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Posted: 13 years ago


You love it... I love it!

Why?

Because your smile means a-lot!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Couple of parts left toward the end of this fiction...

Part Thirty

Geet had tears seeing her son sit in the mandup waiting for Tani to sit beside him. It was always her Juju and Di's dream to see their son married and today when its happening they aren't there.

Geet tried controlling her tears, but it escape.

Maan tap Geet's shoulder and took her in his arms "there's no more tears I want to see in your eyes anymore" he kiss her forehead.

Together they watch Amit and Sapna do Tani's kanyadaan afterwards phera took place along with Atul and Anjali's. Everything was going smoothly until Dev arrived with Rahul who shouts "this marriage can not happen because my nephew is already married to Ms. Dhani Mehra"

Relatives have shock expression and gossips are being made...

Prithvi stood up in anger "you ain't my uncle or anything" he look at his Mom "I only have three relation in life" he looked at Tani who had tears streaming down her face "that makes my identity".

Prithvi wipe his Tani's tears "and they are my Geet Mom, Maan Dad and my childhood love Tani who is my soul mate"

Everyone who standing at the wedding stood numb "I know why you are doing this Mr. Rahul and stop playing your dirty games with me and my family" Prithvi glare at him.

Tani stood up "what did you think before coming here that I would not trust my Prithvi for some other person who claims to be my Prithvi's wife" Tani held Prithvi's hand "than you are wrong because I know Prithvi can only love me so deeply that death is nothing compare to the humiliation you are making out of our relation." Maaneet tries to say something, but Tani interrupts them "Or! Haan! If she is Prithvi's wife than she must be his second wife because I am already married to Prithvi (Prithvi smiles remembering their mini-argument they had on the flight and how he filled her forehead with sindoor) so it doesn't matter. Its only rituals we are completing"

Prithvi just smirk at Rahul "I think my kids have answer your question and I believe my kids; and their each words are filled with truth so you may leave otherwise I might have to throw you out" Maan finally spoke with anger.

Rahul leaves in anger with Dhani... afterwards the wedding continued with same excitement. Dadi felt happy for dropping the idea of asking for Tani's hand in marriage for her grandson Vicky when she only belongs to Prithvi. She smile at them taking blessing from their elders and hugging their friends.

-

Tani is officially welcome into Khurana Mansion as Prithvi's wife. Geet just smile while she welcome her inside (like a mother in law) afterwards they took blessing from Babaji and Ganesha.

Suddenly, Geet felt heavy (her head was spinning non-stop) she tries to control her pain, but she couldn't and collapse on the ground (by dropping the aarti ki thali)

Maan scoop Geet up in his arms and took her inside his room. He felt as if he stop breathing while Prithvi came inside with Armaan and Riddhima.

Armaan gets emotional and place Geet's head on his lap while Riddhima checked Geet. A smile forms on Riddhima's face and Armaan snaps "you are smiling when my sis's is in pain. What's wrong with you?"

Riddhima smack her forehead "why do I have a-annoying husband? I wonder if you actually passed your medical exam and who gave you a degree?"

Armaan replace Geet's head on the pillow and confront his wife "what do you mean? I am a fool who doesn't understand anything!"

Riddhima nods her head...

Armaan ready to strangle his own wife "Mamu...Mami" they look at Prithvi who control his laughter "stop it" Tani also shouts at them.

Maan had enough (he only wants to know) what is wrong with his wife (not hear them bicker among themselves) "I don't care what is happening?" They look at Maan with anger in their eyes "I just want to know what happen to my wife and why she fainted?" he greeted his teeth.

Riddhima: Actually, I was thinking you should give us a party instead of standing here?

Maan: Armaan (Ammy looked at him), is your wife gone crazy? My wife is unwell and she wants a party.

Before Armaan could say something Riddhima shouts "I am not crazy! In fact I am happy that I am becoming a Masi plus Mami"

Dadi's smile grew bigger while everyone stood confusion "Are you sure? Riddhima beti?" Riddhima nods her head and Dadi hugs Maan "thank you beta" Maan broke apart the hug "Dadi, why are you thanking me? What have I done?"

Dadi rubs her forehead "what did your mother eat while she gave birth to you? You are such a fool!"

Maan: Dadi!

Dadi: Dadi! What? I am right you are the biggest fool who doesn't understand he is going to be a father

Dadi's words struck him and he hugged Dadi tightly "I'm going to be a father"

Dadi just shook his head while Prithvi hugged Armaan and Tani does the same with Riddhima afterwards Armaan kiss Geet's forehead before walking out with Dadi.

-

Geet finally woke up, she look at her surrounding than saw her husband sitting beside her with big smile. She got confuse "why are you smiling" she asked him.

He just kissed her forehead (that makes her more) confuse than before.

He smiles "oh Geet! Stop looking at me like that after you don't know what type of happiness you gave me" he wink at her and she snap.

Geet: What are you saying? Just explain what happiness I've given you and plus my head is spinning. Also I wanna just throw up.

She gets up, but Maan carry her inside the washroom and help her after she threw up. Once they came out of the washroom "Geet thank you for bring another Maan or Geet into this world" at first she gave him a look than his words sank into her mind.

She place her hand on her stomach than hugs him tightly, by hiding herself in his chest. Maan just wrap his arms around her.

"Oyee hoyee" Maaneet broke apart by Armaan's sudden entry inside the room. Geet just ran into Armaan's arm (feeling shy and happy together).

Armaan: Feeling shy

Geet buried herself more deeper into his arms while Maan cursing Armaan (suddenly he become possessive over her)

Armaan just laughs "don't worry, when you have the entire family filled with doctors" Maan felt like choking Armaan when he winked at him.

Geet withdraw herself from Armaan's arms and looked at him

Armaan: Nothing. Its mine and Maan's joke

Geet nods her head after some moments Riddhima shouts for Armaan and he disappears like thin air. Geet gives mini laugh than suddenly gets upset because of Rahul's words echoing inside her mind.

-

Next day

Dadi kept other puja for the new happiness arriving in their home. Dadi bless Tani who brought many happiness along with her entrance in Khurana mansion and the outhouse.

Tani: Oye! Great Dadi
What are you doing? Why are you standing outside the outhouse? Why aren't you coming inside?

Dadi smiles and bless her again when she touch her feet.

Dadi: Thank you for bring many happiness into our house. After your arrival finally I've gotten every wish of mine, but only waiting for Vicky to find his true soul mate.

Tani took Dadi inside... outhouse of Khurana.

Dadi smile at Prithvi who came running down the stairs with Maan (both of them hugged Geet) and sat down on the table.

Tani: Mom.. look who's here to join breakfast with us.

Everyone look at Dadi who sat down beside by Maan. Tani and Geet start serving everyone breakfast than settle down beside their hubby.

Prithvi: Tani you'll help me around my first day in your college?

Tani: Yeah
And we should be leaving now

Prithvi stood up with Tani and took blessing from Dadi, Maan and Geet afterwards Tani quickly left to grab her bag than went zooming toward there college.

Maan stood up and whisper something in Geet's ear.

Geet smile and nods her head...

Dadi silently prayed for her family's happiness

Maan left after touching Dadi's feet.
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful update
ahhhaaa i like how dev n rahul were made to shut up with the strong bond between prithvi and tani
they are losers
but i have a feeling they will get back to them
and why is dev saying prithvi was his nephew???
chalo lets see what else u have stored for us
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Posted: 13 years ago
soo nice cute ... no words to explain :D loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome...
rahul got wht he deserved...
loved it...
its amazing to see ki geet going to b a mother...everywhere love love n only love...
thank u fr such a lovely update...
continue soon plz...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow...awesome
Love it
Geet is pregent
Mindblowing
Do continue Plz
Thx.
😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow nice update..
awww geet preggy..
cool!!! luved it..
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
cute part ...filled with lovely light moments.
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Posted: 13 years ago

awww...

loved it..

that was a really cute update..

really amazing..

cont. soon..

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Finally got the chance to update - after long time. Busy in life and much more. I hope you'll enjoy it.

Thank you.

...

Part Thirty-One

Geet wore the sari Maan left for her. She blush dark colour of red after seeing her mirror reflection.

Dadi blessed her and left toward Khurana mansion...

Geet sat inside the car and told the driver to take her to Khurana Construction..

-

Maan wrap up his work on time before Geet arrives. He wanted to take out his family (meaning Geet and his unborn child).

He look at Geet's photo on his desk "I am dying to see you in that sari. Come soon" he kissed her photo.

-

Tani came out of her class and heads straight to the library with her friends... while Prithvi sat in the canteen with his new friends – he just made. Samrat, Mayank, Benji and Uday.

Uday cracking jokes

Prithvi: Uday, you are funny

Samrat laughs and gave hi-five to Benji

Samrat: Where have you been Prithvi lately that it took you this long to join here?

Prithvi: My mom kept me far away in studying and now she couldn't since my (he remember Tani) oh shit

Mayank: What happen?

Prithvi: She's going to kill me

Samrat: Who?

Prithvi: My wife

Samrat.. Mayank.. Uday... and Benji "Your Wife"

Prithvi: Yeah! My wife! Just got married yesterday and my wife also studying here

Samrat: Who is she?

"Hey guys" voice of girls echoed in the background – behind Prithvi

Uday: Hi my sisters and Tanu

Samrat: Hey Nupur Hi Chamishe What's sup Tanu?
Let me introduce our new friend who join our gang just today

Nupur: Who?

Mayank: If you shut up than we can introduce him?

Nupur: In fact you shut up

Uday and Benji smack their heads "both of you shut up and meet Prithvi"

Nupur: Hi
Let me introduce my little sister Gunjan and she is Tanu

Prithvi greets Nupur with smile than fold her hand to greet Gunjan, but his smile grew bigger when he saw his wife Tani (also known as Tanu by her friends)... just hugged Tani and kissed her forehead.

Gunjan: Tanu, do you know him?

Samrat: Prithvi?

Prithvi: Guys, if minute ago.. you wanted to know my wife than your Tanu is my wife.

Samrat: Oh!

Prithvi: Haan and if you don't mind can I hug my wife now without any side effect

Mayank: Alright! Hug your wife, but Tanu why didn't you invite us

Tani: Sorry guys! It happen so fast that I forgot.

Nupur and Gunjan: Its okay! He's cute and welcome to our gang.

Prithvi: Thank you

Samrat: That mean Party at my place.

Prithvi: I doubt we'll be able to come

Tani: Yeah guys

Benji: Why?

Prithvi: Actually, Mom and Dad are going out tonight and we have to stay home with Dadi. Why don't you guys come Khurana mansion?

Nupur get confuse

Uday: How can you be Maan Singh Khurana's son when he just got married?

Prithvi: Actually my biological parents died and my mom's sister token care of me at very young age so I became their child.

Gunjan: That's sweet of them

Tani: Dad is so nice and Mom is the best. Anyways Prithvi did you talk with Sam about your BB passion?

Prithvi: Thanks Wifey

Tani smile at Prithvi and Samrat talking about Basket ball afterwards they agreed to come Khurana Mansion and chill with them.

Prithvi and Tani say goodbye to their friends and left.

-

Maan waits for Geet, but she didn't come. He called her cell (keeps on ringing) and he called his home. Dadi told him Geet left five minutes ago.

Maan get tense and recalls the last event took place.

-

Geet open her eyes and found herself in dark room. She gets shock and remember how she got here. She was sitting inside her car and waiting for the driver to change the tire when someone smack her driver's head afterwards put cloth by her mouth.

Geet become scared and shouts Maan's name in fear. She can hear footstep.

Edited by MistiofMistz - 13 years ago

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