FF-Maan's confession&Geet's revelation-53last part - Page 6

Liked both the parts

The way Maan purposed her was jus fab

Loved it Geet leaving the house Maan wnt let her do that

Lets c wat happens aage

Geet 2 herself – "Ab main kya Karun babaji …Sir tho aa gaye hain …."

Maan comes & takes the suitcase from her & keeps it down & comes very close 2 her & the conversation starts…

Maan – tum dhabe sae aise rothe huae kyun baag gayi thi Geet …. tumhare rone ki vajah kya hain Geet …..

Geet silently nods her head saying no …. Still has tears in her eyes …

Maan - Phir tum kyun ro rahi thi Geet … abhi bhi ro rahi ho Geet … Tumhe malum hain Geet …. Main Tumhari ankhon main aasun nahin dekh sakhtha …… mujhe acha nahin lagtha jabbi tum rothi ho ….

It is actually not that easy for Geet 2 tell him the reason all of a sudden …. She was thinking what 2 do now …

Geet – mujhe jaane dijiye Sir ….

Maan - Tum kab tak aise mujhse sae aur haalat sae door bagogi Geet …. Kab tak ….

Geet standing still .....

Maan – haan ….. teek hain … Jao Geet jao ….. Mujhe aisi tadapthe hua dekh kar tumhe bahut khushi ho rahi ho gi naa ….. Mujhe yani kae Maan Singh Khurana ko aise tumhare saamne gid gida thae hua dekh kar …. acha lag raha hain Geet ….waise bhi ….

Tumhe kya faraq padtha hain ki main kaise rahun … main jiyu ya marrrr….Geet puts her hands on Maan's mouth & does not let him finish his sentence ….

They both have a short sad mahi moment …..

Maan takes her hand off his mouth … continues his grilling …..

Maan – Bolo Geet ab kya hua hain … kya tumhe mere rehnae ya na rehnae sae kuch faraq padtha hain Geet ……

bolo Geet bolo … Agar mere rehnae ya na rehnae sae tumhe kuch faraq nahin padtha hain tho us din tum darga kyun ayi thi Geet ….

Geet – Darga ….

Maan – haa Darga ….

Geet – wo maine aapko bathaya tha na dadima ki vajah sae ….

Maan – Jhooth …. Mujhe malum hain Geet tum darga kis vajah sae ayi thi ….

Tum darga meri vajah sae ayi thi ….tumhe kya laga mujhe malum nahin hain ….

Us din jab maine phone kiya tha … tho hamari baat teek sae ho nahin paayi thi …. aur meri sirf ek baath tumhe sunayi diya tha ki problem hogayi hain … aur uski upar sae meri photo toot gayi thi ….. aur tumhara dupatta phat gaya tha ….

Aur teek us sae pehle tum ne kaha tha ki agar tumhare bas chalae tho tum mera chehraa tumhari zindagi main kabhie nahin dekhogee … in sab cheezon ko dekh kar tumhe darr laga ….. aur dadima sae pataa kar kae tum mujhe doond nae darga pahunch gayi …..hain naa Geet ….

Geet looking at Maan …. Not knowing what to say ….

Maan - Aur darga main jab maine tumhe dekha tho mujhe usi din patha chal gaya tha ki tum bhi mere liye kuch mehsoos karthi ho … Maine tumhare andhar wohi ehsaas dekha tha jo ehsaas mere andhar ghar kar chukae thae …..

Maan – Geet aaj main idhar sae mere sawalon ka jawab liye bina jaungaa nahin …. Samjhi Tum

Maan - Agar tumhe mere liye kuch bhi …. kuch bhi mehsoos karthi ho Geet …tho please mujhe bata do …

Poor Geet who has been so stressed since that morning could not take it any longer & she faints ….. Maan catches her in his arms ….

will B updating the next part hopefully very soon .....

amazing update.. hope geet's alrite.. waiting for maan's reaction on knwing the truth.. do continue soon

haha dadi scene was hilarious ...lol:P amazing... do continue..!!

omg..ur ff is fab yaar
read all the parts in one go...love it
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love it
can't wait to see what happens next

Nice update

OMG thats awesome...........

Now of course we know that Maan will no the reason of Geet's denial....waiting to know his reaction...!!!

Superb update!! Hope that geet is fine...can't wait for the next part. Pls cont.soon

great parts dear
geet running away and maan reaching outhouse at right time .
maan asking her questions was very genuine
his thoughts about geet coming to dargarh was perfectly correct.
geet fainting was tagda twist.
do continue
bye sumi