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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
great update
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon
cant wait to read da nxt part
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
heyy..u left it at such an intersitn part..continuee soon!!
thanks alot for the pm('',)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice 😊
Please PM me wen you update next....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 4
recap: maans fone rings it is pinky cells maan is anger shuts his fone down

and leaves 4om his room to dadi

maan: dadimaa i dont understand y do hve to insult me infornt of my friends

dadi: so geet is ur friend ha?

maan: no how about my people i nw... like so embrasing dadimaa im growned up nw incase u didnt notice

dadimaa goes to maan and pulls his checks reali hard: bt u will always be my babyy

geet cums up 4om da back and shly enters into thier convo: so sweet

maan: HOW... WOTTT

dadi: lower ur voice maan she is a guest and she doesnt hve any clothes..... i will go and check on the progess of the food as geet u must be hungry 4om ur long trip

dadi leaves and maan angryly moves towards geet and geet takes steps back

geet: woh meri kaprey ganda ta toh dadimaa kay pass saree thi... toh main woh

maan: and u thot u could wear MSK's clothes? maan moved for forward geet

geet: msk?

maan: MAAN SINGH KHURANA...veri gurls dream

geet: nt my dream... and 4get this... abhi kuch dar phela toh bara lecture day raha tha about how nt to lie and all... y didnt u tell dadi wot u were about to do to da dog and how the car banged into a tree??

maan: for the same reason and she is my dadimaa... dont call her dadimaa and take my clothes off

geet: wot

maan: yes...

geet luked at him nervously

maan: i mean i want dem 1st thing 2morrow... got dat

geet just noded her head

maan: 4om nw on dats wot i do like u to do just nod ur head into everthing i say... got that as well??

geet: x-cuz me bt im GH... geet handa and i dont nod my head infornt of useless people like u... and for ur clothes i m nt giving dem back... as they are veri comfortable... nw did u get datt???

maan didnt nw how to answer her nw

geet: dats beta mr. msklmnopqrstuvw and sum radom x-y-z

maan got realii madd and concerned her into a pillar: do u reali think standing in my house you will be able to insult me and i will take dat??

maan moved his head down close to geets face and whispers: tell me do you?

geet in a low voice: dadi

maan: hmmm

geet: dadi maa is rite there

maan lets go of her, and geets escapes from his embrace and ran towards where dadimaa had gone and turned back once and stick her tongue at maan and again started running....

maan: AHHH dat gurl I... I... GODD WOT SHOULD I DO???

geet goes to dadimaa who is in the kitchen, and she smells sumthing as burned and dadimaa was yellin sum1

geet: kya hua dadimaa

dadi: dekh na geet if u dont supervis these servants for a sec luk wot do they

geet luked the rice and they were all burned

dadimaa: now why r u standing go i will make sumthing myself

geet: arey dadimaa ap kyun khana paka yan gi im here na, i will make the food

dadi: u nw how to cook?

geet: i bet nt as well u do, bt i can try sumthing... nw plz leave and i will bring the food in 30mins

dadimaa: okay betaa

geet got busi cookin and soon she put everything on the table and called dadimaa

dadimaa cum in and saw that geet had made bryani and allo ghust wid a lovely plate of salad, which had dressin on it

dadi: yummy... da smelll is soooo gud... i just cant wait to eat itt

geet: i hope u wil like it

just then maan enters... so maan, dadi and geet start eating

maan: wow dadimaa scince wen did this stupid cheif begin to cook soo well

geet smiled and luked at dadi

dadi: yes food is reali gud bt it is nt by the---

maan: AND WOWW this salad is amazing... like it is dammm awsum i hve neva eaten anything else like this

soon dadimaa had finished: kids im reali sleepy, so im goin to sleep, geet u will sleep in the room next to maans... where u took a shower dear.. anyways gud ntie kids

dadi was about to go wen she saw maan was still eating

dadi: and yes geet thank u for the wonderful food

maan: y r u thanking geet

dadi: cuz geet cooked it, the so called stupid chief had burned at the food we were suppose to eat... anyways gud nite kids

geet smiled at maan... she was siting rite across form him

maan: the food is okay it is nt...

geet: maan thank you

maan: no thank youuu, i have eaten beta food

geet: well few mins ago this was dammmmm awsum and u had eaten nuthin like it

maan: just

geet: just

maan: just buzz off and go and sleep

geet: why r u ashamed to eat infornt of me... nw dat u nw i have cooked the food??

maan: no im done eating and i m goin to sleep as well

geet: gr8

they both got up and went to thier rooms

geet went and layed on the bed and she herd loud tumb dumm voice she got sacred and went to of her room

geet: yeh kya awaz maan ka room se aa rahi hai? geet knocked on the door bt no answer onli the voice got louder

geet: hai baba g wot is he doing??

geet couldnt stand it any longer and pushed opened his door and saw him punching his punching bag

maan stoped as he saw her: u dont u hve any manner about knocking on the door

geet: and dont u hve any manners?

maan: awsum the gurl who makes me get into a accident and wears my clothes is askin if i have any manners or not amazingg

geet takes a step forward in his room and then puches is bag reali hard makin the impact of the bag goin more away from him... which hit the head of geet and she colpase on the floor

maan hurried towards her: omg r u okay... geet get upp geettt

geet opened her eyes and saw her head was in maans lap and geet started crying and stood up on her feet... felt dizy and was about to fall again bt maan caugth her 4om her wasit

' u r nt a nice person' geet said in dizyness

maan: if i werent nice i would have let u drop on the floor again

geet held her head in her hand

maan knew she wasnt in her full enegry or he would have gotten his answer

maan picked her up in her arms and placed her on his bed

geet opened her eyes: i will screamm...

maan: wot?

geet tryin to rasie her voice to the maxium: dadii

maan quickly placed his hand over her mouth: wot r u doinn

geet: mmmmmmmmmmmmm...mmmmm

maan: i will let go if u promise not to scream

geet nodded her head, maan smiled and let go

geet sat up on his bed still rubbin her head: how dare u.. tumne mujha... kasey main abhi ja ka dadimaa ko

maan: dadimaa ko kya? dat u were about to fall and i saved u 4om the fall, is dat wot u will tell dadimaa...

geet luked down: no i will tel dadimaa how u hit me wid the punching bagg

maan: and i will dadimaa how a young gurl as urself was in a dashing boys room,, and who even entered witdout knocking

geet couldnt stand it anymore: well u were so inconsiderated and had punchin so loud which couldnt make me sleep...

maan: well i dont like guests

geet: ohh and i didnt even want to be ur guest unless pinky had cum...

geet and maan both luk at each other and 2gether say: pinky.. omg pinky

maan: i will call her rite away

pinky: MAAN U ASSHOLE where did u take my friend?? AND WHY WAS UR FONE SWITCHED OFF?? I HAD CALLED SOO MANY TIMES

maan didnt nw wot to answer and gave the fone to geet

geet: pinky just clam down im fi9... and yes ur assss (geet luked at maan who had gotten angry again) i mean ur- as ur friend maan and me are in his house

geet tells pinky wot happend

pinky: thank god ur fi9, i was soo worried, dev wants to talk to maan from my side it is bye take care and i will talk i mean see you tommorow

geet: bye

geet was about to pass the fone to maan wen she accidently hit the speaker button

dev: hey dude how was ur stripper party??

geet opened her eyes widee

maan quickly shut the speaker and said: i will call u later

geet: oh i c y u r soo angry, u didnt miss a study gruop party... which bye the way doesnt make any sence... bt u missed a stripper party... yuck that disgustingg

maan: luk stay out of my life...

geet: okay, bt i think dadimaa cant stay out of ur life... nw can she...

saying that geet ran back to her room and layed flat on the bed and herd maan punching his bag loud... bt this time it didnt bother her!

maan thoted: shit man, i even told dev nt to talk bt he had to open his big mouth... gr8 wot will i tell dadi 2morrow, bt geet wouldnt tell nw, would she?

wid thinking dat maan also layed on his bedd...

okay guyz hope u liked it, and thanks for the pervious commentss... THANK YOU SOOO MUCH it means alot to mee, and if u guyz have any idea wot should i name this ff plz comment! and i will be waitng for more comments😊

and people who want pm's wen it is updated plz send a buddy request so i can msg more then one person at a time.. anways thanks
Edited by Mina H - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
awsum!!!

loved both parts!!!

mr. msklmnopqrstuvw and sum radom x-y-z...this line was hilarious!!!!!


update sooN!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue
cant wait to read da nxt part
update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
Loveee ur ff.
Plzzz continue soon.
Can u plzzz add me in ur pm list?


Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
Hahaha i wouldve nvr imagined maan like tht...its unique...plz add me to ur pm list lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow thats awesome
Loved it soooooooooooooooooooooo much
Thanq so much fo rthe PM
pls continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet cherry

great update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue

cant wait to read da nxt part
update soon

THANK you sooo much

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