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Varshini

@varsh-mayur

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#1081

it ended???...expected a happy ending ...even point of view is right...come back with a new story😊

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shaheen_memon

@shaheen_memon

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#1082

frm my point od view nupur was right...she also has her own self respect

superb end dear... although i have not expected this but m happy u ened it like real life not reel life...

do continue writing such great work...⭐️

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#1083

Amazing end to an amazing story

Loved it

Do write more

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Gul

@DhanakZ

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#1084

Lovely Ending dear

i am agree no one can forget all this so easily

I am so happy to see U back dear

thanks for pm

Waiting for yours next creation

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Alisha2887

@Alisha2887

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#1085

Brilliant update Ruchi
This was the best ending for this story. It would be impossible for Nupur to forget what Mayank did. I'm glad they were together as friends for their son.

Please do write more FFs Ruchi
Thanks a lot for the pm

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#1086

beautiful part.

lovely ending.

i respect nupur's decision.

thanks for the pm.

plzz come back soon with another fanststic FF :D

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Swati

@SwatiBeanyBrown

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#1087

res..

thank heavens u updated doctor! 🤣

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Jiya

@Jiyyaa

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#1088

how much u have made us wait

finally an update bt it ended !!

Kyuu 😭

i was a big fan.. i wished for it to continue further anyways.. do write more on mayur and if do update ur ff soon this tym, i barely had any hope tht this ff was gonna be completed. it took me few seconds to realize wat i was reading on my pm list was rite or was i just seeing things🤣

but i opened ur pm and yes my eyes were rite u did update it🥳It was FAB 👏