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Posted: 14 years ago
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great update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
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Lovely update plzzz update sooon and thanks for pm
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Part 4

Next morning, geet reached in office.. she looks very tense. She's thinking about her family. Maan's dadi notice that, she call her when geet enter her cabin dadi asked: keya hoa tumhe? Tum bohut pereshan lag rahi ho? Geet said: kuch nah imam o aaj mera pehla din hain na office me, is leye thora tense ho..dadi try to relax her & said, tumhe tense hone ki koi jarorat nahi.. tum mere poute ki assistant ho, sab tumhe help karegi.. so don't worry..

Geet smile slowly..geet: jaise mera kaam kya hogi mam?

Dadi: jada kuch nahi hain , sirf tum oski sath rehna or ohi karna jo tumhe sahi lage.. main tumhe ye nahi kahongi ki jo mere poute kahe sirf o karna. Jante ho o bohut jeddi hain,jo karna chahtahe o kartahe..leken mujhe tum par pura vorosa hain, kit um samal logi.

Geet: main pore kousish karongi.aaj agar sir office aye hain to main unse milte ho. Sayed onki koi kaam ho.

Dadi: are nahi nahi, aaj o office nahi aya , kisi kaam se out of delhi gaye.. tum kal mill le na. geet agree leave..

Geet in her cabin& finished her work..its already 6 o'clock in evening. Dadi enters her cabin & look at her. Geet stand up & said, good evening mam. Kuch chaheye aapko mujhe bola lete main aa jata.

Dadi: nahi kuch khass nahi, main aise tumhe dekhne aye thi.. waise tum benglore se aye ho na ? kaun kuan hain tumhari ghar me?

Geet: meri ghar me meri bare bhai or dadi hain.. mom & dad to bohut pehle gujar chuke hain. Suddenly geet remember her family & sad.

Dadi: I m sorry.. waise mera v chota family hain, main or mere pouta, baki sab apne log to ja chuki hain.. choro ye sab, subha se dekh rahi ho tum mujhe kehna chahteho? Keya baat hain?

Geet feel very hasitate,she don't know how to share her problem with dadi.. afterall its her first day in this office..

Geet: mere ghar me kuch problem hain, jo solve karne ki eye paise chaheye,liken samaj me nahi aa rahi hain mange kaise karo.

Dadi smile & said: ye baat hain, tum accounts se paise le sakti ho.

Geet: nahi main kaise lo, aaj to mera pehle din hain..

Dadi: to keya hoa? Tum advance salary le saktiho.. mujhe tum par pura vorosa hain, tum ye job imandari se karoge.. dadi gives her money and leave..

8 o'clock at night, msk back in delhi. He drives his car. Suddenly the car stop on the road. He could not start his car.. he come out of the car, and check the engine.this is very dark night, no light,& people on this road.. he become angry. Suddenly he heard a scream, he turn back & look, a girl is running, he come forward. They r bumping each other, but they could not each other, because her face covered with duppatta. The girl hold his coat & said, mujhe bachaiye, after few seconds she run again. Maan could not understand anything. Then he sees some mad dogs r coming, maan understand situation, he take a branch of a tree, which he find out the road side. He protest the dogs very nicely.. and all dogs run away.. maan call the driver & order him to bring a car for him..

When maan reached the home, dadi is very pleased to see him..dadi told him that she select a assistant for him.. maan is give quite smile to hear this& said: main jante ho aap jo karte hain, bohut achi tara karte hain..thanx a lot.. maan enter his room, when he change his dress he notice, a bracelet is hanging his shirt buttons. He's very shocked to see this. He thinking, where it is come from? Then he remember that girl who hold his coat.. maan remove this, from his shirt and keep it safely..ree &

I hope u lyk it.. pls comments.. and EID MUBARUK TO ALL..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey...that was nice update...

really liked it...keep writing 👏👏👏👏

and eid mubarak 2 u 2
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Posted: 14 years ago
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really nice
and kher mubarak🤗
have a lovely eid
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome update
loved it
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
happy eid 2 u 2
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Thats Awesome👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Daadi is soooooooooo Sweet😃
wow Maan helped Geet but they did not see eachother.
Eagerly Waiting for the next part
Pls Update Soon
🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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sounds interesting. plz add me to ur pm list

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nice plzzz add me to ur pm list
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wow that was nice one can u plz add me in pm list

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