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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
Agn they met n agn they fought
They really cant meet in shanti yaar
Waise liked their fght
It was fab both are Tit for Tat for each other😆😆😆😆
Lets c whch bhukam cums in office😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
too good!...
lol!....again they fought with each other!...
wonder wat will happen at the office!....
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
woow your FF is amzaing enjoyed all parts please add me to your pm list 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
superb!!!!

loved this line

waise bhi tum koi Katrina Kaif nahi ho ki main tumhare autograph k liye ruka hoon

update sooN!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
Hi Akriti

awesome update
lyked Maaneet scene at temple
w8ng for Maaneet meeting at office
plz cont soon
thnx for pm

Luv
Naina

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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
OMG i love this FF ...awesome please upload soon .. i am eagerly waiting for it and please add me to ur PM list!
Thanks😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
Hi every1 thank u so much For ur Lovely Comments on part 4. nw here's d part 5 of my FF sorry for updating late but i was busy in janamashtami prep. hope u all will like it too. Do leave ur Comments/criticism. press d Like button if u like my FF.


PART 5:


In khurana's Constructions Adi nd Pinki r eagerly waiting for Geet as Maan would be at office in any moment nd if he won't find Geet in d office den only god knows wat will happen next.

Adi: Pinki, Where is Geet?

Pinki: I really have no idea Adi sir. Wo to mujhse pehle nikli thi pata nhi abhi tak kyun nahi aayi? Uska cell bhi nahi lag raha.

Adi: pinki u knw na agar wo yaha tym pen hi aayi to MK use pehle hi din nikal denge.

Pinki: I knw Adi sir. But…..

Sasha came over dere nd interrupts.

Sasha: I have already told u Adi dat dis girl will not fit in our environment. But u didn't listen to me nd look she's late in d first day of her office.

Adi: Listen sasha….

Their conversations were interrupted wen Tasha informs about arrival of MK.

Tasha: MK is here.

Every1 has started settling to their Places maan doesn't like people gossiping at d time of work. Pinki nd Adi both were scared as dey dnt knw wat will dey say to MK wen he'll ask for geet. Before going to his Cabin Maan Stops nd turned to Adi

Maan: Adi..

Adi: Y-y-yes sir.

Maan: Where's my secretary I hope she's on time.

Adi(dnt knw what to say): Y-y-yes sir she is. She's at her cabin.

Maan: Good. Ask her to report in my Cabin within 5 mins. Nd mind you 5 mins means 5 mins.

Adi: yes Sir.

Maan headed towards his Cabin leaving Pinki nd Adi in trouble.

Pinki: Adi sir nw wat will we do?

Adi: Pinki kuch to karna hi padega.

Sasha: to karo. MK ko jake sab sach bata do. Warna us ladki ki wajah se tumhari job bhi jayegi.

Adi: dekho Sasha…

Sasha: Dekhoge to tum Adi MK ka gussa jab 5 min me Geet unke cabin me nahi hogi. Ab tum khud MK ko sab sach bataoge ya ye kaam main karoon.

Suddenly Pinki notices Geet coming

Pinki: Geet aa gyi.

she goes to her nd Adi follows her leaving Sasha annoyed

Pinki: oye geet kahan reh gyi tu?

Geet: Wo mandir mein… wahi ladka…

Adi: Geet leave it for nw. first go to MK's cabin fast. He's waiting for u we told him dat u r in ur Cabin. So go fast.

Geet: thank u Adi sir.

Saying dis Geet quickly Rushed towards Maan's Cabin. She was really scared just praying to god dat her Boss doesn't have a Bad Mood. She slowly knocks d door.

"Come In" a voice came from inside.

Geet moves in to d cabin. She couldn't able to see her Boss' face yet as he had his Back towards her seems dat he's busy looking in some files. She finally decides to speak.

Geet: Good morning sir. My name is Ge……….

Nd rest of d word left unsaid as Maan turns towards her nd dey both faces each other. Both were in extreme shocked nd surprise wen dey saw each other again that too in d office.

"Tum?" both said together. Maan gets up from his chair nd moves quickly towards her.

Maan: Tum? Tum mera peecha karte hue yahan bhi aa gayi.

Geet: main tumhara peecha kar rahi hoon? Peecha karte hue tum yahan aaye ho mere office me.

Maan(Puzzled): Tumhara office?

Geet: Yes, I work over here. I m d secretary of d MD of dis Company.

Maan realizes dat her new secretary is none other den dis Girl to whom he never wished to meet again nd she still didn't realize dat her Boss is rite in front of her.. He gives a fade smile.

Maan: Suno….

Geet: tum suno meri baat. Mana ki maine tumhe us din kafi kuch keh diya aur aaj mandir me bhi tumhe Daanav bulaya but iska matlab yeh to nahin ki tum mere office aake mere boss se shikayat karo.

Maan: Dekho meri baat suno…..

Geet: No u listen to me… just go from here before my boss come otherwise I had to call securities den dey will drag u out from here.

Maan listened to her but didn't moved an inch instead stand dere by crossing his arms which makes Geet even more irritated

Maan: Call….

Geet(Puzzled): wat?

Maan: Call d securities nd if dere is any problem den let me call.

Geet: R u mad? Listen I m not joking.

Maan: not even I.

Dere conversations interrupted wen Adi came inside d cabin. As soon as Geet saw Adi she rushed towards him.

Geet: Adi sir, Dekhiye na main kab se inse keh rahi hoon k ye yahan se chale jaye but ye meri baat nhi sun rahe.

Adi(not able to understand): but Geet ye yahan se kyun jayenge?

Maan: Arey kyun nahi jayenge? Ye hamare boss ka Cabin hai aur waise bhi agar MK sir ko pata chala ki unke cabin me koi stranger hai to wo kitna naaraz honge.

Adi: Geet.. meri baat suno… ye..

Geet: nahi adi sir, aap in jaise logon ko nahi jaante ye log kahin bhi ghus aate hai aur fir kuch bhi gadbad ho to sara blame aap pe daal dete hai.

Adi: arey lekin Geet… meri baat to suno…

Maan: rehne do Adi. U can't stop dis Shatabdi Express.

Geet: kya kaha aapne?

Maan: jo suna tumne.

Geet(Pointing her finger to him): dekho tum…..

Adi was afraid dat geet will definitely lose her job after dis so he came in between to stop dem. He took Geet aside

Adi: Geet ye tum kya kar rahi ho?

Geet: adi sir dnt worry main in jaise logon se nipatna jaanti hoon.

Adi: Arey lekin Geet, ye humare boss hai.

Geet: wahi to main keh rahi hoon ki…. (den she realizes wat adi has just said) kya kaha aapne ye humare boss hai.

Adi Nodded his head in yes. Geet is shocked nd looked surprisingly to maan wid her famous expression while maan gives his Proud expression. Geet quickly regains herself nd goes to maan

Geet: aapne mujhe pehle kyun nahi bataya?

Maan: tum kisi ko kuch bolne ka mauka do tab to koi kuch keh sakta hain na.

Geet: But Boss ka naam to MK hai (Still not believing)

Maan (Pointing towards himself): MK, Maan Khurana MD of Khurana's constructions. Ye office mera hai, ye cabin mera hai aur tum meri secretary ho (looking at Adi) Good choice Adi.

Geet: wo…. Main….. actually.

Maan: arey kya hua ms Shatabdi Express Apki bolti band ho gyi. Khair tumhara kya karna hai ye main baad me decide karoonga abhi I need to talk to Adi. So pls Leave.

Geet: yes sir… sorry… I mean thank u… I mean

Maan: tumhari ye sorry aur Thank u speech hum baad me discuss karenge. Abhi jst leave.

Geet: Yes sir.

Geet leaves from dere.

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Geet moving restlessly in her cabin talking to herself.

Geet: oye geet ye tune kya kar diya? Boss se panga le liya. Ab kya hoga? (looking upwards) Babaji poori duniya me ek yahi insaa mila tha aapko mera Boss banane k liye.

She sits on her chair.

Geet: agar unhone mujhe job se nikal diya to? Nahin, Pls. babaji kuch kariye saying dis she rests her head on her hand wen Pinki came to her to ask her about first day at office. She was surprised to see geet in dis cond.

Pinki: Geet..

Geet didn't replied

Pinki (held her shoulders nd jerked her): Geet…

Geet(came out of her thoughts): ya.. whose it?

Pinki: Geet.. whats wrong? Its me.

Geet: oh hi Pinki..

Pinki: Geet r u ok? Wat happen?

Geet: Wo MK….

Pinki: oh nw I understand. Not ur fault. Whoever sees MK for d first time feels d same as u feeling nw.

Geet: no pinki, its nt wat u think?

Pinki(teasing her): Its ok geet. I understand.

Geet(irritated): shut up Pinki. Main yeh kehna chahti hoon dat MK is d same person whom I met dat nite nd had a huge fight. Nd today at mandir also.

Pinki(shocked): Wat?

Geet innocently nodded her head.

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In d maan's cabin Maan getting mad over Adi.

Maan: 100 times, 100 times I have told u Adi dat I dnt want any mistakes. I want an Efficient Employee. Do u remember?

Adi: Y-y-yes sir

Maan: nd u hired dis Cartoon character as my secretary.

Adi: s-s-sir she is Efficient nd….

Maan(interrupts): ya, tats wat I can see. She's so efficient dat she did'nt even know who's her Boss. Nd dragging away her own boss from his Cabin. Very good wat an efficiency.

Adi: But S-s-sir trust me she's an efficient employee. Her educational records are very good. May be today is her first day in d office nd she couldn't recognize u nd all dat blunder……

Maan: u knw wat Adi? Before I lose my temper just go away from here. Leave!!!!

Adi: y-y-yes sir.

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In Geet's Cabin. Geet narrates all d mandir incident to pinki.

Pinki: oye geet ye tu kya bol rahi hai. tune MK ko Daanav bola. MK ko!!!?

Geet: Mujhe kya Babaji ne bhavishyawani ki thi ki "Geet ja beta yehi tera boss hoga jakar isse bhid ja".

Pinki: arey bhavishyawani nahi ki thi to iska kya matlab hai tu kisi se bhi jake jhagda karegi. Teri ye aadat kab jayegi geet? Ab pata nahi tera kya hoga?

Geet: wahi to main soch rahi hoon. Log pairon pe kulhadi marte hai main to kulhadi pe hi kud gayi. Pata nahi ab kya hoga?

Pinki Notices geet's restlessness

Pinki: Geet… Geet Relax!! (handed a glass of water to her) have some water.

Geet(takes d glass): Main shayad pehli aisi employee hoon jise Job k pehle hi ghante nikal diya gya (den turned to pinki) Pinki u r my best friend na.

Pinki: ya Geet ofcourse.

Geet: den pls do me a favour. Newspaper me jitney bhi job articles hain pls unhe mark karke rakho. Kyunki ye job to gyi.

Pinki: Relax geet!! Dnt think negative. Everything will be fine nd………

Their conversation interrupts by ringing of phone..

Geet: Hello!!

Maan: Geet, come to my cabin immediately.

Geet: yes sir.

She hangs up nd turned to pinki. Pinki lifted her eyebrows to ask wat happen

Geet: sir ne cabin me bulaya hai. Lagta hai mera resignation letter type ho kar aa gya.

Pinki: Geet Relax. Just go to him. All d Best.

Geet: ya thanx.

She headed towards his cabin.

Pinki(to herself): Pata nahi is ladki ka kya hoga. Babaji is baar ise bacha lena. Pls.

Precap:

Maan's decision about Geet's job.


hey guys hope u like part 5 of my FF. pls feel free to criticise if u dnt like.

Luv Aakriti😊😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
hey update it wana knw what will happen next?
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
Thats Awesome
Maan called Geet Shatabdi express😆
Loved it
Loved every single Line
Thaq so much for the PM
Eagerly waiting for the next to know abt Maan's Decission
pls Update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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update soooooooonnn.., nahi nahi very soonnnnn... nw to cant wait to know wat will happen next..!!!!!

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