BroKen EndS-MayUr Part-21 , Page-148 12/aug - Page 47

considering it as a ff
want mayur to be together
but in reality the person should be punished
feel so bad seeing nupurs condition
diya is really a best friend
felt bad for mayanks mom
eager to know what happens next

glad u updated early

amazing update ruchi......seriously am short of words.................i dont know what to say about mayank?? arggghhh i hate him............but like my previous comment......i feel pity 4 him somewhere in the corner of my heart..............

Ruchi n Aru
i edited my comment

RUCHI darling, what do I watch out for? It's still the same - PREDICTABLE . . what I love about this story is you, I mean the way you pen it down. You know that, don't you? Ha?

Well, okay . . I like it how Mayank's totally guilty and I so love both of Nupur's friends. Aw! Really! =]

This one's extremely well written, you are one highly talented gal. I'd proudly tell my kids in their teens, "Kiddos, I knew a doc in the making who could not just write but, WRITE in my teenage!" 🤣👍🏼

Update soon!

-Kanky

Hey Ruchi,

Man I had just read the eighth chapter and Whoa man I am so lucky to get to read two chapters consecutively. Ruchi you have gone ahead with the flow of the earlier chapters so well and as I was mentioning about M's pain being portrayed so well and thats what happened here, despite his criminal deeds as your rightly referred to them, there are moments where my heart does go out to him. Our heart and mind is usually not in line Ruchi so these questions you are raising may sound really practical and perfectly sensible but our heart many a times doesn't understand this basic logic!

Another beautiful chapter, delineating Nupur's pain together with Samrat's and Mayank's emotional turmoil so well. The end bit of Mayank with his mum, made me want to cry at the circumstances! It was sooooooo powerfully written!

Bravo bravo bravo!

Great update but Poor Nupurrr....feeling so sad for her...
continue it sooon...

i dunno what xactly to say ruchs..i m having short of words..better to say i m having all mixed emotions in myself...!!4 sure a criminal should get the punishment 4 his crime...but at the same time its also true that no matter how much huge one's crime is...he/she should atleast get one last chance of penance..ONLY if he/she is genuinely repentant of the deeds...............i leave the rest on u..and i m sure u r wise enough to take the right decision..!!all the best..

i dunno, u wrote that really well ..i hate mayank right now

hey ruchi