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Posted: 14 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: gupta22kg

Hahaha i wouldve nvr imagined maan like tht...its unique...plz add me to ur pm list lol

bt I can imagine maan in many way... if u nw wot i mean😉 LOLZ
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: pickachu

Loveee ur ff.
Plzzz continue soon.
Can u plzzz add me in ur pm list?


Fatima

thanks for likin it, and i will surely add you
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
PART 5
dadi got early in the morning: kids just hate to get up in the morning... just den she sees geet cumin down wearin her same suit it was clean

geet: gud morning dadimaa

dadi: gud morning beta...ur up quick

geet: yes im used to gettin up in the morning

dadi: dats a gr8 rountine, luk maan ek dafa souta hai toh outney kay pata nhai hota hai osku...

geet smiled, 'so beta wot will u hve this morning for breakfast'

geet: dadimaa i will make the breakfast

dadi: no last nite u cooked so well, and today i want hear my prasie so i will cook... okay

geet: okay dadi maa jase ap kha

dadi maa got busi cookin and geet started watching tv wen she herd dadimaa and wen to the kitchen 'g dadimaa' 'beta i m almost done, can u plz go and wake maan up'

geet: likan main kasey ja sakti hoon

dadi: plz geet...

geet couldnt refuse a plz 4om dadimaa so she felt to wake maan

geet started playing wid her dupatta: dadimaa bhi na, like maan is already pissed off and... how can i posibly do dat??

nervously she knocks on maans door... bt no answer she knocks a bit harder and door swings open she walks off to where he is sleepin on his bed

geet gazes around his room, and sees pictures of guyz playing basketball and sum radoms gurls nt in many clothes... maan rooms totaly reflects to his personality geet thot... DRITY

geet: maan... MAan... maAN... MAAN

it usless callin his name... dadimaa was rite geet thot maan is a heavy sleeper...

geet moved her hand forward bt den put it back.... she dadimaa saying breakfast is ready so cum down already... geet had no choice other den to tugg him she put her hand on his shoulder and slowly moved him around: maan

maan rudely put her hand down 4om his shoulder and mumbled: letme sleep

geet: maan dadimaa want u to get up, and breakfast is ready...

maan barely opened his eyes and saw geet and put the pillow on his head: god, i had to see ur face today in the morning... nw god knows how my day will goo...

geet: it will go gr8

maan: i dout dat

geet: w/e get up maan... dadimaa wants u down

maan: hmm tell her i will cum in a bit, and next time send a servant to wake me up

geet: im preaty sure there wont b a next as i will be in the hostel... and yes cum quick dadimaa wants to ask you... about ur party...

maan suddeny sat up on his bed: u didnt

geet got a sly smile on her face: i did... n't.... or mayb i did... who nws

maan stood up rite infornt of her... and held her hand titely: geet nt cool, ab dadima ko kha kho hoon ga? like OMG i dont belive this

geet: maan ur hurting me

maan: and all the hurt i mean pain i will get 4om dadimaa wots dat?

geet: ahhh maan let go

maan lets go of her and geet runs out of her room

geet: ajeeb hai... im nt dat meannn, oh well it was fun to finaly c fear in his eyes!

geet went and sat on the dinning table as she sat yesturday dadi came and sat at her place and maan also came and sat in the chair aross 4om geet's chair...

maan was nt tryin to make any eye contact wid dadimaa and just kept on lukin at geet, geet didnt notic as she was eatin her breakfast

dadi: maan beta eat sumthing or r u juz goin 2stare @geet?

geet luked up @him: yes maan hve ur breakfast...

maan took one bite of the alo ka pa-ra-ta: YUCK is dis wot u call breakfast.... like is mein jo alu hai woh kacha hai aur inta mota paratha... like geet u mayb able to cook gud rice bt u cant cook breakfasts well

dadi stood up 4om her chair and geet started laughing

dadi: MAAN... i made this breakfast for u, stayin in hostel has made u forgotten ur taste... and as a child i made ur food onli... and this is my reward HOW MEANNN

maan: dadi--maa woh its reali gud

maan takes all the praratha's and puts it in his plate: luk dadimaa its reali gud, luk im eating all of them.... yummy

geet couldnt stop laughing...

dadi sat down and also got a smile on her face after eating

soon all were done thier breakfast

dadi left the dinning table 1st

maan: god couldnt u tell me...

geet:tell u wot?

maan: dat u made da fud--

geet: why im i ur house chief ur sumthing, dat i would always make ur food?

maan didnt nw wot to say: well get ready so i can leave u to pinky and be free

geet: y do u hve another partyy

just den dadi cums back

dadi: party gr8... kya party hai?

maan: aaa... woohh... kuchhh

geet: dadimaa ko nhai pata maan?

dadi: kya

maan: nhai woh main...

geet:4get i will tell dadimaa... actuly dadimaa maan is such a brite student, dat for the not so smart student in the uni he gives dem tuturing... by saying it is a party...

dadi: wow maan i surprised... and veri proud of you

maan: hmmm

dadi gave a hug to maan and 4om dadis back geet stick her tongue at him and maan did da same to her!

maan: anyways we should be goin as it is getting late... soon all of them were out of the house, dadi gave geet and maan a hug together makin geet and maan's hand touch at her back... geet sliped her hand underneath of maans hand...

dadimaa: geet plz cum soon and visit me back, as it was a pleasure to be here

geet: oh plz dadimaa the pleasure was mines... it was gr8 being here..

maan started honking the horn: can we go nw

dadi: bye kids and maan i want u back SOON.... okay

maan: bye lov you

geet sat on the fornt seat: maan

maan: huh

geet: i was thinking

maan: wot

geet: dat

maan: dat wot

geet: would u letme finsih

maan: finish wot?

geet: wot im saying

maan: and wot r u sayin

geet: dat ur house is so big

maan: i nw dat, no need to tell me

geet: den how cum u live in the hostel

maan paused: becuz

geet: becuz?

maan: its my life stay out of it...

geet: by pleasure!

maan was abou to turn on songs wen he again remebered wot happened last nite so he decided not

geet saw maan's hand go on the c-d player and then back dat put a smile on her face

maan took a long turn makin geets shoulder bang into his

maan looks at geet

geet: phir, idhaar udhaar dekh raha ho..

maan quickly looks away... maan stops where dey had there accident b4 and sees his car calls the sum mechanic to fix and takes geet bags out and puts it in the car

maan and geet stay quite for the rest of way to the uni

maan: at last im free

maan swang the door opened also geet, and she was stunned to see such a lovely university

geet: WOW it is beauitfull

maan luked at her: yes... yes u r

geet suddenly look at maan and maan looked away: i was talkin about my car, maan looks at his car and starts to say 'ur soo beauitful and 4om nw on i m goin to name u geet

geet looked at maan in anger

geet: GEET?

maan: y do u hve a prblem?

b4 geet could say anything else she saw pinky and gave her a tite hug and shook hands wid dev and den see saw a gurl who was wearin a veri short dree-- a veri short tube dree who had cling on to maan titghly

maan: oh baby did i miss u soo much

as geet herd these words sumthing suddenly died in her

sasha: me2... and who is this behin-g

maan and sasha starting laughing

maan: she is geet... geet handa 4om hosiyapur

sasha: hosi-- wot

dev: shut up guyz.. cum geet i will show u around

geet walked ahead wid pinky and dev while maan and sasha followed them...

after few mins she could hear maan and sasha laughing... and her heart burnt... bt geet didnt nw why??

precap- maan run veri fast behind geet and geet tried runnin even faster.. bt she was in no faster then him, bt geet tried and ended up on an empty groud... geet couldnt ran any more so she just stood thier tryin to catch her breathe wen maan in full speed fell on her...

hope u guyz liked it...& plz comment over here... rather then sending me pm's... thanks, and if any1 else wana be pm-ed plz letme knw....

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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
The update was fab 😊
Loved it...
Precap seems very interesting!
Update soon....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
i can just say wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow..... amazing yar i love the fights between maan and geet.... i love ur ff... its too good... thx
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
😃
Edited by xxDaydreameRxx - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
Love ur FF!!
Please add me to ur PM List
-Jassi
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update
i wanna know wat happens
da precap sound so interesting
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
Loveee the update.
The precap sounds interestingggggggg.
Plzzz continue soon.
Thanxxx for the pm.


Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
awesome ff
totally love it
maans so different
precap looks intersting
cant wait 2 read more
con soon
plz do add me 2 ur pm list
thanks

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