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tehzeeb25

@tehzeeb25

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#431

heyy ruchi 🤗

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwesome upate dear

fabulasssssssss

feeling bad 4 nups

sam n dia r gr888888888 luv them

simplyyyyyyyyyyy gr8888888888888888888888 update

i have one requst 4 u plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

finish this ff of ur first plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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SOOORRRYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY TO BUG U ALOT 4 UPDATE SOOORYYYYYYYYY bbut cant help it yaar

thanx 4 d pm

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Nirvrithi

@Nirvrithi

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#432

Ruchi - Good to see you back so soon... 😊 Nice update - you covered Sam's and Mayank's POV very nicely... Now waiting to see Nupur's POV and what will be Shilpa Aunty's next steps hearing all these...

Again, You are really brilliant writer - This story is moving in correct pace.. Thanks for not hurrying into any decision..😉

All the best for your results.. 👍🏼

Your Nivi Di

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Binal Damania

@binudamania

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#433

nice part.............lyk d new changes in mayank he is guilty.........

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anju011

@anju011

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#434

awesome update ruchi.
i feel so bad for nupur. seeing her in such a condition is so painful.
samrat & dia were so helpful to her.
i just hate mayank in this.
can't wait to read it further.
continue soon.

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#435

awesome update
beautiful
amazing
mind blowing
u describe samrat n dia feelings very well dear!!!!!!!dey r really gud frnds
really felt miserable fr nupur!!!!!!!!!!!lifeless
i seriously hated mayank... gosh!!!!!!! bt cant
he did a mistake bt now he realized it....
he should be punished
cont soon n best of luck fr result

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shweta

@cool_shwets

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#436

Nice update...i feel terrible for nupur... Sam n dia r her true friends..desperately waiting for the next part...n worry not..u'r results will turn good...all d best!!

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ShwePoo

@ShwePoo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#437

Awesome update....
Waiting for the change in Mayank...
Pl continue soon...

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Shruti_0505

@Shruti_0505

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#438

i just cant imagine MAYUR like this
it is beyond me
nupur is suffering so much
but i guess now is the time for mayank to redeem himself n prove himself

waiting for the next part
plz udpate soon