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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi guys first of all thank u so much for ur lovely comment even though wen i thought that my Part 3 will disappoint u all. thank u so much for d support guys. nw here's d part 4 of my FF.hope u all like that too. hit d like button if u like my FF.


PART 4:

Geet is getting ready for her first day at office. She's both excited nd Happy. Finally she has found d way for herself. Pinki is helping her to choose her dress for d first day at office.

Geet: C'mon Pinki, I m not going for a ramp show that u r selecting too much.

Pinki: Darling u r MK's secretary nw nd its nt a small thing. Tujhe pata hai kitni ladkiyan ye sapna dekhti hai ki wo MK k aas paas rahe and u r d one who got this chance so u have to b look good na.

Geet: whatever, lekin jo bhi karna hai jaldi kar. I dnt wanna get late on my first day.

Pinki: ya I knw.

Suddenly Pinki found something while selecting her dress. She took it in her hand saw that it was a beautiful anklet.

Pinki: Geet' Geet.

Geet(irritated): Nw wat pinki I told u na choose anything nd''' (suddenly she stops looking anklet in pinki's hand).

Pinki: Geet, Whats this?

Geet: Anklet.

Pinki: wow, thanx for telling. I was nt knowing it. Stupid I can see dat. Y r u not wearing it. It's so beautiful.

Geet: Actually I lost d another one few months back. (She reminds of something den came back to reality nd turned to pinki) nw if ur interrogation is over then can I get ready pls.

Pinki looked Strangely at Geet as Geet never acted so weird. 'must be nervous for her first day' She thought nd kept d anklet to her bag. She Turned back nd saw that Geet is almost ready. Geet turned to Pinki.

Geet: Pinki, I'll leave early today.

Pinki: Geet, I knw its ur first day but that doesn't means that u leave 1-1/2 hr before time.

Geet: No actually I had go somewhere.

Pinki: where?

Geet: Mandir. Before I could start my new life I wanted to take blessings from god.

Pinki: Geet, u'll never change na.

Geet: Something in life remains unchanged pinki. Well I'll see u in d office. Ok bye.

Saying dis Geet left from home.

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In Maan's Home he's getting ready for office wen her Dadi came to him

Maan: Dadi wat r u doing here? Doctor has advised u to take rest.

Dadi: As if u care maan?

Maan: Dadimaa pls. hw many would I have to tell u to stop dis taunt of urs I really care for u.

Dadi: Oh really den y dnt u shift to mansion.

Maan(while brushing his hair): Dadi dis is d only thing that I can't do nd u can't force me to do dis.

Dadi: yes who m I to force u?

Maan (putting d brush down): Dadi Pls. Dnt start it again.

Dadi: ok fine, will u able to do Something except dis if I ask u to do?

Maan: I can do anything for u dadi.

Dadi: Den will u pls go to mandir to which I used to go.

Maan: Not again Dadi, I know dis plan of urs. U must have arranged some kind of a meeting at mandir. U want me to get married rite?

Dadi: Maan, Kabhi to poori baat sun ke react kiya kariye. Hum aapse yeh kehna chahte the k aap wahan ke pujari ji ko bol dijiye k hum unse milna chahte hai. Could u able to do that or I'll do it myself.

Maan sees that his Dadi is losing her temper again. So he quickly goes to her.

Maan: look Dadi I m sorry. I didn't mean dat. Ok I'll go.

Then he hugs her Dadimaa.

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Geet standing in front of d idol wid her eyes closed praying to god to give her strength nd power to manage her life in future, to complete d task for which she left her city, her family, to b able to give her best at her new job. She opens her eyes saw pujariji standing in front of her.

Pujariji: Beta, ye lo Prasad, Maa Durga tumhari sari dua poori karengi.

Geet smiles nd took d Prasad. She looks to d idol once more nd den start moving backwards nd as soon as she was about to turn she bumps wid someone which makes her lose balance. She was about to fall wen someone catches her through her waist. Geet's eyes were shut in fear dat she was about to fall in ground soon she realizes d grip of strong hand around her waist. She slowly opens her eyes to see her saviour nd she opens her eyes she was in shock as her saviour was none other than Maan. D same guy wid whom she had a Fight that night. There was an eyelock moment for few seconds den suddenly maan raises her nd geet settles her dupatta.

Maan(in anger): Tum? Phir se? tumhari problem kya hai? dekh ke na chalne ki kasam khayi hui hai kya?

Geet: Dekho tum...

Maan: Dekh ke tum chalna seekho.

Geet: Suno....

Maan: bahut sun li thi tumhari us raat ab tum meri baat suno. Aankhein band kar ke chalne ka itna hi shauk hai to kala chashma laga k ghooma karo. Kam se kam logon ko pata to chale ki tum andhi ho. Ya phir tum ye sab intentionally karti ho taki koi na koi tumhe sambhalne wala rahe.

Geet can't take dis anymore nw. she has to shout.

Geet: Enough jo mann me aa raha hai bolte ja rahe ho. Mana ki main bina dekhe chal rahi thi par tumhare paas to aankhein thi na. tum to dekh k chal sakte the.

Maan: Wow! Ek to maine tumhe girne se bachaya upar se tum mujhe hi blame kar rahi ho.

Geet: so wat do u expect me to say? Thank u? ok Thank u. Thank u ki aapne mujhe bacha liya. Aap na hote to pata nahi mera kya hota. Happy nw.

Maan(in a disguist way): u knw wat? Dis is d problem of u girls. Tum logon ke liye kuch bhi kar lo but That makes no difference for u all.

Geet: nd u knw whats ur problem? That u have too much analysis on girls. Isiliye shayad tumhe har ladki ek jaisi lagti hai (then looking upwards) yeh insaan ki shakal me kaise kaise daanav bhej rakhe hai aapne babaji.

Maan: Kya kaha tumne?

Geet: wahi jo suna aapne.

Maan: Listen nw u r crossing ur limits.

Geet: oh really, nd few minutes before wat u were doing?

Maan: listen u dnt knw wid whom u r trying to argue.

Geet: nd I dnt have any interest also because I know wid whom I m arguing. A Jerk!!

Maan: listen u.....

Geet sudeenly looks at her watch she realizes that she's getting late for office. She interrupts in between

Geet: Listen I like have all day for u to argue but abhi I need to go somewhere nd I dnt want to be late because of u. so will u pls let me go.

Maan: Oh please sure... waise bhi tum koi Katrina Kaif nahi ho ki main tumhare autograph k liye ruka hoon.

Geet: agar hoti bhi to bhi I won't give autograph to a jerk like u. Bye!! Nd dis tym I really wish that we never meet in future.

Maan(in angry tone): me too.

Den dey again part from each other nd move to their respective directions both in angry mood.... maan looks back nd see her walking nd wen maan looks frnt geet looks back nd nd sees him walking nd walks back again...

Geet: din ki shuruaat aisi hui hai. Babaji baki ka din kaisa niklega.

Maan: Ajeeb ladki hai. jab milti hai tab suna k chali jaati hai nd Dadimaa iski side le rahi thi. God knows how will be the nature of d new secretary.

Precap:

Maan nd Geet faces each other again at office


hey guys hope u like part 4 of my FF. nd sorry for d short update i have my classes in another hour. Pls dnt forget to leave ur comment/criticism

Luv aakriti 😊😊

Edited by aakritisri1111 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72
hey darling plzz update it soon kya dhamaal hone wala hai when maaneet will meet
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
Great update 😊
Maan Geet ki conversation was quite interesting 😊

Update soon 😊
Edited by shivangi783 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lol....that was so funny....they were arguing like cat and dog.....i expected the mandir scene to be like they are both just praying to god...and are unintentionally standing next to each other and the pandit blesses them by saying something like bhagwan tum dono ki jodi banaye rahe....but whatever....this was extremely funny....can so imagine this happening....lol.....please update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
Realy cool part wating for the next part and thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
lovede the update
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
cant wait for the nxt part
plzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
a takkar again.. waiting for more of this 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely update...waiting for their meeting in office..hahaha it would be worth reading.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanq so much for the PM
Thats awesome
Loved it
Im eagerly waiting for Maaneet to meet at the office
pls continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: desigurl953

Lol....that was so funny....they were arguing like cat and dog.....i expected the mandir scene to be like they are both just praying to god...and are unintentionally standing next to each other and the pandit blesses them by saying something like bhagwan tum dono ki jodi banaye rahe....but whatever....this was extremely funny....can so imagine this happening....lol.....please update soon


that thing came in my mind also but i wanted it to be something different thatsy. thanx for liking it

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