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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
thank u 4 ur warmly response.. i want to ur opinion, thats why i update my ff slowly. but i'll continue it in a week..there is my next part..

Part 5

Next morning, geet is ready for her office. She is so happy today..because she get her salary advance, which is needed for her family. Geet is very thankful to maan's dadima. She told herself: aise insaan bohut kam milte hain aaj kal. Such me dilli ki log bohut dillwala hoti hain. Onki pouta v onki tara acha hogi. Main bohut lucky ho, mujhe aise boss mile. She's also thankful to ALLAH. Suddenly, rana enters her room, he look at geet very romantically. This is very annoyed to geet? She try to leave, rana stop her & ask her where r she going? Geet told him that its her office time,& she wants to leave. Rana told her, I need some money advance & I heard u get your salary advance?? Geet give him some money, without say anything & leave.

Maan in his office. Dadi call him & said, aaj apki jindagi me kuch naya honewali hain.. ummid karte ho ye apki zindagi badal dege.

Maan said: dadima, aaj aisa keya naya hone wali hain? Waise v main jaisa ho kush ho, mujhe badal neke koi jarorat nahi…

Dadi smiled & said: jantiho, liken thora aap agar badle tu asmaan fat nahi jayega aapki sar par. Aaj apki new assistant anewali hain, or main chateho aap oski sath de.hamesha ki tara galti mat donna.

Maan said, main janti ho aap keya kehna chatehe, mujhe v sokh nahi, bina wajase apna employee ko dato. Waise aap ki naya employee abhi tak aye nahi, or apto jante hain, mujhe late aana pasand nahi.

Dadi: maan, pher soru ho gayee aap? Naya hain, samaj ne thora waqt to lage ga. Maan said: acha abhi rakti ho, sam ko milte hain.

Geet reach the office, she's so excited. A girl told her that mk sir is waiting for u. geet enters the room, and said: good morning sir. Maan standing & check a file, geet stand behind him. Maan said very roughly, ""mujhe time se pehle ana or time ki baad aana log pasand nahi.. ajj ki baad ye baat yaad rakh na"..geet quite nervous to hear this & said, yes sir main yaad rakhongi. Maan look back & shocked. Geet also shocked to see him, she feel earth quake under her feet. Both r remember their first meet. After few second maan blast: tum! Tum mere assistant ho? Aisa ho nahi sakta. Tumhari himmat kaise hoye mere office me aneke? Os dinn drama karke jee nahi bara ki aaj mere office me agaye. Geet try to say some thing, but maan stop her& said, chup , ek v sabd nahi, osdin bohut bol leya. Tum jaise ladki ko agar koi muka deya, tu tum oski fayda othateho. Liken ye tumhari bazaar nahi ki tum tamasha khari karogi, ye maan shohrab khan ki office hain yeha main jo bolti ho ohi hota hain.geet could not control herself now & said: bas ek aur sabd nahi, main nahi janti thi ki ye aapki office hain, agar mujhe bata hota tu main kabhi nahi aati. Maan screamed: o really! Tumhe nahi bata tha. Kitna bhooli ban rahi ho tum. Main janti ho tum mere office me janbojkar aye ho taki tum mujhe pereshan kar sako. Tumhari ye irada kamiyab nahi hogi. He called secuirity, when they enter his cabin, he said: madam ko bahar ki rasta dikha do. Geet really shocked then said, koi jarorat nahi main khud chali jaonge. Liken ek baat kehna chahongi aap se aapki ye attitude apki opar ek din vari paregi. Allah kare koi v insaan ko aap jaisa boss, ya apne na miley. Kuki aap kisi v reshtey ki leye layek nahi. Aap keya mujhe nikalengi , main is nokri ko chor kar ja rahi ho kuki main aap jaisa matlabi insaan ki sath kam nahi kar sakti. Maan is very surprised, geet leave his office.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
awesome update...really nice
you r really good....i loved it
maaneet so adorable...
keep writing
and waiting for next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
Thats Awesome Dear
Loved it
Thanq so much for the PM
Pls Update Soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
lovely please do continue
n add me in pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
awesome part
loved it
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
Great start!!
Do cont.soon!!
Pls add me to ur PM list!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
wow that was great plz cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
loved it....... continue soon.... add me in ur pm list plssss..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
hehehe loved geet's words
nice update
cont soon
love
Noor
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
AWESOME👏 PLZ ADD ME TO UR PM LIST😊

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