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Posted: 14 years ago
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interesting!!!!

update sooN!!!

add me to ur pm list!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey guys today i will update next part.. i just wanna see how many of ur like my ff.. thanx for ur response.. pls continue comments...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey guys i uploaded part 2 here. hope u lyk it.perdon me any mistakes.

part 2

khan mention, maan taking breakfast with his dadi. dadi notice he try to complete his breakfast very firstly..dadi ask maan, kaha ja rahi hain aap maan? O v itni subha? Maan told her, I have to attend an urjent meetimg in mumbay today. And my flight is 9 o 'clock. Dadi said, today we call an interview for your assestant, Maan said, I know but I have to go there, u will select my assestent. Afterall u r the chairman of the khan employees. Dadi lough and said, ha ha apki leye main assistant select karo, or ladki v..maan correct it and said, sirf assistant select karna office ki leye.otna kafi hain.. dadi give him very annoyed expression.. maan leave, dadi said herself, ladki donne ki kam main juror karongi. kash ek kam se do kam ho jati...

geet stand by a road, waiting for a taxi. Priya's cousin live in chadnichock, geet will live there as a paying guest. Geet is thinking her family, suddenly she saw a child crossing the road, and a black car comes very firstly, geet run & try to save the child, but they both r stand middle of the road like a statue. The car stop very hardly in front of them. An young man come out of the car.. he wear a black suit, his eyes r so attractive, but now its burning coz of anger.

Geet open her eyes & see the man. After eyelock geet starting to scream on him.

Geet: andha hain keya? Aise koi road pe gadi chalate hain ya? Apni baap ka road samaj kar rakha? Shut up, the man also screaming. Ek to signal na man kar road cross kar rahi ho oparse mujhe sona rahi ho. How dare u?

Geet is surprised to hear this, she notice some people r gather to see their fight.

Geet: keya olta chor kotowal ko date. Sona aap logo ne, ye janab itni fast car chalare thi, agar main nahi ati to is bache ki jaan leke jati. Oparse mafi mangne ki bajay mujhko datt rahi hain.

Man: mafi kis baat ki, tum achank meri gadi ki samne aye ho. Dekho ye drama band karo or jao. Bohut achi tara janti ho tum jaise ladkeo ko.

Geet: keya kaha? Main drama kar rahi ho, ye mr main aise waise ladki nahi samji,finger point to the man.waise main tunhe kue safai de rahi . ab tum safai deogi police ki samne. Jab police ka danda pakregi na tab tumhari akal thikane pe ayegi.

Man: mujhe police ki damki mat dao samji. Ane do police ko tum jaise ladki ko lockup me rakhna chaheye.

Geet: you.. geet wants to slap him. But traffic police reached there, try to control the situation.

Police check the driving liesance of the man. Police shocked to see the man name. his name is maan shorab khan.

Police: sir aap? Sorry main aapko pehchana nahi.

Maan: its ok. Waise v mujhe pehchane se jada aapko dosro ko pehchana jarori hain, to give angry expression to geet.

Police: aap jaye main samalte ho.

Geet: are aise kaise jane de isko to jail me dalna chahehe, and tring to catch maan's hand. But police stop her.

Maan: tumhari itni himmat. Tumhe to main, he's shaking by

Anger. Maan remember his flight and turn back, with his car & go.

Geet: are ye to chali gayi. She look at the police, and told him, tumhe keya police banaya in amiroka golami karne ki leye, namakol wardi ottarkar feq de. And she leave the place with so many sadness.

This is the first time they met each other. But a war starting between them unknowingly.

Edited by reea88 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome update
loved it
can't believe first meeting and already fighting
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thats Awesome
And its so interesting
Thanq so much for the PM
pls continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Woow lovely plzz update soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 3

Geet reached in priyas cousin's house. Her name is sonu, she's very bubbly always want to fun with others. Her husband name is rana he is such kind of character loss. He loves girl, except his wife.. they both r welcome geet warmly. after one hour, geet prepared herself for interview, and leave..

Maan reached in mumbay,& attend his metting. But he looks very angry and everybody very tense about it.. maan is thinking about geet & her attitude.

Maan thought: iss ladki ki himmat to dekho isne mujhe thappar marne ki koushis ki. Agli bar jab milonga na tu is attitude ki kimat osse chukka na parega. Again maan repeat, kue main iss ladki se milna chataho, aise

Jangli billi se humesha dor rehna chaheye. Allah kare, aise nachari & bettomiz ladki se main kabhi na milo. He finished the meeting, then go to the hotel for rest.

Geet is sitting in a waiting room, she looks quite nervous. Suddenly, a girl call her name & said, u can go inside. Geet enter a big room, a lady & some employees sitting in front of her.

A lady who wear a white saree look at her, and ask her question. Geet give all answer very smartly. The lady means maans dadi very pleased to her. She said, u can join next day,& give her appointment letter. Geet is very happy & give thanx to her. When she reached house, she call her dadi and give this news. Her dadi's sound looks like very scary, geet understand something is wrong. Geet ask her dadi, keya hoa dadima? Dadi said, preet ki tabiat bohut kharap hain, ose achi treatment ki jarorat hain, liken paise nahi hain, beta kuch v karke tere salary agar advance milake vezna. Geet is so worried about it. She disconnect the phone & started crying.. she told herself kaise main manage karo itne paise, main to abhi tak join v nahi keya. Bina kaam karke kaise paise lo??? Aisa kue ho rahi hain mere sath.? Suddenly she wipes her tears & said, nahi main kamjoor nahi ho sakti mujhe kuch v karke mere vai ki jindagi bachana hain.

Maan lay down on his bed, but he could not stop thinking about geet. And he's very angry about it. He called his friend dev, & told everything. Dev surprised to hear this. He tease maan & said,pehli baar maan tumne kisi ladki ki bajase tense ho, lagta hain ab tum par ladki asar parna soro ho gaya, waise dekhte kaise hain o bohut khubshorot? Maan blust like fire & said, maan ki opar kabhi kisiki asar nahi parte, khas kar ladkiya to bilkul nahi .koi maan ko badal nahi sakta, maine galti ki tumhe bata kar, vul gaya tha ki tum ladkio ki taraf jaogi. Jaha ladki woha tum, maan cut the phone & said, I need a meditation to solve this problem. And start meditation'

Edited by reea88 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update
loved it
feel so bad for geet
love what dev said to maan
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thats great yaar
Geet is appointed wow
Ab kya hoga jab Maneet saamne ayenge?
Jaldi update karna plz
Thanq so much fo rthe PM dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey just finished reading first part it was fab...awesome....keep writing plz update soon
and also plz add me to ur pm list thx 😊

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