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supercool3

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Posted: 15 years ago

#451

aww that was soo sad.. Nupur I understand her situation.. any girl would react that way.. also feel bad for Mayu too... atleast he realizes his mistake .. that's a good starts and wow.. he admitted that she has a place in his heart .. that's really cute even in such a serious situation.. can't wait to read the next part

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Posted: 15 years ago

#452

Its my time!
Yuppie
I studied!

Nivi dii, Faridii, Aru dii
I was studying ... But see still luck is wid me 🤣

Thank u twinee
Love ya.... Mwaah mwaah mwaah...

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I too dont feel pity for Mayank 😡

What he has done is a sin.
So punish him

But at end MayUr will b together na? Or?????

You have described it beautifully..
Continue soon
Felt bad for Dia

Edited by -sam- - 15 years ago

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supercool3

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Posted: 15 years ago

#453

i feel like I'm standing exactly in Samrat's position when it comes to Mayank. 😆

nice update.. and I get what you mean by wanting to finish before college starts..

continue soon

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abb01

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Posted: 15 years ago

#454

Ruchi,

in ur entire update first time mayank broke down and he asked for punishment

oh god atleast he understood what he did

but i am really sad for Poor nupur yaar

she is totally lifeless ,please ab mayank me thoda sudhar karo

Note : You know the point whch you raised here is the one our society is facing it is called post marriage raped case ,but in india we really don't care for it.they think its legal where as it is not

I thank you personally to take the point up in front dear

Luv,

Aru Di

Edited by arunabehere - 15 years ago

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Senny

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Posted: 15 years ago

#455

Hey Ruchi,

This chapter gave me a fright, I don't know if it was meant to do so as the horrifying incident happened a few updates ago. But looking at the condition of Nupur and the way she is terrified of Mayank whose presence reminds her of the horrendous happening gives me goosebumps.

I know how terrible it feels when someone is made to go through what Nupur did. You have not only shown Nupur's feelings so strongly but the impact of your words is so that for some moments in between I feel what Mayank is feeling as well. Commendable effort. I loved Dia and how her soft and simply spoken words can hurt anyone so bad was very well written!

Love your writing Ruchi! Keep it up!

Edited by Senny - 15 years ago

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#456

res

i know i m the last one
but at least nivi di ki pehle res kiya

and sam i'll c u next time

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Ruchi
i felt really bad for nupur.
the way u describe her condition- My GOD hats off to u.
She scared abt the presence of maynk which remind her the horrifying incident.
GOD knows how she will recover frm this situation.
she lost the most precious things of her life.

i loved Dia n Sam - the way they take care of nupur was awesome

So maynk broke down infront of his mom and asked 4 punishment
kash punishment dene se sab kuch pehle jaise ho jati.sigh

Brilliant update ruchi
awesome
keep updating

Edited by fariaa70 - 15 years ago

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abb01

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Posted: 15 years ago

#457

Originally posted by: fariaa70
res

i know i m the last one
but at least nivi di ki pehle res kiya

and sam i'll c u next time

bus res res khelo ab jo res kiya hai wo unres bhi to karo fari

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Mansi bhatia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#458

This FF really gets me queasy in the stomach! I dont know what to comment..being a woman..and seeing Nupur's condition is very tuff to bear! Even though Mayank is guilty..he should be hanged. You did justice with every line!

Im happy Mayank understood..that he needed the punishment. ..I dont wanna say further. But I really wish 2 read further! So continue soon...please!!

-Mansi

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Mansi bhatia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#459

Originally posted by: arunabehere

Ruchi,

in ur entire update first time mayank broke down and he asked for punishment

oh god atleast he understood what he did

but i am really sad for Poor nupur yaar

she is totally lifeless ,please ab mayank me thoda sudhar karo

Note : You know the point whch you raised here is the one our society is facing it is called post marriage raped case ,but in india we really don't care for it.they think its legal where as it is not

I thank you personally to take the point up in front dear

Luv,

Aru Di

Hmmm...I totally agree to this! Anything done without the consent of the woman..is considered forceful. And it is considered rape. Gosh! What has the world come to?😭