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Posted: 13 years ago
Finally got the chance to update - after long time. Busy in life and much more. I hope you'll enjoy it.

Thank you.

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Part Thirty-Two

Footstep are getting aloud. I can hear them.

"What is happening to me? Where am I?" she tries to recall how she got here. Suddenly the voice came clear to her "Rahul" she whispered.

-

Maan left his office in search for Geet who left five hours ago and hasn't reach. He starts driving faster than never.

"Where are you?"

-

..."haan Rahul" he shouted in Geet's ear.

Geet tries moving backwards, but Rahul grabbed her hair in his fist "I've tried my best in bringing you back into my life, but you always trying to escape me. Finally you have done that! If you didn't go closer to him than I wouldn't have to hurt innocent life again."

Geet spit on Rahul's face...

Rahul got mad "how are you" he tugged on her hair tightly "I've kept my eyes on you from every go time. Remember the first time we met" Geet recalls those moments. Her friendship with Rahul and much more "I curse those moments" Geet shouted in his ear.

Rahul: You curse those moments and I curse those people who are connected with you. When Bhai and his darling wife always tried to keep you away from me. I had to kill them.

Geet: That's mean I was always right about you. You killed Juju and Di

Rahul: Haan! I had to kill bro and his wife. I had no option left and than came my dearest nephew who had to come between us. I just hate him. I tried to kill him.

Geet: Those incidents that took place between Prithvi..

Rahul: Yes, it was me. I tried to get rid of him, but no

Geet bit Rahul's arm and tried to escape. Rahul caught her "aren't you going to listen what I've planned for your husband and you?"

Geet: You won't

Rahul: Nothing can stop me.

Geet: Maybe nothing can stop you, but my death can.

She pushed Rahul away and ran from there.

-

Frustrated Maan smash the walls. He shouted on the phone "I don't care, but just find my wife" He hung up the phone and continued his search.

Geet's friends came...

Maan: Did you guys find any news on Geet?

Armaan: Sorry dude

Atul: We tried every contact we knew

Ridzy: Where could she be? Geet never does this.

Anjali: I'm scared for her. Atul do something? I think we should reveal everything to Dad

Ridzy: We can't! Di

Pinky came rushing inside with Adi "where is Geet?"

Maan tries to say something, but than notice the pain her friends hold for them.

Adi: Maan sir, don't worry everything will be fine. We'll fine Geet Bhabhi soon.

Atul: Rahul?

Armaan: What about him?

Atul: I mean to say. We looked everywhere, but Rahul

Ridzy: Armaan, what if Rahul?

Anjali: Don't you guys remember. He was always possessive over Geet during our internship time before Geet left in-between.

Armaan: Oh yeah! We always thought

Maan interrupt: Who's Rahul? And what's going on?

Armaan: Rahul he's our fellow doctor who liked Geet at point "he's my uncle" everyone looked at Prithvi who had tears in his eyes.

Maan: Prithvi?

Prithvi: Why Dad? How could you not tell me? Mom is missing from hours wise.

Armaan: Prithvi listen to us

Prithvi: No

He push everyone who tried coming closer to him. Tani came rushing toward the noise and saw her husband broken.

Tani: What happen? Prithvi?

Ridzy: Tani, Geet is missing

Tani: Mom!

Armaan: Hey guys, can we try to figure out where Rahul is? If we can find him than we can find Geet. Atul call Rahul and see where he is? Wifey and Anjali go to Sanjeevani in Delhi.

Ridzy: Why?

Armaan: Kreeti Ma'am wants us to attend the meeting and if non of us attended she'll be mad.

Anjali: Amy got appoint

Armaan: Maan, please don't worry. Everything will be fine. Just trust us.

Maan: I am putting my faith in you guys for a-change.

-

Geet hide behind a tree.. breathing deeply.

Geet thoughts: I have to contact Maan or Amy before something happens.

Rahul looking here and there "Geet I know where you are hiding"

Geet kept on praying to her Babaji for her safety.

Rahul went other way and Geet took her chance. She escape and found a telephone booth. Before she could say anything Rahul covered her mouth.

-

Atul: Amy, he isn't picking up his phone and I fear

Armaan: Nothing will happen to Geet. Maan, what's wrong?

Maan: I just had a phone call and before I could pick it up. It got disconnect. I feel like Geet

Armaan: What was the number?

Maan showed Armaan the number and instantly he understood the area code.

Armaan: Atul, he's dead

Maan: What happen?

Armaan: The number you got miss call from his near by Rahul's cottage. We have gone their many times except for Geet. That mean Geet isn't far from us. Let's go.

Armaan: Stay here and keep me in touch.

Atul: Yes

Maan left with Armaan.

-

Rahul threw Geet on the bed. Geet crawls backwards, but too late. Rahul pulls her by the ankle than he comes on top of her.

She tries struggling "leave me"

Rahul: If I wanted to leave you than I wouldn't have caught you. Now please carefully if you want your dearest hubby alive than

Geet: Just shut up (she pushed him with her power)

Rahul: You little

Geet: What did you think? I am scared of you. I rather die than allow you touching me.

Geet pick up the knife "if you come any step closer than" she point the knife toward her stomach "sorry baby" she touch her stomach. "Mom loves you a-lot, but I doubt we'll be able to meet your dad again" Rahul doesn't take Geet's threat seriously.

Geet: I am warning you.

Rahul: I know! You won't do anything.

Geet: I swear on my husband and my child.

Rahul: Prove it!

Geet silently pray to her Babaji "Babaji I am coming with my child toward you. Please always protect my Maan and my Prithvi. Please forgive me but Rahul hasn't left me any other choice. Just tell Maan that I love her"

-

Armaan: Maan, what happen?

Maan: I felt as if Geet is calling me. She's in trouble. How far is Rahul's cottage?

Armaan: we're almost there

-

Rahul: I knew it! You don't have guts.

Geet: Whatever I've done it life. I always remembered, but I curse the day I loved you. Thank god Maan came into my life and proved that love can happen for second time. I swear if this is the only option left than the entire world know Geet only belong to Maan Singh Khurana and for him. She'll die.

Geet stabbed herself and same time Maan broke the door "Geet" he shouted.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Finally got the chance to update - after long time. Busy in life and much more. I hope you'll enjoy it.

Thank you.

...

Part Thirty-Three

Armaan park the car and Maan rushed out toward the cottage. He broke the door (search entire house and when he reached the bedroom) his eyes froze.

"Geet" he shouted.

Geet look at him "I'm sorry" she mumble. Maan ran toward her and caught Geet before she lands on the ground.

Armaan grabbed Rahul's collar "how could you" he shouted.

Rahul froze on the spot.

Armaan just left him and rush toward Geet. Geet breathe deeply "why did you?" only words left Armaan's mouth.

Geet: Armaan, you have always protected me like a brother. Always stay with your Juju and never let Prithvi feel motherless.

Armaan: Nothing will happen to you. So shut up. Maan say something.

Maan finally spoke "why?"

Geet: Tere Liye. I rather die than let that Rahul touch me and our child. Please forgive me for taking away your right in loving our child. I know! I've always troubled you and finally you are free from me.

Maan: Shut up! You might have trouble me, but its your right. I swear to god nothing will happen to you and our child.

Geet breathing deeply "I don't have that much time. You see I have strong connection with Babaji and he's calling me. Please promise me you'll take care of Prithvi and Tani.

Maan: Nothing will happen to you.

Geet: Promise me!

Maan: I promise

The minute those words escape from Maan's mouth Geet close her eyes "I love you" only word echoed. Maan and Armaan kept on shouting her name, but its too late. She left the word "I'm sorry she's no more" Armaan told Maan who looked shattered. His life is gone with his child.

-

Dadi kept on waking back and forth. Tani tried calming her along with Ridzy and Anjali.

Riddhima tries Armaan's phone (same time he comes inside).

Riddhima rush toward Armaan "tell me you found Geet"

Armaan just stood frozen without words. Anjali kept on shaking Armaan "she's gone"

Ridzy: What do you mean? Where did she go and where is Juju?

Maan walked inside with died Geet in his arms. Everyone rush toward him "what happen to Geet? What is wrong with her? Why isn't she waking up?"

Maan stood numb while Armaan told everyone what happen. They stood shock. Prithvi came rushing down the stairs "where is Mom?"

Prithvi saw his Mom in his Dad's arm. He rush toward them "what happen to Mom? Dad?" He shook Maan.

Maan shouts "she's no more"

Prithvi move backwards "Mom can't leave me. Mamu you are doctor. Do something. Mom can't leave me" he ran up the stairs into his room.

Maan place Geet on the floor "Tani let me" Tani nods her head.

Tani nods her house.

Entire Khurana mansion is filled with tears. Maan entered Prithvi's room (Prithvi sitting in a concern hugging Geet's photo).

Maan touch his head.

Prithvi looked at his Dad with watery eyes.

Maan: It's hard! I know you have lost more than me in life. To be honest I know your pain. I lost my parents at very young age and now my wife.

Prithvi: Dad... Mom, can't leave us.

Maan: It's life! You know what your Mom said before she left this world?

Prithvi: What?

Maan: She said.. my Prithvi is very strong person but a-little emotional like me. I've always lived for him and died for my family.

Prithvi hugged his Dad tightly and both of them shed tears.

-

(Geet's soul Speech)

Geet:I've lived for my Prithvi and after my marriage for Maan. I can never see them in trouble than how can I see them broken.

Prithvi, Armaan, Atul and Adi walked holding each concern of Geet's funeral. Maan walking in front holding a pot.

Everyone shedding tears while walking with corpse.

Maan walked around the corpse around few times before dropping the pot backwards than with shaky hand holding the stick.

He couldn't burn her corpse. Prithvi stood beside his Dad and holds his hand. Together they both burn Geet's body while remembering their moments with her.

Geet: I know its hard. How can I feel my family's pain? They don't know how to live without me.

Dadi shown shedding tears while Riddhima and Pinky trying to console both Dadi and Tani. Maan came home with pot filled with Geet's burn corpse.

Tani hugged Prithvi.

Maan just took both Tani and Prithvi in his arms along with Dadi. Riddhima hugged her husband and Anjali hugged Atul.

Geet: My journey began with my Juju and Di than Prithvi afterwards my friends. They met the world to me. I can not see them in pain. We were each others strength and I know they'll always stand by my family. I only know one thing my death belong to those people I love. Tere Liye.

-

Five years later

Tiny little pair of feet is shown. She is running around the place away from her mother. Her mother kept on saying "Drashti, stop beta"

Drashti: No way Mom

Her mother kept on running behind her afterwards some time she caught Drashti and starts tickling her.

Drashti: Mom stop it!

Her mother "alright! Now my daughter will drink her milk"

Drashti: Mom, I hate milk and Dadu say I am carbon copy of Dadi. Even Dadi hates milk. Tell me more about Dadi.

Her mother smiled and touch her forehead "your Dadi taught everyone how to fight for her loved ones by giving up her life. She taught us the meaning of Tere Liye"

Drashti: Mom what does Tere Liye mean?

Two people walked inside with many gifts in their hands. Drashti ran toward them and hugged them.

Drashti: I miss you Dad and Dadu

Drashti's Dad: How is my angel?

Drashti's Mom: Why don't you ask me? Prithvi?

Prithvi: What did my angel do now?

Tani: Ask me! Each day she makes me run with glass of milk behind her. She's just like

Dadu: Just like my Geet

Prithvi: Haan humari Geet is back in the roop of Drashti

Maan kissed Drashti and kissed her forehead. He look toward Geet's photo "You came back in our life through Drashti. Drashti taught us the meaning of life again after you. I miss you and our daughter. I know she would just be like our Drashti. At least you have our daughter with you. Thank you for teaching us the meaning of Tere Liye. I love you Geet"

Entire family stood in front of Geet's photo. Maan help Drashti light the candle.

The End!
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow..amazing update.
love it,
awesome ending.love it.
sad that geet died..
thx
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nooo
Omg omg omg omg
I had tears in my eyes when i was reading this
Nahiii
Omg omg
Im speechless
This cnt happen
Plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for the update
but nooo whyyy :'( so sad she has to die :(
but overall a nice update
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Posted: 13 years ago
no..i didnt like the end...
she should b there wid them...
N a happy ending..
bt still it was really awsum...
emotional bt very nicely done...
thnx for the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesomeee
superbbb
but sad tht geet died
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome...
wow beautiful ending..
sad tht geet died.. luved drashti...
thanx a lot..
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it dear...
but sad ending :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you to my readers who have supported me throughout the journey of Tere Liye. I know many people are upset with the ending, but life is never perfect. Its filled with many ups and down.

Anyways I hope I'll be back again soon with new fiction once I am done my other ones.

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