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Annie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

omg Guitarist....................it was so so so awesome..............

It seems like the story of two ppl i knw, and i simply love ur style of writing............

Plz do continue soon, i m excited to knw what happend next?

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Nirvrithi

@Nirvrithi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

I was wondering what if "THEY" happen to read this FF? 😉 I am sure even if they are not in love, your lines will leave them confused atleast....

Well written :) do continue...

The line I liked the most is

"She, totally contrary to her practical nature, let her reason take a walk too (probably my sense and reason accompanied hers on that walk). "

I am sure their senses were not alone in that walk- Atleast my sense was enjoying the ride with them too... 😆

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sariska sujaini

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

simply loved it

next time do pm me

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Anjali-K

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Posted: 15 years ago

#34

Interesting FF, please continue soon.

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Annie

@annie07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#35

Plz plz plz add me to pm list, i so love this ff................

u are an amazing writer................Guitarist................

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Ally

@.PINK.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#36

Part 1

hey amazing part na !!!
the conceptzzz soo different !!
really loved it to the core!!!

so Mayur worked in a daily soap together. They were good friendzz and then becuz of some agruement

they start fighting

n then later Mayu wanted to say sorry

n then the scene !!
wow really like this FF!!
-Lina-

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Ally

@.PINK.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#37

Part 2

hey sis this partzzz amazinGG!!!
really loved it !!!

love their scene !!
but then Mayu got to know that Nupur is not Isha longer!!!
wow sooundzzzz like more like ArTi

why does Rati have to go like that???😭

anywayzz amaizing part na !!
really loved reading it !!
do continue soon

n plezz do add me in ur pm list !

-Lina-

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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#38

amazing part truly awesome dear

thnx 4 d pm

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princess_dj

@princess_dj

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#39

OH it was so amazing.......... i completely loved it. 😃

Please add me to your PM list.

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Divya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#40

@deeps.. agree 😃

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