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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow nice update.. poor maan.. cant wait to c his reaction.. do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome update!! Awww poor maan!! Can't wait for next part. Pls cont.soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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friends ... my computer crashed ... I will try 2 update the next post ..ASAP ..please bear with me ... I wil have 2 get it fixed or buy a new one ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great update. finally maan knows the truth about what happened in the past
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Posted: 14 years ago
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what an awesome update!! realy looking forward to the next update!!
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hey it was nice update.... plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon desperately waiting for the next one...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice FF. Today I read it in one go from chapter1. ...very nicely interwoven with the ciuurent script. ...Keep it up...eager to read more. update soon..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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sorry 4 the late update ... my computer crashed ...purchased a new laptop yesterday night ....
Part 11 :-
Maan walks out of the out house in silence …. & Geet is lying on her bed crying inconsolably ……

Maan is walking in his garden …. he sits on a bench & starts thinking about every thing ….

The first time how they both met …. How he was always misunderstanding her from day 1 …. How he was jumping to conclusions about geet even before knowing her truth …. & she never ever had said a single word against him ….

He was thinking 2 himself " wo zameen kae baarae main hamesha sach bol rahin thi …. Aur main ….. maine kabhie bhi uske bath kae upar viswaass nahin kiya …usko maine hoshiarpur main kitna bhala bura kahan uski kitni baezathi ki phir bhi phir bhi usnae kabhie bhi mujhe kuch bhi nahin kaha … jab wo us zameen par behosh ho gayi thi aur main usse uska ghar lae jaa raha tha us waqt bhi tho ek aurat bol rahin thi …ki iski shaadi hogayi thi …ae bath main kaise bhool gaya tha …aur Geet ko …. maine bhi tho shadi kae jhodae main dekha tha lodge main…par mujhe yeh sab kabhie yaad kyun nahin aaye thae ….

Usnae mujh sae sirf wo agent ka number denae kae liye bola tha wo bhi maine use sahi waqt pae nahin di thi …. Aur phir jab maine dena chaha tho usne court house main liya nahin … kyun ki usi waqt usko ek aur sachayi ka pata chala tha ….. Aur wo sachayi ka samna nahin kar sakhi isiliye road pae aise jaa rahin thi …. Saamne sae gaadi aa rahan tha phir bhi usko hosh hi nahin tha … aur main… maine yeh bhi nahin socha kae is ladki ki aisi kya pareshani hain …. Isliye jab bhi main uskae saath kuch galat kartha tha wo taviz mere samne aa jathi thi …aur mujhe ae ehsaas detha tha ki main kitna galat kar raha tha uskae saath … phir Delhi kae embassy main bhi maine usko bhala bura kahan …. Phir bhi wo chup chap sun rahi thi … sach main main Dusht Danav hun… kitna sathaya tha maine use..." ……………….

"Aur Isiliye tho wo us din party kae baad bol rahin thi …ki usko Rahul jaise kai logon ka samna akele hi karna padega … us waqt main yeh samajh nahin saka kae wo aise kyun bol rahin thi … par main ab samajh gaya hun …isiliye usnae meri madad kae liye bhi mana kardi thi us din …. usko laga ki yeh zindagi ki ladai usse akeli hi ladna padega…"

"Aur Darga jaane sae pehlae bhi maine uskae saath kithna galat barthav kiya tha … uskae upar ilzaam lagaya ki wo mere paise ki pichae padi hain ….jabki uskae saath bhi wohi hua jo mere saath hua tha …kisi nae use 3 din main dhoka diya tha aur uska sab kuch cheenliya tha uss sae phir bhi wo kitni himmat sae yeh ladai ladne ki koshish kar rahin hain … aur yeh 3 din main dhoka khanae ki baat tho usnae mujhse hoshiarpur main bhi kahin thi par us waqt maine zyaada dhyan nahin di thi .… aur main mere saath jo dhoka hua …uski vajah sae sari auraton sae nafrat kar raha tha … par usnae aise nahin kiya tha …. Wo apni zindagi jaise bhi hain usi main kush rehnae ki koshish kar rahin hain .... Zindagi ki choti choti kushiyon sae hi santhusht rehnae lagi thi …."

……… phir baad main jab dargae main ….. jab usko pyar ka ehsaas ho gaya tha wo yeh out house or naukri chod kae jaa rahi thi … aur jab maine puncha tho wo sach bol rahi thi …. ki meri wajah sae nahin jaa rahi thi … jabki maine ye socha ki meri subah kae barthav ki wajah sae wo jaa rahin thi … par uskae jaane ki wajah thi ki wo mujhse pyar karne lagi thi … par uskae past ki wajah sae wo idhar rehna nahin chathi thi us ko laga ki us ski vajah sae mujhe dukh hoga … aur jab maine dadi ma kae naam sae use rokh liya tha tab wo mujhe mana bhi nahin kar payi … aur rukh gayi … isliye tho us din sae uskae barthav main maine badlav dekha tha wo mere paas ane sae kathra rahin thi …. Aur jab wo mere paas ane sae kathra rahin thi tho main yeh bardhast nahin kar saka aur main khud uskae paas jaane kae bahane doond raha tha … kabhi file tho kabhie coffee kae bahane sae uskae paas jaatha rahan …

Aur jab wo mujhe Thanks kehnae kae liyae ayi thi tho main bhi us din apne aap ko sambal nahin paaya tha aur maine uskae kaanon main jhumka lagaya tha jo curtain main atak gaya tha ...uskae ihtnae nazdeek chala gaya tha …. isliyae uskae aglae din sae hi wo nayi naukri doond na chahthi thi … taaki wo mujhsae dur rahen … aur us din sae wo mujhae jyaada avoid kar rahin thi …. Usnae aaj tak kitna sahan hain … phir bhi uskae muh sae uff tak nahin ayya …

Aur Is liye jab dadima nae mere liye ladki dundnae kae liye bola tho usnae wo bhi kiya … is bath sae usse dukh pahunch tho rahan tha par wo kabhie bhi apni zubaan sae wo bath bahar aane nahin diya …

…… Chahe tho wo yeh bacha abort karke apni nayi zindagi start kar sakthi thi wo … par usne aisa nahin kiya …. Kitni mushkillae sehan karkae bhi wo is bachae ko janam denae kae baare main soch rahin thi …. Agar wo chahthi tho mujhsae sach chupa sakhthi thi …aur apni puuri zindagi aaram sae bitha sakhthi thi mere saath …. aur yeh jaannae kae baad ki main usse kitna pyar kartha hun … wo chaahthi tho mere pyar ka phaydaa utaa sakhthi thi … par usnae aise nahin kiya …..

…. Balki aagae aake mujse sachayi batayi …. Uski Yeh sachayi jaane kae baad tho mujhe wo aur jyada achi lagnae lagi hain … us main ithni himmat hain … aur main use kamzor samajh rahan tha …. kamzor tho main hun uss kae samne … meri kamzori ki wajah sae tho usko ek baar naukri bhi chod kae jaana padaa kyun ki main apne aap ko sambhal nahin paaya uski pyar main us ko is kadar majboor kiya ki wo naukri chod kae chali gayi …. Aur iska ek din mere saath nahin rehnae par main pagal ho gaya tha aur usse kitna MISS kar raha tha ..... baad main jab wo milli tho tab bhi main usko bhala bura kahtha rahan aur wo chup chap sab sehan karthi thi …..Maan never leave her alone…. Don't let her go away from U …

Maan aisi ladki ko apni zindagi sae bahar nahin jaane dena Maan …. Wo bahut achi hain ….

Us sae acha Humasafar tumhae chirag lekar doondnae sae bhi nahin mileage …..

Then suddenly Maan realizes his mistake tht he left her alone …..

Maan tum usse akelaae aisi haalat main chod kae kaise aagayae ho … agar wo ghar chod kae chali gayi tho … Geet ka koi bharosa nahin hain … jaa kae dekho wo kaisi hain …. Kya kar rahi hain …. Kahin daer na ho jaaye …. Aur agar wo chali gayi tho … tumhara sacha pyar tumsae dur jaane sae pehlae use rokh lo Maan abhi bhi daer nahin hui hain …..

Thinking all this he runs 2 the out house it's already morning …… we can hear the chirping of the birds …..

He goes inside the outhouse but does not find Geet's suitcase where he left last night …thinking that she might taken it upstairs he runs to Geet's bedroom … Bedroom ,closets are also empty … checks the bathroom , kitchen that's also empty … could not find Geet any where … Geet left the house .

Maan quickly calls Pinky while walking out of the out house… Pinky is still asleep … Pinky answers the phone in half sleep …

Maan – pinky kya geet udhar ayi hain kya ….

Pinky 2 herself – maan sir …ithnae subah subah …. Geet kae bare main punch rahen hain …

Pinky – sir … Geet yehan nahin hain sir… kya ..hu…

Maan cuts the call ….

He calls the security near the gate & enquires about Geet …

Maan – Geet ko tum logon nae dekha kya …

Security – haan sir Geet madam …suitcase lae kar jaa rahi thi …aur wo ro bhi rahin thi …

Maan – tum ne usko roka kyun nahin …

Security – hamain kya malum tha sir ki wo kahan aur kis liyae jaa rahi thi hum nae puncha tho tha par unhone kuch jawab nahin diya tha …. Haan par unko taxi main bait thae waqt suna tha ki wo Delhi Bus Stand jaa rahi thi ….

Maan runs now while still talking to them … kitna waqt hua…

Security – yehin lag bag 15 min ….

Maan hangs the phone call & runs 2 the car & rushes to Delhi Bus Stand …

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next part Will be updated very soon ....

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: whitepearl

Nice FF. Today I read it in one go from chapter1. ...very nicely interwoven with the ciuurent script. ...Keep it up...eager to read more. update soon..

I read your FF too ... very nice 1 ... i liked it ... did you update it .... I have read till they both talk 2 each other in the garden .... after Geet knows tht maan knows her secret .... did u update after tht ....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow..just magnificent that he recites the entire story to himself and realises
this is the bet realisation i've ever come across..if fact this the benchmark for a realisation....loved it to the core
just left me speechless.....breatless...thoughtless
just WOW!!!!Hope he catches Geet before she leaves for wherever she's heading

thanks for the update
please update soon

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