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shinz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#41

OH MY GAWWD!!!

i swear....this is...like wonderfully awesome...totally something that i cherish to read!!
and u write brilliantly...with a flow umared......wonderful!!

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Mou.

@Mou.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

okk who r u? arjun in disguise?🤣 sorry that was a bad joke.....
but i feel so familiar with ur writing .i donno why? & i loved it......varun isha u select the perfect name........it can't be better than this................plz plz plz pm me next time u update.......

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stuti

@stuti123

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Posted: 15 years ago

#43

you are a superb writer ...............the update was soooooo realistic ................. it was simply superb ............ do continue soonthisFF has to be one of the best i have ever read .............

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Ally

@.PINK.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Mou.
okk who r u? arjun in disguise?🤣 sorry that was a bad joke.....
but i feel so familiar with ur writing .i donno why? & i loved it......varun isha u select the perfect name........it can't be better than this................plz plz plz pm me next time u update.......

byy gawddd Mou

Arjun in disguise🤣🤣

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Mou.

@Mou.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: rkmnsg

byy gawddd Mou

Arjun in disguise🤣🤣

by god chatterbox...missed u...🤗..loooooooooooooooong time ...where hv u been?
yeah guitarist can be arjun s disguise na! atleast that's what i felt after reading the2 parts!!!!!!!!🤣

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315925

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Posted: 15 years ago

#46

Mou I agree this does sound like Arjun in disguise.
Anyways awesome FF. Update soon 😉

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MrsJaimeFraser

@MrsJaimeFraser

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Posted: 15 years ago

#47

itz awesome...!!!!!!!!!! brilliant...wonderful..do i need 2 say more..u have done it beautifully.......can u plzz add me to ur pm list.....??i loved d concept n this part. n wud love 2 read d othr ones too....!!!!!

nad ya divya di-itz Arjun in disguise only...........itz brilliant...i love ur style.......... 👏

Edited by Deblina_ArTi - 15 years ago

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Rabi

@rose.mn

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#48

OMG>............

What is this........????????

I am speechless, another wonder piece. Oh God, how beautifully u have written i wanted to read further but it ended here only........ Hard luck....

OMG, it seems like u know ArTi so closely han,😉 all golden days and every memory was just going through my mind while reading this, hard memories too which brought tears in my eyes. Only this night i had a beautiful dream abt ArTi, I still am in that dreams after effects.😍 and now this FF or should i say a real story.........😳

It was just too beautiful to describe. I am in love with this.

Do pm me when u update...........