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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
your ff is really refreshing!!
could you plz add me to your pm list?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow thats Awesome
Thanq so much for the PM
Loved it
pls continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
fabulous!!!!

cant wait precap is too interesting!!!


update sooN!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shivangi783

The update was fab 😊
Loved it...
Precap seems very interesting!
Update soon....

thanks soo much and to tell the truth i dont even nw how the pre-cap will happen, i just wanted it to be catchy!!! 😉 bt im sure i will think of sumthing!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonnal_17

i can just say wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow..... amazing yar i love the fights between maan and geet.... i love ur ff... its too good... thx

thanks 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 6
soon pinky and geet get settled into the hostel room

pinky: look i have got ur schedule, so u have one class wid me, arts and hmmm u have got one class wid me and dev, scince and omg wot do i c u hve two classes wid maan

geet: maan

pinky: look geet i nw maan is a hard person to handle, bt if u will get to nw him u will like him

geet thoted: i do already like him... yeh maine kya kah rahi hoon

pinky: helow---

geet: yea... hmmm well i got to nw him alot in the last day

pinky starts to laugh: anyways ur classes start form tomorrow so u beta get a gud nite sleep today as the 1st day is always a hassle

geet: yea pinky, and thank you so much

pinky: dere is no thank u or sori in friendship...

geet smiled: wot do u think my brother will be dping after they hve figured out im in hp anymore...?

pinky: they would have gotten ready to hunt u down and kill you

geet looked afraid

pinky: oh plz dey cant hurt u here... dey dont even nw where u r... nw quite thinkin about al this

maan and dev in thier hostel room

dev: maan u shouldnt be so harsh on geet she is new here...

maan: wot did i say to her?

dev: well callin her names isnt gud...

maan: i didnt cal her anything.. it was sasha... and yes be sasha i remeber... it dumpin time

dev: god this is was stupid

maan: wot

dev: pinky won again

maan: would u guyz stop beting on my love life...

dev: as soon as u fall in love wid sum1 whomn u wont leave

maan: oh well i will be back

dev: where u goin?

maan: to break up... gosh this is so sad (maan starts to laugh)

dev: oh god

maan leaves his hostel room and calls sasha bt she doesnt pick up... and decides to wait till infornt of the gurl hostel and txts her

pinky: hey geet i didnt ask you, how did u find dev?

geet: it is reali sweet, bt he seems like a easy person to get talked into

pinky: wot do u mean

geet: well u how i was at maans house and dev wanted to talk to maan i accdently hit the speaker button and herd them talkin about sum stripper party

pinky: wot stripper is dat wot, dev was hiding 4om me

geet: look dont get mad at dev, bt maan

pinky: look i nw wot to do...

pinky calls dev

pinky: tum stripper party.... *sniff sniff*

pinky acts as if she is cryin bt instead she is smiling wid geet, and hang the fone up

suddenly pinkys fone rings again it is dev she doesnt pick up and shut her fone down

geet: yeh kya ta?

pinky: bt doin this dev will knw dat nuthing can hide 4om his gf... so form on nw he wont do anything like dat and instead i will get chocolates and/or presents 4om him

geet: ur soo bad!

pinky laughs and soon pinky falls asleep bt geet cant sleep she gets up and decided to drink sum water bt sees there is no water so she decides to go to the wending machince out side her hostel

dev calls maan: maan why on the earth would u wana tell pinky about the stripper party?

maan: wot i didnt tell her anything, infact i didnt even goo

dev: niether did i, bt she thinks i went, and nw she is mad and wont pick her fone up... i just wana nw who told her

maan who was outside the gurl's hostel to meet sasha saw geet infornt of the wending machine

maan: oh i nw who mite hve told pinky

dev: reali who?

maan hungs up and screams: HEY YOUUUUUUUU

lookin at geet 'i cant belive u would do this maan runs in anger towards geet

and geet who had no idea wot happened to him, bt he looked veri angry which made her scared and so she started running as well

geet: hai babaji wot happened to him, plz save me, i was rite da 1st time i saw and wot i thot was correct he is a luntic... shahid yeh raat ka pagal hai jab bhi is ko raat ko milthi hoon toh yeh pagal pagal lag ta hai

maan run veri fast behind geet and geet tried runnin even faster.. bt she was in no faster then him, bt geet tried and ended up on an empty groud... geet couldnt ran any more so she just stood thier tryin to catch her breathe wen maan in full speed fell on her...

geet shut her eyes titely and maan just got lost in her beauty he had forgotten why he was runnin after geet in the 1st place as he had gotten so mezmerized in her beauty maan slowly moved her hair strand off of her face and geet slowly opens her eyes and sees maan starin at her and she also gets lost in his eyes both stay like dat for a long time (a force of habbit-- mahi) winds start to blow heavly makin geet blink her eyes bt maans eyes were wide open

geet looks away and maan relizes wot is happening and den he gets up 4om her bt both r still sitting on the ground

geet: should i call a doctor?

maan looks at her in anger

geet: okay no doctor... do u hve any medince to take?

maan: wot r u talking about?

geet: about ur healt, geet puts her hand on his shoulder

maan: wot is worng wid my healt

geet: about ur mental state at nite time...

maan: my wot at wot times

geet: like u nw how u kinda go insane on me veri nite

maan: geet mujhai lagta hai ka tum pagal ho gi ho

geet: look maan the 1st nite we met, u were talkin loud and to urself, secound nite u purposely hit me wid ur ppouching bag and nw u ran after like a total insane crazy person

maan starts to laugh

geet thinks: bechara

maan: plz i nw wot u r thinking... and i m nt a insance crazy person, the 1st nite i thot ur bf had stood u up after u eloped form ur house ro sumthing and i was talkin lous cuz i thot u were deaf and secound nite i didnt hit u purposely it was a mistake and as for nw why did u tell pinkyyy about the partyyyy u nw how sad a depressed dev is... like he reali lovs pinky

geet: and pinky loves dev dats y she did all this, cuz she doesnt want dev doing this again dats y she talked to him, and i m preaty sure by tommorow dey will be fi9 wid one another

sori to leave liek dat my laptop battery is deing anways will update at least how thier nite ended by today so plz keep checking... and thanks for the lovely comments <3 u all

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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
nice uodate....thanks for the pm....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
wow thats lovely
Geet telling Maan that his mental state is not good is so hilarious
Loved it
Thanq so much for the PM
pls continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
it was lovely update it soon honry thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
nice update mina
will be waiting for the nexr part

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