolke bar se nikaal dete hain, aur wo nashe mein dhutt bass saamne se guzar jaata hai.

Naajaane kyun inn bar walon ne car ki parking thodi durr jaake banai hai, islie roz guzarta hai wahan se wo, apni car tak pohonchne ke lie.

Naajane aisi haalat mein kaise drive karta hoga'job hi hai use kya.

She checks her watch to see ki bus ko aane mein abhi thoda time hai.

She hates waiting there.

She again sees him trying to walk straight with a bottle in his hand.

She looks away from him & crinkles her eyebrows a bit in disgust.

He just looks at that girl, the 'girl at the bus stop'.

He just smirks seeing her expression.

He doesn't know her, but sees her daily standing there.

It seems she hates him'who doesn't?

As if he cares..as if he cares about anyone..as if he cares about the world..as if the world cares about him.

If she can hate him, he can hate her too..he actually likes seeing her snarl in discontempt everyday.

Atleast she shows her displeasure after seeing him..atleast she is not like the pretentious people who backstab you.

She is his very own 'object of hatred'

Her bus comes & stops at the bus stop & his 'girl at the bus stop' cum 'object of hatred' climbs into the empty bus & goes like everyday.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome intro neelu. loved it. keep going.
thnx for the info

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Posted: 14 years ago
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😕😃😃hi 😊
neelu
new fic wowwwwwwwwwww😃😃😃😃😃😃
but yaar yeh kya concept haai😕😕😕😕😕😕😕 kashish subhe 5 baaje nikalte haai aur raat 12 baaje ghar jate haai 😲😲😲😲😲uske ghar mein kya koi aur nahin haai😕😕😕 kya sorry baap toh haai 😊zarur woh bohot he bimar hoga😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
par yaar kashish ko raat 12 baaje bhi tution rahete haai 😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲
strange😕😕😕😕😕😕
par who is this drunken man i think sujal😊😛😉😉😉😉
par yaar sorry agar bura laaga ho toh tere fic haai tohi have given dil kholke aapna maan ke bola haai bura laage toh mujhe forgive kar dena 😊😊😊😊😊😊
aur haan plz jaldi jaldi up likhna kunki mujhe tere is fic ke baare mein jaane ka bohot interest 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊haai kunki i loved ur pkr fic so i think i think this is like pkr 😊
plz cont soon aur haan mujhe pm zarur karna 😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks dear for liking the part aur dil kholke comment karne ke lie bhi, sp thanks to ria. waise imp baat ye hai ki

i am gonna refresh my pm list for this fic please, let me knw if anybody wants me to pm them when i upodate i will add them to my list..thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hiiiiii dear,
yaad hai naa mujhe, dekh main comment karne phir se aa gayi
unique name, Road To Love
interesting hogi, vaise teri har fic interesting hoti hai,pyaar ki rahein se le kar feelings, maine sab fic padha hai.
khair, Kashish insaan hai yaa machine, private tution main bhi karti hoon, but itna, main to saapne main bhi nahin soch sakti, jaise Kashish job karti hai, main job ke liye padhrai karti hoon, isliye busy rehti hoon.
raat ke 12 baje ki bus se ghar lauti hai, bapre, strong character,
vaise Kashish ko uss bar se nikla hua ladke ko dekh kar kuch fadak nahin padhta, par usne uske baare main kaafi kuch notice kar liya, nashe main woh kaise gaari chalata hai uska fikar hai usko,thats great, vaise nafrat bhi ussi se hoti hai, jisse humhara rishta ho
Sujal bhi dekhta hai uski buswali ko, vaise nashe main tunn hai janab lekin Kashish ka expression kaafi acchi tarah se notice kar lete hai, great.
nice start
plz continue soon
Kashish ki bus miss hone ki intezar main hoon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Interesting intro..
Kashish does have a very hectic schedule....not getting any time for herself.
Wainting to know what happens next
please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome part please pm me every time .
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey nice intro yar.................fic name is unique ..................really liked it............but is mein fic ma kashish kisi machine se kam nai itna kaam karti ha woh.....................con't soon dear..............
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Posted: 14 years ago
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A new FF 😃 😃 ..........congrats on starting a new one..... 👏👏👏👏.............. so is it similar to PKR 😃😃😃.........
so first part is good............. 😃😃😃................ hero-heroine making entry in first part itself 😃 😃.......
good to know both SK notice each other presence 😛😛😛😛............ know about each other existence........ 😛😛😛.......
so sujal gona be same as he was in PKR.... 😃😃😃

& kashish wat a busy schedule....... .............

lets see how they meet 4 the first time.............. how they talk to each other 😛😛😛..........

hope they meet soon 😃😃😃😃

continue soon 😃😃😃

Edited by Puri_2711 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Interesting ... waiting for more

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