(MaanEet) Tere - Final Update on Pg 69-70 - Page 41

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: swetha10

Awesome update..

luved maan's care n luv for geet...
curious to knw abt geet's pain...
continue soon



Sooner the end get closer the true is going to come out...

Take Care
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: queen_ali

AMAZINGG UPDATE

WHY GEET IS IN SO MUCH PAIN
PLEASE UPDATE SOON



You'll have to read and find out otherwise what's left the story if the twist is out before its plot 😉

Take Care
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...

i really loved it...

hw maan is taking care of his wife...its really touching...

thank u fr such a lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow..super update
Thx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it dear
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
just want them to accept their love for each other
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you to everyone for encouraging me...

Edited by Miketa - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Couple of parts left toward the end of this fiction...

Part Twenty-Nine

Dadima kept on walking back and forth waiting for Maan and Geet (entire night) in worry. Prithvi came home with Tani. They both touch Dadi's feet than hugged her.

Tani notice worry written over Dadi's expression..

Tani: Dadi, what's wrong?

Dadi smiled "actually Geet isn't feeling well and haven't reach office yesterday and now the entire night both Maan and Geet are missing" she sighs.

Prithvi: Kya? Why didn't you call me earlier?

Dadi: I thought you were still (she pause when her eyes saw Maan and Geet walking inside with their hands joint together)

Dadi smiles..

Prithvi (going to pull his hair apart): Dadi, why are you smiling now? It looks like you have gone crazy in the thought of Mom and Dad missing from last night.

Tani smiles too (Prithvi gets irritated) when he screams in pain (because Geet sneak up behind him and pulled his ear).. Prithvi turns around and hugs Geet tightly.

Geet also hugged him tightly.

Maan open his arm for Tani and Tani ran into his arms...

Dadi just smile and drop the idea of getting Tani married to Vicky when she called Maan papa. Entire family looked happy or it was just the beginning of a storm.

Dadi prayed silently to god for keeping her family together always in one bond.

-

Complete entire family of Maan walked inside the outhouse to get fresh up (because at the moment Dadi decide to keep satyanarayan puja and tie two lovers in the bond of marriage soon) without wasting time Dadi had inform entire friends of Geet and Tani's family too.

Maan walked inside with Geet toward their room. Now its their room from every angle. Geet looked at their wedding picture sitting on their table lamp and her smile gets bigger.

Maan whisper into Geet's ear "why don't we take a shower together since now on everything we do.. is going to be together so why not?" Maan winked at Geet who looked red as tomato.

Maan couldn't help himself from taking Geet's lip into his lip, but before he could capture them aloud noise break the apart.

Geet push Maan away and run outside to see Prithvi and Tani strangling each other after running around the entire house.

Geet shout "what's going on?"

Maan come rushing out (while his eyes wide up in shock)

Geet: Explain!

Prithvi goes running toward his mom and starts complaining, but Tani runs toward Maan and does the same. Afterwards, it was Maan and Geet arguing over the situation.. the loud noise reach Dadi's ear and she came running into outhouse to get a heart-attack seeing Maan and Geet pulling each others hair while Tani and Prithvi kept on smiling and arguing.

Dadi shout her lungs "enough" silent reach everywhere while Dadi gives her lecture to Maan and Geet. Prithvi gives out a laugh and next moment Geet blast Prithvi.

Prithvi frowns when Geet announce that he had to clean up the entire mansion and arrangements for the puja. Now Tani laughs seeing Prithvi's expression.

Next Maan gave Tani a glare "you find this funny, but my darling daughter Prithvi isn't doing anything alone"

Tani open her mouth wide

Maan: Close it up! Since after marriage you'll have to do everything together so why not starting from now and make sure not creating another mess instead of fixing one.

Maan put his arm around Geet's waist, but Dadi's eyes are too powerful at this age and decide to teach them a lesson as well.

Dadi: What about you Maan beta?

Maan: What have I done?

Dadi: You haven't done anything, but break rules and now its time for action. Until things aren't sort out between the progress of Tani and Prithvi marriage you'll stay in this outhouse along with Tani while Prithvi and his mother going to stay in the mansion since would-be groom and bride can not see each other until the marriage.

Maan frowns

Geet: But Dadi the date isn't even finalized?

Dadi: I forgot to announce in the mess you guys created that I've already talk with out family Guruji and he said this fallowing week is best for this lovers to get married otherwise no good dates until seven years. And knowing how much they have been away from one another – seven years too long. So its decide Geet and Prithvi stay in the mansion and Maan and Tani in the outhouse. Starting from now.

Maan whisper to himself "great! Dadi became one of those oldies who fallow only tradition than how am I suppose to give her Jr. Maan or Geet if she keeps us away" Dadi heard him and decide to teases Maan further.

Dadi: Did I make myself clear and if anyone breaks my rules than the separation of which couple would become double than ever? Cleared!

Four of them nod their heads and fallow Dadi (meaning Geet and Prithvi) while Maan stayed put.

Dadi control her laughter (seeing Maan's expression) and prayed god for keeping them always bless with his blessing and fill this house soon with tears of happiness.

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Pinky came Khurana mansion with her father than fallowed by Adi afterwards Geet's entire friend from Armaan to Abhi with their wives. Yep, Nikki and Abhi got married without letting anyone knowing.

Padma hugged Geet tightly "how is my daughter?"

Geet: Maa.. I'm fine and how are you? Why didn't Dad come?

Padma: As usual hospital and his duty. I don't get it why my entire house filled with doctors and only doctors. I hope my grandchildren don't fallow the medical line itself.

Armaan-Riddhima, Atul-Anjali, Abhi-Nikki: Mom!

Padma: Kya?

Armaan: If they don't become doctors like their parents than what else they going to do (last bit he whisper in Riddhima's ear)

Riddhima smack Armaan (on his shoulder)

Geet: Enough! Go and fresh up. Once Sapna arrives than puja will begin afterwards the celebration of Tani and Prithvi's marriage would begin.

Atul interfere: Geet making it two wedding in the house.

Geet: What do you mean?

Anjali: Finally, I've agreed to marry Atul

Geet: Kya! Anjali are you serious?

Atul: Geet!

Geet: What?

Atul: After very long years she agreed to marry me and if you say something she could change her mind any second.

Anjali glare at Atul while everyone laughed around each other.

-

Satyanarayan puja took place with every couple sitting toward while Maan and Geet smile doing each rituals together and reliving their vows again with new promise.

Tani hugged her family member while blushing the thought of getting married to Prithvi by end of this week. Prithvi also notice the smile and smiled back.

Maan took the bride side of the family into outhouse and Geet stayed put with groom side of the family. Without realizing a week fast by itself in each rituals.

It was the final day of Atul weds Anjali and Prithvi weds Tani
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Posted: 13 years ago

n me also luv u miketaaa❤️😉
but only in a friendlyyy wayyy🤣

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