***ROAD TO LOVE*** (sk ff) pg 89 lst prt

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nilanjana

@NilzStorywriter

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#551

part 44

After the ceremony as everyone leave for their home.

Pratham walks to sujal.

Pr-chal, main chlata hoon. Ab khush naa?

s-pata nahi.

Pr-kya??? Teri shadai ho rahi hai kashish se, tere pyaar se ab bhi tu khush nahi hai?

s-kya wo khush hai?

Pr-kya wo dukhi hai? Mujhe to kisi angle se nahi lagi

s-maine use keh dia hai

pr-ab kya keh dia?

s-yehi ki agar wo mujhse shaadi nahi karna chahti aur ye sagai todna chahti hai to she is free to do so, there is no pressure on her. Wo mujhe mana kar sakti hai.

Pr-arre ! wo mana nahi karna chahti to zabardasti mana karvayega kya? Dekha nahi kitni khus thi.

s-ka pata andar…

pr-kya kare who, stamp paper pe sighn karde. Agar usne tere ye kehne pe mana nahi kiya to iska matlab saaf hai naa ki wo mana nahi karna chahti hai. Mana karna hota to wo khud hi kar deti wo.

S-pata nahi, ek darr hai…

Pr-tu pagal ho gaya hai, chal main chalta hoon. Bye. Aur zyada sochna band kar de too, samjha?

Pr goes.

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Its late night everyone in kashish's house is sleeping.

She slowly picks up her phone & dials sujal's no.

s-hello

k-main bol rahi hoon. Kya kar rahe the?

s-main? Wo…abhi bass aaya tha…was changing…

k-oh itna late?

s-pratham se baat kar raha tha, islie.

k-oh wo tumhara dost, achcha hai wo…pata hai maine to ghar aake change bhi kar liya aur main abhi sone jaa rahi thi, phir socha tumhe phone karke tumse baat kar loon. Tum to kabhi phone karoge nahi naa.

s-wo…

k-waise, achche lag rahe the tum aaj, bohot achche. Waise tumne pucha nahi main kya kar rahi thi?

s-kya kar rahi thi?

k-bed pe lete lete soch rahi thi.

s-ok

k-pata hai kya soch rahi thi?

s-kya?

k-tumhare beere mein soch rahi thi [she looks down as her cheeks turn pink]. Waise pata hai tumhe pata hai parso mehendi hai, phir haldi hai phir shadai hai.

s-hmm

k-to iska matlab hamare paas bas shopping ke lie bass kal ka din hai naa. Achcha, tumne shadai ki shopping kar li?

s-nahi

k-maine bhi nahi, thik hai , ek kaam karte hain kal saath mein chalte hain. Kyun, thik hai naa? Tum kal free ho naa.

s-ok..emm as you say…

she smiles.

k-ok, kuch kaho naa.

s-kya?

K-khair chodo. So jao. Good night. Sweet dreams. Kal subah lene aa jaana mujhe time pe.

s-ok, bye.

k-bye bye.

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

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Posted: 14 years ago

#552

the up is nice

sujal and pratham sach good friend haai

kashish sujal ko saath kal shopping pe chal rahe haai

hmm dekhte haai kya shopping karte haai

plz cont soon and pm me

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Priya

@pinky901

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#553

well i'm jus wondering ki aaj part aayega ya nahi!!

ese hi if par aayi n got ur pm..thank u for that.

well its a nice n cute part

well s ka ye sab sochna sahi hai after all rejection ke baad ese reactions milna k to confusion to hoga na..well really like pratham ans."stamp paper per likh kar de":):)

well ye k ko achanak kya hua ...oh now i get it....use naya naya pyar jo ua hai.hmm ..not bad atall k..dekho normally ladka ladki ko phone karta..aur is case mein s agar k ko phone karta to predictable tha as use clarification chahiye tha....well again its ur fic so k ka s ko phone karna hi banta hai..ulta hi jo hota hai sab..umeed se dugna...well ye k to sach mein pagal ho gayi hai..omg abhi to sirf sagai hui hai aur madam pal pal ki khabar rakh rahi hai..not bad k..well dekho pehle shopping ke liye bhi phursat nahi thi madam ke pass..i men mony prob bhi thina aur ab ab to jamkar shopping karengi madam..after all dulhan hai bhai aur wo bhi s ki..so.....well k order de rahi thi s ko ya puch rahhi thi..bechara na kaise kehta wo bhi k ko..marna thodi tha use bhai wo bhi sirfsagai ke baad....hmm so ab shopping scnes bhi bahut hi funny hoge i guess.so asusual khushi ka intezar jyada nahi hota so..pls cont soon dear..

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Nisha

@nisha1984

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#554

awesome update

Yaar sujal is so confused....

Tell Kashish to express her love so openly than Sujal will understand that she is happy with alliance.

update soon

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bd670816

@bd670816

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#555

awesome update neelu. loved it.
sujal became confused with kashish behavior
hope he didnt cancel the wedding.

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#556

ye sujal ko kya hogaya??????????????? very robotic instead of being romantic..................sab kashish hi kar rahi hai....................whats still confusing him even after pratham telling him the fact..................cont soon dear...................

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#557

Nice part

Pratham ke samjane par bhi Sujal ka confusion clear nahi hua hai. He is still afraid ki kahi yeh khushi uske naseeb se chali na jai. He is not able to believe that this is happening for real.

Kashish is trying to be romantic but sujal toh kuch bol hi nahi raha hai.

please continue soon

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Purnima

@-purnima-

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#558

lovely part 👏 👏👏👏............ & i also wana know sujal ........ how will u beleive that kashish is happy ....... 😆😆😆😆....... stamp paper par likhe 😆😆😆..or should she shout from her roof top 😆😆😆.......... i think its understood from her behaviour 😃😃...........

sujal ki tubelight kyun bhuji hui hai abhi tak ........ he doesnt appear to be excited about marriage 😔.....wats going on in her head 😕😕😕.............

hope everything gets well soon 😛..........
waiting 4 official confession 😉 😉 😉...........

continue soon 😛 😛

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#559

Now wat is this?? Sujal aise silent mode par kyun baat kar raha hai?? I mean....is it a 'yes or no' ques game?? Pratham ne sahi kaha....kashish bechari kya stamp paper me sign karke degi usse?? Jab usse problem thi tab usne kaha tha na.....ab wo kuch nahi keh rahi hai means she doesnt hav a problem now...simple!!

Pls Neelu...Sujal ko sahi kar do....itna kya sochta hai?? Ask him to chillax....see....mere paas sochne ko kitna kuch hai...yet main nahi soch rahi hu....usse bhi kaho....itna na soche...hehe.

Anyways...part was lovely....shopping session seems interesting....and the flow is just perfect!! However this might be my last reply till 1st Dec.....so till then take care...and keep updating!! will read later....hehe.