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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow, brilliant FF, lovely updates..👏
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Continue soon dear...
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BTW ... Thank you all 4 the encouragement U R giving me & 4 the wonderful replies .😃....I am totally new 2 every thing over here .... will B updating the next part ( part 10 )very soon 😊... working on it right now... it is very long finished only 1/2 of it ...remaining part will B finishing later on today & thn I will b posting it hopefully today .... US time....
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Thank you once again 4 all the encouragement U R showering on me …..Please do reply & press the like button if U like my post ....

Part 10:

Maan carries Geet to her bed room & lays her on the bed & geltly moves her tresses that were falling on her face to a side & then remembers that she told him that she was hungry …. He curses himself 4 stressing her out …. Quickly runs 2 the kitchen 2 C if there is any food in the kitchen …. Luckily finds some Rice & Raitha …So he mixes raitha in the rice & takes water along with him 4 Geet ….

Maan comes & tries 2 wake up Geet sprinkles some water on her face & then Geet wakes up …

Geet – Sir …main yehan …

Maan – geet … tum idhar hi raho … idhar sae hilna math ….

He gives her some water & then asks her 2 open her mouth …

Geet – kyun sir …

Maan – chup ….abhi apna muh kolo Geet …par sawal punchnae kae liye nahin ...

Geet opens her mouth … Maan starts feeding her Yogurt rice ….

Geet 2 herself while eating …. " Babaji main kya karun … Maan Sir mujhse kitna pyar karthe hain yeh mere samajh main aa gaya hain … Babaji yeh apne mere saath aisa kyun kiya … Babaji …. kyun …maine kya kiya tha jo apne mujhe ithni badi saza dae di … pyar tho kar liya … par uska izhaar karne ka haq mujhe nahin diya hain apne …

Main inko sach kaise bolu … main insae sach chupana bhi nahin chahthi …. agar main inko sach bolungi tho inka dil toot jayega …. par main sir ko takleef main bhi nahin dekh sakthi … main inko sach bol ke dard du … ki insae dur jaa kae dard du …

Aap ne mujhe kaun sae dau rahae par kadha kar diya babaji … meri madad kariye …mujhe sahi raastha dikhayiyen …please …. Babaji "

Maan is still feeding her rice while feeding her some cream is left on her lips … Maan gently wipes the cream off her lips with his hand …. (they have their Mahi moment …) …

They both come back 2 their senses … maan still feeding her …

Geet 2 herself – "Geet sir ko sachayi bata dae ... agar tumne abhi sachayi nahin batai tho sir tumse yeh rishta ke umeed rakhenge …. aur unka ummed todna acha nahin hoga Geet …. Abhi tak to tumne sir ko apni pyar ke bare main kuch nahin kahan behtar yehi hoga ki tum inko tumhare baaren main sachayi bata do …. aur chup chap kisi ko bina batayein yehan sae chali jao … thode din ke liye sir ko tere upar gussa tho rahega phir baad main teek ho jayenge …. Shayad mujhe bhool bhi jaayenge … hain na … waise bhi dadima unke liye ladki tho dekh hi rahin hain …tho koi na koi achi ladki tho mil hi jaayegi un ke liye … … sab ki kushi kae liye mujhe idhar sae chala jaana hi teek hoga …. hain na "

Geet started crying again while thinking all this & is saying 2 Maan – "sir aapne mere liye aaj tak jo kuch bhi kiya hain uthna tho shayad mere parivar walon ne bhi mere liye nahin kiya hoga … main jab bhi koi musibat main hothi hun tho hamesha aap mere maseeha ban kae aajathe hain aur meri madad karthae hain … aur hamesha ek dhal ban ke mere paas kade rehthe hain ….Yehan tak ki Mere liye aapne apni project bhi chod di …"

Maan wiping her tears -- Geet tum abhi bhi ro rahi ho… mat ro … aur main nae jo kuch bhi kiya wo maine tumhare liye kiya tha aur tumhare liye main kuch bhi … kuch bhi kar sakhtha hun Geet …samjhi tum

Geet still crying ….

Maan - Geet tum ro kyun rahi ho … mere samajh main nahin aa raha hain … rona bandh karo Geet …

Geet – please sir aaj mujhe mat rokiye …. rone dejiye behne deejiye in asooyon ko …. aaj aapke saare sawalon ka jawab ek saath mil jaayega … is liye aaj aap mujhe nahin rokhen gae …

Maan – sawal lon ka aur asoo yon ka kya sambandh hain Geet …

Geet – hain sir .. sambandh hain … aapko yaad hain … us din jab hum kamre bandh ho gaye thae ….

Maan – yaad hain Geet … main wo raat kaise bhool sakhtha hun ….

Geet sees maan's face & continues …. Us din aap ne mujhse ek sawal puncha tha …. Us din bhi mere asooyon kae kaaran us sawal ka jawab dae nahin paayi thi …. kyun ki aapne mujhe rokh diya tha …. agar aap mujhe us din nahin rokh thae tho shayad aaj hum dono ki zindagi alag hothi ... aur shayad …. shayad aaj aap mujhse pyar bhi nahin karthe…. Aur apko dard bhi nahin hota ….

Maan holds Geets arms & says …yeh tum kya keh rahi ho Geet … pyar ka aur us sawal ka kya sambandh hain Geet …. Aur tum kis dard ke bare main baath kar rahi ho ….

Geet – sambandh hain sir … main aapko hurt karna nahin chathi sir … aur main aapko dukhi bhi nahin dekh sakthi hun …

Maan – Thank God … atleast tum yeh toh bol payi … par tum mujhe hurt kyun karogi … tum kya bol rahi ho meri kuch samajh main nahin aa raha hain … Geet …

Geet – haan sir ….aaj main aapko meri zindagi ka us hissae kae baaren main bataungi jo aap nahin janthe … mujhe malum hain yeh sab jaanne kae baad aapko bahut dard hoga … takleef hogi ... par sachayi jaan na aapke liye bahut jaroori hain … main aap sae sachayi chupana bhi nahin chahthi …. Aur aaj aap mujhe rokhengae bhi nahin ….

Aur agar mujhe malum hota ki aisa kuch hone waala hain tho main kabhie aapke zindagi main dakhil hi nahin hothi ….

Maan - geet ...

Geet – haan sir mujhe maaf kar dijiye … mere paas aur koi raastha nahin hain … main aapko hamesha kush dekhna chahthi hun ….. isliye mujhe aap sae dur hona padega …

Maan –agar tum mujhse dur hogi to main kaise kush rahungaa ??? tum aise soch bhi kaise sakhthi ho ????

Geet – Main abhi aapko wo sach bataungi jisse aap anjaan hain …

Maan – kaun sa sach …

Geet – aapka meri zindagi main aane sae pehle ki sachayi …

Geet starts her story now …..

Main college kae final year main pad rahi thi …. aur ek din mujhe dekhne ladkae waale Canada sae aye thae …. main shaadi karna nahin chathi thi …aur yehi baath maine wo ladkae sae bhi kehdi thi …. par meri parivar valon ki vajah sae mujhe shaadi kae liye haan karna padaa …. kyunki ladke waalon ko jaldi thi aur meri darji ko yeh rishta ko chodna mansoor nahin tha … meri shadi 3 din main tey kar di thi … Visa kae bahane un logon nae meri signatures blank papers par lae liye thae aur maine sign bhi kar di thi … shaadi ki puuri tayyari ho gayi thi sirf 3 din main ….

Meri shaadi mandir main ho gayi thi …..

Maan – shadi … mandir main …. (maan's face started becoming pale now ….. )

Aur meri shadi kae baad mere ghar walon nae mujhe aur mere saath main mere sab kuch ko un logon kae hawalae kar di thi … aur meri bidaai mandir sae hi kardi gayi thi kyunki agale din mujhe un logon kae saath delhi sae flight pakadna tha …. Par Delhi jaathe waqt humara gaadi karab ho gayi thi … aur us wajah sae humae raaste main ek lodge main rukhna padaa …. Agar us din hamari gaadi karab nahin hota tho shayad acha hota ….

Agar aapko yaad ho … tho aap mujhe us raat ko mujhsae takrayae bhi thae wo lodge main …

Maan was like – us raat ko … he remembers that incident … & their conversation at that time …

Geet - us waqt main apni pati ko dundh rahi thi…kyunki main kamrae main akeli thi aur mujhe darr bhi lag raha tha …. Phir wo mujhe milae …. Aur phir … phir …

Geet's tears are uncontrollable now … still she is continuing her story ….

Maan's face becomes paler and paler as the story progresses ….. but he is silently listening 2 her story …

Us insaan nae mera sab kuch lut liya tha …sab kuch …. Us waqt main yae nahin janthi thi ki mere saath aagae kya hone wala hain ….

Phir aglae din hum airport kae liye nikal gayae thae … Airport main un logon nae mera saara saman , meri jewelry sab kuch check in karwaliya tha …. Phir coffee kae bahane mujhe canteen main bitaaya us admin nae … uski bahen ,maa aur bhabhi hum dono ko chod kar udhar sae chale gaye thae …phir mere upar coffee gir gayi thi …. Tho main use dhonae chali gayi thi … aur wash room sae bahar aane kae baad dekha tho udhar koi bhi nahin thae sab log mujhe airport main chod kar chale gaye thae …

Phir mere ghar walon nae mujhe wapas ghar lae kar aye … phir mere pariwar walon ko pata chala tha ki wo log dokhe baaz hain … un logon ka phone ya kuch bhi nahin mil raha tha … mujhsae shaadi sirf mere dahej kae liye ki thi un logon nae … sab kuch miltha hi mujhe chod kar chalae gaye thae ….

Phir uskae baad aap hamare ghar aye thae zameen kae silsilae main … wohi zameen jo mujhsae mere pati …. Dhokae baaz pati nae …dhokae sae lae li thi … tab tak main ye baat nahin maan rahi thi ki un hone mujhe dokha diya … par jab aap nae mujhe wo papers dikhaya tha jismae meri signature thae …tab mujhe samajh main aa gaya tha …thi un logon nae mere signature ka kya kiya … meri zameen un ho nae aap ko dhokae sae baech di … aur main baehosh hogayi thi …

Phir us din maine yeh tay kar li thi … ki main us admi ko doondh kae hi rahungi … is liye main ne aap sae wo agent ka number maanga tha thaki main un logon tak pahunch pa vu aur unko poonchu ki un logon nae mere saath aisa kyun kiya maine un logon kaa kya bigaada tha jo un hone meri zindagi barbaad kar di thi … phir mujhe unka canada ka phone #mil gaya tha …aur usi waqt mujhe pata chala tha … ki … main …. Main …maa …. maa bannae waali hoon …. Geet started crying even more loudly now ….

& Maan …poor Maan …uski pairon tale tho zammen hi kisak gayi … he got the shock of his life …. Usko aisa jhatka mila ki uskae tho hosh hi ud gaye thae ….. He never expected some thing like this could have happened to his Geet …

Phir aapne mujhe kaha tha ki hummae Amritsar jaana padega … maine phir Canada phone kiya tha aur un ko bola tha ki main maa banne waali hun aur mujhsae milnae kae liye maine unko Amritsar bulaya tha … Phir main aapke saath udhar gayi …paper work khatam karne… udhar wo insaan nahin aya tha … par uski bhabhi aayi thi … aur maine unko bataya ki mujhse us aadmi sae milna hain …. Phir mujhe ek aur baat pata chali ki … wo aurat jo unkae bhabhi ban kar ayi thi …wo asal main unki bhabhi nahin … biwi thi …

Unhone mujhsae dhokae sae shadi ki …upar sae pehlae sae hi shadi shuda thae …

Phir yeh baat mere ghar walon ko pata chal gaya tha … ki main … maa banne waali hun … tho wo chahthae thae ki main bache ko abort kar lu … par main aisa nahin karna chahthi thi …kyunki maine kuch bhi galat nahin ki thi … mere saath jo hua galat hua … isliyae wo log mujhe maar nae nikal pade thae … phir aap mujhe bachane aye …thae …

Uskae baad maine mere bhai ko jail baech diya ..aur meri pariwar ko tyaag karkae Delhi aa gayi thi ….delhi aane kae baad kya hua aapko bhi malum hain …

Maan walks out of the room after knowing the truth he was already going backwards step by step after learning about her pregnancy …. His face has become so pale … so dull ...Maan leaves the Outhouse in silence ....

Geet falls on her bed & is crying ....

Will be updating the next part shortly ….. don't miss the next part ....

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Omg...maan is broken....damn please update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow thats awesome
What will be Maan's reaction?
will be waiting for the next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Cant wait for the next part...
Continue soon
Thanx for the PM

Take Care
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Cant wait for the next part...
Continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Aww..Poor maan...!!!! 😭😭 Pls post the next parrt jaldi seeeeeeeeeeeee..........
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Atlast the truth came out
Jus loves the way Geet told the truth so in future it doent hurt Maan
Update soon wanna c Maan's reaction

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