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anju011

@anju011

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Posted: 15 years ago

#481

awesome update ruchi.
loving how dia & samrat took care of nupur.
u have portrayed nupur's condition well.
mayank is really feeling guilty but what he has done is not at all forgivable.
loved it.
continue soon.

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zarfishanzahid

@zarfishanzahid

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Posted: 15 years ago

#482

fantastic part ruchi

thx alot for the pm

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#483

Well im jus confuse

Im feeling pitty for Mayu's condition but is also hating him for doing wat he did to Nups

Sam was also getting weak but he ahd to keep strong face for Nups n Dia

Dia was the strongest i feel in all of them

Hop Nups jus gets wells soon

MM will hate herself for agreeing wit Mayu to marry Nups

Lets c how Mayu makes up thgs for his sin

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Nikki

@dmgmjht4ever

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+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#484

Okay, I just read this whole ff, and trust me, I cried. Never in my life have I ever done that with an ff. Ruchi, you truly made me fall in love with this story. The way you wrote it and EVERYTHING, you truly have the talent of writing and I want to see you continue writing more and more stories. Thanks Ruchi, for making me realize how amazing of a writer you are

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#485

awesome update
very well written
speechless no words to describe

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Ally

@.PINK.

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#486

part 8

ufff Ruchi sachi mein

i have no wordzz for this part

u wrote it soo beautifully

just loved it!!

frm the starting to ending !!

u know Mayu feelzz guilty for wat he did really loved how u wrote everything

u r an amazing writer

n Nupur I just wish she doesnt hate Mayank anymore !!
cant see her hating Mayank like that !!
n Samrat

I wish he sees the good side of Mayank too !!
becuzz I know therezz a good side of him !!!
anywayzzz now Nupur/Samrat/ n Dia somewhere

wonder if they went to Nupurzz parentzz to tell them !!!
just cant wait to read the next part!
-Lina-

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dua

@dua22

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#487

part 8 & 9 both were awesome

story is damn interesting

thanks for the pm

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Reema Bhatia

@reema_arti

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#488

hey ruchi!!!

awesome update...

waiting for ur next update...

plzz add me to ur pm list...

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#489

ruchiiiiiiii

simply awesum

loved it

i dont feel pity on mayank

he has committed a big sin

bechari nupur

bahut bura lagta hai uske liye

fabulous update ruchii

as i said i am so in love with this ff

and ya at the end mayur will be together na????

do cont soon

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tehzeeb25

@tehzeeb25

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#490

ruchi yaar plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

update soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz