Like a River - Mayur FF part 4 - page 13

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zarfishanzahid

@zarfishanzahid

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Posted: 15 years ago

#61

nice update plz cont soon and thx alot for the pm

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You-Know-Who

@You-Know-Who

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Posted: 15 years ago

#62

Ah! That was amazing!

written wonderfully well!

Is this for real? is this fiction? I am so confused! 😆

Continue soon!=)

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princess_dj

@princess_dj

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Posted: 15 years ago

#63

Amazing update............ really really amazing............ i mean this seems so real........ i wish and hope its real for two people......😳

Love it totally...........do continue soon...........😃

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shinz

@shinz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#64

OMG ...i...u can read the sheer joy after reading this update on my face!!

guitarist...i dunno who you are.....nor do i knoe anything about you....but i assume you are a guy....cause the way u emote mayank in this FF....u write so well that i feel u are the one feeling it...u knoe what i mean LOL!!!

comign to the update....its like i have been gifted my favourite chocolate to me...im that happy:D
just awesome piece of writing....and the best part is the confusion , turmoil, desperation and pure bliss expressed and woven into words !!

if i say i was spellbound......im not exaggerating...sometimes somethings that u read leave an imprint on you...and you definitely write in a way that only the reader's heart can decipher!

u wrote amazingly!!!

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Divya

@myownarea

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Posted: 15 years ago

#65

nice 😃 now what? 😆

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Beet

@Beet

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Posted: 15 years ago

#66

Ahh, guitarist you kill me with your updates

It was totally AMAZING. 😍

Beautifully written.The way you emoted Mayank's feelings was just fabulous.

Umm so I have a question, now that she's back will you be continuing this?

Till then all the best =))

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-sam-

@-sam-

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#67

Are you Arjun?

Is this a real? Or really ff?

Whatever it is, it is out of the world!

Simply mindblowing!

Thanks for the pm

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MrsJaimeFraser

@MrsJaimeFraser

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+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#68

Ok,now i seriously ned 2 ask u-r u Arjun????!!! i m defo sure u r......!!!! 🤣 🤣

well,on a serious note..itz amazing..d way u penned down d thoughts-hats off 2 u .....
dunno who u r,but looks like u r a brilliant observer of human frailty n tenderness..u r simply amazing when it comes 2 understanding d ArTi wala Arjun 😉

wht more do i say itz amazing..i don't have words...u really dunno how broad my grin became when i saw ur pm coz i knew another brilliant part was on itz way...

thanks a zilion for d pm....loved it.

n well,whtzz next in d line??

nething after on d lines sbs/sbb segments?!!

well,u knw better though..it wil b d best as usual..!!!! 😃

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hemameenu

@hemameenu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#69

pls add me in ur pm list nice update

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455394

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Posted: 15 years ago

#70

Wow Wow Wow......you have to be Arjun or do u know him personallyy...🤣

Lovely beautifully described feelings & emotions of two co-stars

Cant wait for the next update ....they will meet on shoot ...Yaaayyy.....

Do update soon.....😆