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Posted: 14 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: xxJaSsIxx

Nice Update!
Pleaseeee update realllyyy soon!
and write longer parts
-Jassi

i will try to write part 8 longer.. and thanks😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: shivangi783

Update was amazing! Loved it....
Funny conversation b/w Maan and geet abt the night time😉

Can you please put an index for the parts with the page numbers on page 1 so that it becomes easier to locate the parts?

Update soon 😛

i will do dat rite nw.. and thanks for likng it 😳😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Ayesha_MSK

Maan and Geet are so funny 😆
I read all 6 parts just now...I really like the way the story is progressing 😃

Thanks for the P.M. ⭐️ and continue soon!

thank you😳 and yes i will pm u wen i update again which is nw! 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
PART 7
Recap; geet: and pinky loves dev dats y she did all this, cuz she doesnt want dev doing this again dats y she talked to him, and i m preaty sure by tommorow dey will be fi9 wid one another

maan: reali... i think dey r goin to break up

geet: WOT, noways pinky loves dev

maan: yea bt the smallest things can make a couple break

geet: no maan da smallest things dont break a couple bt mke dem stronger for the cuming futer together

maan: wow dat is a gud way to put it... where did u read it?

geet: read it no, no i just think dat, dat if u r in love wid sum1 may how storng the storm mayb if u would just put urself in thier arms u wouldnt feel sacred

geet held maans wrist to check out the time: omg it is sooo late i have to go c ya

maan held her arm: wen

geet smiled: tomorrow!

maan: yea... bye

after geet felt maan stayed at the same place remeberig geets words: wow this gurl is amazing in her words... strong... arms strom sacred futer... maan kept remebering wot she had said, after sumtimes he got up 4om his place and saw dev sleepin he bunked down on his bed and wen he would close his eyes he would see geets face... at the station, the nite at his house...da food she made, lost in her thout he fell asleep

dev; MAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN, gett up, daar se soou ga toh yahe ho ga

maan: yaar ut rahaa hoon, god geet

dev: geet

maan suddenly got up

maan: i mean dev

dev: no u said geet, does in any way do i look like a gurl to u??

maan lost in his thots thinking y he said geet: hmmm

dev: hmmmm??

maan gets up and goes to the bathroom

dev thinks: wot is worng wid... and looks himself in the mirror.... 'oh pliz im a total handsum man'

maan dev pinky and geet met at thier campus

dev: pinky, sweety, my jigre-po(dostna, neva can 4get dat movie wen abi calls john his jigre-po)! i didnt go

pinky: bt u had plans to go... didnt u?

dev: bt maan

pinky: nw dont blame maan for ur drity deeds

dev: wot drity deeds

pinky walks away and dev follows

maan: it seems llike a break up to me

geet smiles: no maan for me it seems like thier relationship just gt more stronger

maan: i dont understan dat

geet: well den i m sori if u dont...

maan was about to say sumthing wen sasha came wearing another-- or for geet it seemed as if it was even smaller then yesturdays dree-- and again clinged on to maan titely

maan was about to push her away and tell her it is over wen he saw geet lookin mad at sasha... and maan thot dat he can date sasha for a another day!

maan: hi sasha babe,how u doing

sasha: im fi9 nw dat i saw u...

sasha looked at geet

sasha: oh i didnt c u dere... how r u

geet: im fi9

pinky and dev came back holding hands

geet looked at and maan at geet and both smile, sasha noticed dat and was confused y would maan wana smile at a behin-g tpye gurl? the bell rang

pinky: maan geets 1st class is wid u... show her around to the room, and plz dont be rude to her

pinky left followed by dev and sasha

maan: lets go

geet: hmmm

maan started walking side by side geet and ever1 stared at her

geet tuged maans shoulder and in a whisper: y is ever1 lookin at me like that

maan: cuz ur walkin' wid mee!

geet gave a confused smile: no, ever1 has been staring me scine i came...

maan: well dont u c sumthing different b/w them and u

geet: wel dey have two eyes, one nose, two ears, lips... like i hve all this too

maan: no silly... its da way u have dressed upp

geet looked at her clothes and she was wearin shalwar kameez and the rest of the gurls wore westrn clothes

maan: dats y sasha calls u behin-g

geet: bt i dont care wot any1 thinks of me

maan: dats a gud attiude!

geet: yea..

maan: here is the class

maan sees sasha is sitting next to were maan sits

maaan: sasha tum yahan?

sasha: i missed u baby

maan: bt-

the teacher Miss Manisha (MM) entered

MM: gud morning class... ahh do we have a student wid us??

maan: no, this is pinky, she has gotten done a plastic surgery

MM: ahahahaa maan wot gud sence of humor u hve got

maan: i m nt jking

mm: ahum... go and take ur seat, wots ur name

geet: geet, geet handa

mm: well, welcum to busssince admistration... my name is miss mansiha, bt ever1 here calls me MM

geet nods her head

mm: how about u sit there-- pointing to a seat rite infornt of maan... and sasha plz go to ur class

sasha: bt MM plzz

mm: no sahsa goo

sasha gives a kiss on maans check and leaves geet sees this and it feels like her ears are burning wid anger, bt quitly goes and sits on the seat infornt on maan

mm starts her lecture, and maan just stares at geets back, her hairs maan thinks 'her hairs are so soft and silky i just wish i could touch dem.... HUH wot i m i saying, she is a total behin-g tpye gurl how i will date and den leave her.... bt nw i would leave her i would b dere for her till my last breathe.... OMG wot im i saying' just den far 4om this mind arguing about geet he hears sum1 callin his name and moving his shoulder wen he snaps out

mm: MAAN... earth callin maan, can u hear me??

maan: yes, yes

ever1 in the class starts to laugh including geet which makes maan smile as well

mm: maan r u feelin okay

maan: yes im fi9,

mm: okay den tell me wot did i just say?

maan starts to look around

mm facing maan: im waiting tell me wot was i talking about

maan suddenly sees geet holding her book facing him and has writen: how to make ur company #1

maan: how to make ur company no. 1

mm: wow im surpirsed i thot-- nvm

mm counts her teaching , and maan takes his cell fone out and thinks he will txt geet and say thank u...

"likan geet ka number kya hai... does she even have a fone"?

class it out

maan: geet thanks for tellin me

geet: no problem

maan: i was just wonderin ur digits

geet: digits?

maan: yea like ur number

geet: oh i dont have a cell fone

maan: WOT msk's friend doesnt have a cell fone

geet: friend?

maan: wot u r my friend arent you

geet: well i didnt nw dat the msk would wana be friends wid a behin-g tpye gurl

maan in his head: ooh i wana be more den friends

maan: i... mmm

he doesnt nw wot to answer her

geet laughs: oh im jkin, bt wot makes u soo sure dat i wana be ur friend?

maan: wot u dont wana be my friend?

b4 geet could answer pinky came and took geet wid her for the next class leaving maan thinking: wot geet doesnt wana be my friend... my friend?

precap: pinky: u nw how u can tel if a man is a gud kisser

geet: u can?

pinky: offcourse, it is the way how they eat apple

geet: apple?

pinky: yea the more they suck into the apple for a bite da more they are gud and if they take a small bite they r triable, and today i will find out if dev is a gud kisser or nt-- pinky smirked

geet: how will u do that

pinky: by giving dev a apple offcourse!

geet thoted: i wonder if maan is a gud kisser or nt... mayb i should give him an apple as well

hope u guyz liked it plz comment and thanks for the pervous comment as i keep on saying they reali motivate me! :)

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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
woooooooooooooow great update
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue reli soon
cant wait for the nxt update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
haha it made me laugh!!!especially the dev part!!!heehhee..love ur ff!!('',)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
ur ff is so sweet , funny and endaring.will patiently wait for the update.can u pls pm me
hmmm does apple thing really works when it comes 2 k.......😉😉😉😉
Edited by sapnaajay - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏really loved it....awesome update and wow waiting for the romance to blossom..anyways if posibble can you update little fast because i cant wait to read next part.👏
👏
love you,

vinithaa
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
awesome update
loved it
loved dev and maan scene
cant wait 2 read more
con soon
precap looks good
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
Lovely part! ⭐️
I was laughing for the most part, especially at Maan's self-dialogues.. 😆

This made me crack up:
maan in his head: ooh i wana be more den friends

The apple test seems interesting...

Can't wait for the next update!

Thanks for the P.M. and continue asap 😃

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