***ROAD TO LOVE*** (sk ff) pg 89 lst prt - Page 59

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Posted: 14 years ago
wish u a very happy belated birthday........

Really sorry but didnt know it was ur b'day on the 28th.........

Pls forgive us for our mistake.........



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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: storywriter

wow...grt ppl..thanku..sabko update ki padi h...par mera bday tha 28 nov ko...no1 even bothered to wish ...baaki logon ke lie topic bante h...pm milte h..mere lie kuch nhi naa..ye h sabka pyaar...thanks a lot...samaj mein aa gaya mujhe sab...bye bye...mujhe dukh se kehnnaa pad raha h ki...i hate u ppl n u ppl r nt even worth my efforts



Extremely sorry Nilu....wat to do....xam season me mujhe yaad hi nahi raha.....and making a post for u was just not possible...isiliye bas FB par wish kiya....I knw its almost nothing....coz the efforts u put in for us.....is tremendous and we can be called ungrateful in that regard.....but I truly hope u realize our concern is not fake......we can just say sorry....and try to make u blv that we all truly wish u the best.....and hope u hav a lovely prosperous life ahead.....

I knw u r hurt....and its justified absolutely.....still we can just come up wid 'sorry'....and we mean it by every means....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: storywriter

wow...grt ppl..thanku..sabko update ki padi h...par mera bday tha 28 nov ko...no1 even bothered to wish ...baaki logon ke lie topic bante h...pm milte h..mere lie kuch nhi naa..ye h sabka pyaar...thanks a lot...samaj mein aa gaya mujhe sab...bye bye...mujhe dukh se kehnnaa pad raha h ki...i hate u ppl n u ppl r nt even worth my efforts



awww dats sad 😭😭😭😭................. no1 wished u 😭😭😭.............. & haila 😲😲......we share our bday by 1 day difference 😛😛😛...... me 27 & u 28 😆😆😆..........
sowwieee 😭😭..i wud have wished u ..but was away from net for so many days 😕😕😕...cudn't come online 😕😕😕............... but still wishing u a belated happy bday ........hope u had a blast 😊😊😊.... & njoyed ur bday 😃😃😃....
& update soon whenever u free ..... 😉😉.........& whenever ur happy 😆😆😆..... coz i know u cant stay angry much from us 😆😆😆....update toh karna padega 😛😛😛

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: storywriter

wow...grt ppl..thanku..sabko update ki padi h...par mera bday tha 28 nov ko...no1 even bothered to wish ...baaki logon ke lie topic bante h...pm milte h..mere lie kuch nhi naa..ye h sabka pyaar...thanks a lot...samaj mein aa gaya mujhe sab...bye bye...mujhe dukh se kehnnaa pad raha h ki...i hate u ppl n u ppl r nt even worth my efforts

Sorry Dear. We all forgot your birthday and I am really very sorry for that.
All I can do is apologize and will remember your birthday next year..............
Wishing you a belated Happy Birthday Dear.
I hope you forgive me...............
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Posted: 14 years ago

part 46

As he looks at her, without he could even understand she plants a juicy kiss on his cheek.

His ears become warm his cheeks go red.

He just looks at her like an idiot, completely baffled.

She giggles at his expression.

She comes closer to him.

'saab, gaadi chalao !'

She moves away as a an irritated man comes over.

Sujal is still in daze, he just starts car in robotic manner & starts diving.

++++++++++++

They finally go to a shop.

Kashish is eating the head of the sales people.

k-arre iss lehenge se matching si koi sherwani nahi hai kya inke liye?

Sales guy-mam saara dikha diya aapko kuch pasand hi nahi aa raha naa

+++++++++++++++++

They go to another shop

k-bride and groom ke lie lehenga aur sherwaani hai?

Sales man-jii aaiye ana madam kiske naap ka chahie?

k-hum dono ke

sales man-oh dulhe ki kadd-kaathi inke jaise hai?

k-nahi, ye hi dulha hain aur main dulhan

the sales man is baffled that dulha dulhan khud shopping karne aaye hain.

+++++++++++++++

After a loooooooong choosing session , kashish satisfactorily zeroes down on some attire for both.

Her eyes are sparkling with happiness.

But the thing she loved the most were the pair of golden diamond studded heels matching her lehenga that he got for her as a surprise gift when she was busy arguing with the sales man.

She did retaliate saying that the pair was too costly but she knew he was most stubborn when it came to her & it was useless arguing with him.

So she kept them happily, & now she was proud of her prized possession gifted by her would be husband.

Oh she so felt like cindrella when she looked at those pair.

She was soooooo very lucky to have him in her life, he made her feel like a princess.

++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

It was the mehandi ceremony.

Kashish was wearing a lilac coloured light yet gorgeous sari that he chose for her.

A woman is applying mehendi on her hand.

Woman-mehendi kitni gehri rchti ha use pata chalega ki aapka dulha aap se kitna pyaar karta hai.

K chuckles.

k-wo to mujhe pata hai, pura bharosa hai mujhe

woman-achcha, waise ab aapke hone wale unka naam likhne ki abari hai. Iss akshar se shuru hota hai unka naam?

k-S se.

woman-achcha, yahan likh deti hoon S. unko aapki mehendi mein dhundna hoga.

k-nahi pura naam likh do nss 'Sujal', aur mehendi ke desihn ke andar bohot saare 's' ke patterns bana dena.

The woman is also surprised after hearing her demand.

++++++++++++++++++++++

S-hello

k-hello, kya kar rahe ho?

s-just had food

k-pata hai badi mushkil se phone kar rahi hoon, bohot log hain ghar mein. Chup chup ke phone kar rahi hoon, warna kaun dulhan ko aise akela chodke phone karne deta hai. Achcha suno ek baat, pata hai tumhe mujhe aaj mehendi lagai achchi se, pata hai mehendi mein tumhara naam bhi likha, aur pata hai mehendi mein tumhara abam bhi likha.

s-mera naam?

k-haan, aur pata hai tumhe naa meri mehendi mein apna naam dhundnaa hai. Suno, jaldi se apna naam dhund lena , lallu ki tarah baithe mat rehna. Maine islie tumhara naam bohot saari jagah likhwaa lia hai.

Sujal smiles.

s-ok, I will try my best.

k-achcha suna, ek baat

s-haan bolo

k-pehle bolo, gussa to nahi karoge naa.

s-gussa? Kyun?

k-nahi, pehle bolo ki nahi karoge

s-nahi pehle tum baat batao

k-hmm…pata hai main naa parlour jaungi sajne shaadi ke lie

s-haan to

k-to ye…kiiiiiiiiii……tum naa jab apni sherwani pehenlo naa bass those se kaam karna

s-kaam? Kaise kaam?

k-emm..ye ki..naa…first apna face achche wash karna phir thoda sa foundation laga lena, thoda eyes highlight karne ke lie zara sa mascara and just a base of face powder.

s-whattttttttttttttttttttt?????????????

Sujal jumped as if kashish ne naa jaane kya keh dia ho.

Her heart skips a beat hearing his reaction.

s-kya????? Foundation?????? Powder????? Mascara?????? Main?????

k-aur kya? Shaadi karne jaa rahe ho tum….thoda to..

s-NO !

k-pleaseeeeee !!!!!

s-NO !

k-arre foundation, powder to normal hai aur zara sa mascara bas jisse photographs achchi aaye aur tumhari ankhein thodi highlighted ho jayein

s-i said NO !

k-arre kauns main tumhe lipstick lagane ko keh rahi hoon, jot um use lagake alag dikhne lagoge.

s-i have answered you already ! [he says strictly]

k-fine ! jo karna hai karo ! bye main phone rakh rahi hoon

s-ok bye

he hangs up the phone.

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Posted: 14 years ago
phewwwww finally;)))
yaar is bande ko bhi abhi tapkna tha.waise itne der wait kar raha tha jam main thod der aur nahi kar sakta..yaar kitna acha sa scne hone wala tha but aur ye sujl mahashye ye to hamesha blank ho jate h jab k saamne hoti hai tb...well chalo ab scene to kharab ho hi gaya..par ye acha hai ki shopping dashu hogayi ..yaar itni jaldi lehga aur baaki sab select kar liya i mn mujhe to laga 1 eek lag jayega mam ko shopping karte karte..after all s-k i shadi haii....well i also lk the lovely gesture frm s for k..yaar chahe wo blak ho par apna pyar jatana janta hai..kaise uske liye sandal liye usne i sure she feels lk cidrella n she lks lik 1 also..
well sai mehndii wali advice de rahi thi aur k ne uski bolti hi bandh kar di..aaj kal ki dulhan jo hai ...bechara sujal ab wo bedke apna naam hi dhundhta reh jayega kyounki sari jagah s jo likha diya.hai..
lk the scene where k called s n talked abt mehndi n all. sai h use advice de rahi hai to find the name jaldi taki time waste na ho;))
ye k to kfi aage h s se but i really luv her.n .s-k in this fic..
well last scene is very very hillarious bechara ko kya kya karna padega apni shadi par..hmm maza aayega jab actual main wo ye sab laga kaar ready hoga after all uski to chalni nai na...use ye sab to karna hoga..
very well part dear
kitne dino k baad ye fic padne ko mili...pls cont soon na...i wanna see more of s-k romantic scene jo ki k ki wajah se possible o payenge
wat say;)))
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Posted: 14 years ago
are 😊
finally finally mere neelu jeee aa gaye😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
welcome back 😊😊😊😊😊
waise itne dino bad up kiya haai toh aacha toh hona he chaheye tha 😉😉😉😉😉😉😉
coming to the up
it is really sweet😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
kashish kissed on sujal's cheek 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳aur sujall toh ek haairaan ho jaata haai 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
but before they could cheerish the moment😳😳😳😳😳😳😳 waha us irritating man aa jaata haai😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡
i wan to kill him
anyways ab shaadi hone balle haai aagge zarur aase ya phir isse zada kuch dekhne ko milega hume😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉
toh kashish ke mehendi ceremony ho gaye 😊😊😊😊😊
aur kashish ne aapne haatho mein sujal ka naam bar bar likhne ko kaha 😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛
par yeh kashish sujal ko mascara aur pata make karne ko kun kahe rahe haai 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
she is really crazyyy man😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
but i like her like she is😊 and i know sujal also like her like me 😉😉😉😉
plz ab jaldi se cont soon karna aur pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
Firstly...its gr8 to see u bak dear....and the update is surely a bonus!!

However the scene started very nicely....was abt to start sum romantic sequence btwn Sujal n Kashish....but no....wo idiot aa gaya....I mean....c'mon u fool...cudnt u find any other way round....huh!!

However....their shopping session went nice....but wat was the salesman's problem if the bride n groom hav cum for shopping themselves....bhai unki shaadi hai....haq hai unka.

And next...mehendi ko lekar Kashish ka demand kaafi pyara tha....and after she called Sujal....we cud sumhow knw its reason as well....par haan....maskara?? Lolz....baki ka sunne ke baad...I was like...OK....but ye wala to zabardast tha....lets see wat happens next!!

Hope u continue soon dear....and once again welcum back dear!! Sorry to hurt u as well...😕
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Posted: 14 years ago
hello dear................so glad to have u back...................
wish u a Merry Christmas....................
lovely part dear......................
kashish is so much into the marriage par sujal is still yet to.................
cont soon dear...................
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Posted: 14 years ago
firstly welcome bak 🤗...........was such a releif to see u bak 😃😃😃😃........ it was really a christmas surprise 😃😃😃..... priya & i were planning to send request to santa 😉😉😉....

as 4 part .... i had to read previous part again 😆😆😆.......
overall part was bfully written 👏👏👏👏...... guess sujal wanted to kill that man 😆😆😆😆......loved SK shopping sequence 😃😃😃

mehndi scene was alos written nicely 👏👏👏....... sk convo was 😆😆😆.lovely ...i guess Sujal got heart attack 😆😆😆.......... by kashish demands 😆😆😆..lets see if he fulfills them 😍.........

will wait to see the dulha 😳😳😳.so continue sooner this time 😃😃😃...
& yes once again belated happy bday ... i am exactly 1 month late 😆😆😆😆

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