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Posted: 15 years ago
take ur time but plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
make it a longgggggggggggggggggggggggg updte plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Ruch,
solly
i am late in comments but early for Note
Take ur time sweety
but main isase jyada mayank se nafrat nahi kar sakti so please take a U turn now
ake care,
di
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Posted: 15 years ago
its ok dear
take ur time.....
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Posted: 15 years ago

OMG!!..that was a heart wrenching update Ruchi... now mayank is gradually realizing his mistakes!!

I shouldn't say this, but then i think nupur should never forgive mayank!...
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyy guys !!
thanx for the support . I'll update it most probably today :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hiii... !
Wel , yeah i know that i am lagging behind with my updates but sowwie .[splly to u twinee and tehzeeb ]. !! I am really in tiff [ Nivi Di knows 😆]
After my previous update i was really in a big dilema about the coming updates ..But please dont blame on urself coz it helps me to think beyond set standards . Ak , Nivi Di and Fatima ..thank u soo much . 😳
Pallu i understand wht u say but i cant be sure of anything right now ... coz evn i am not sure as to what i am gonna do ahead . lol
Finally , the important thing [ gossh , must be tired of this thing now😆] my result is gonna be declared in few days and surely next week , so i'll be returning back to hostel n i dont carry my laptop with me [ otherwise padhai ki watt ] So , wil be updatiing only on weekends .
Okk , whenevr i'll leave ..i m gonna post a ''note'' for sure . 😆😕..
Now u guys can read further .. :) :)
PART-8
Samrat's POV
I was sitting holding Dia's hand , just praying for Nupur's recovery . Nupur had to be fine ..she has to be !
''U can meet her now '' Nurse said and went away . Me and Dia rushed inside .
My each vessel was pulsating at the highest rate to see Nupur ...it was the worst sight i can ever witness. Nupur was sitting lifeless on the hospital bed , her face was marked with blood clot near her lips and bruises all over . I would have preferred to die than to watch her like this . I rambled at my place and took support of door to stand still . I took my steps back but Dia grabbed my arm , shook my head but she assured me ''she need us ..please'' i could feel the lump in her voice and moved in .
Dia took steps towards her first and sat next to her .
''Nupur '' she spoke
But nupur didnt evn move an inch
''Nupur please...nupur '' she placed her hands on hers . She looked at her hand and again turned expressionless
Dia looked at me helplessly ..and i brushed off the tears lingering to my lashes
''Nupsi..cum'on get up !this hospital seems so boring ! '' i said trying to avoid lump
But it seems all vague...she didnt reply ! Nupur didnt reply to me..she didnt !!
''Nupur please kuch bolo..please '' Dia squeezed her hand and now tears betrayed her ..she couldnt control herself now .
Nupur was still un-moved .
Mayank's POV
I was walking aimlessly , still not over the words said by doctor..
''Sir'' nurse called for me
''yeah ''
''u havent met ur wife ?..''
''what ?..i mean ..i can meet her now '' i fumbled with words . Felt good that she was fine but at the very next moment fear crept inside me , not because of getting blamed for everything i did but for witnessing the deep-seated hatred in her eyes for me.
I entered her room , with whatever courage . Samrat-Dia were sitting next to her , trying their best to make her atleast speak something but all in vain . She was not responding to anything ..nothing at all . A lone tear escaped from my eyes ..
Nupur turned to look at me and the next thing shook me all throughout
Tears started flowing from her eyes , her entire body was shivering..and she held onto Dia tightly .
Samrat and Dia go up , scared at her sudden change in behaviour .
''Nupur..nupur ..'' Dia pattted her back to calm her down but instead Nupur hugged her .
Dia stroked her hair.. ''Ask him to leave me..please ask him to get out please '' nupur shouted at the top of her voice . Samrat looked at my direction and instantly got the reason , his eyes were blood-red
'' Why are u making her life hell ?...Why are u doing so !! '' he blasted out on me and before i could speak , Dia called for him
''Samrat ..dekho Nupur '' we both turned to look at her , Nupur had fainted .
Samrat rushed towards her and i stopped after taking a step further
''Nupur ..get up nupur ..'' he patted on her face but she was lying lifeless
Without thinking any further , i called out for Doctor
Doctor examined Nupur while she was still unconscious .
''U need be really careful with her . U just cant let her go throu any emotional turmoil . She is both physically and emotionaly very weak ''
''but doctor , she is not replying anything !..she is just not responding '' samrat asked worried
''she needs time to recover , she needs it ! just ttry to be normal '' doctor looked at me '' thats all i can say '' n she left
After she left , Dia came to me , while Samrat was there with Nupur
''i need to talk to you '' Dia said in emotionless voice
Evn without waitin for my nod , she went out of room
''Dia ...i ...'' my words trialed off as Dia faced me with tears in her eyes
''Mayank ..i know what happened with Nupur ..i know each damn freaking thing about yesterday !'' she said with despise clearly visible in her voice
''i am trying really hard to be strong in front of Samrat and Nupur !..but i cant see my both friends suffering just because of you !'' my eyes instantly lowered down '' please ..just stay away from Nupur ! Dont evn let ur shadow fal on her . I cant aford to lose her ..'' she went away .
Its rightly said ..sometimes soft words can damage you more than loud voices ...
Samrat's POV
The entire day went like a nightmare , Nupur didnt respond at all ..she was sitting like a statue with her eyes blank !! The girl who used to be high-spirited was lying without any emoitions . The eyes which conveyed all emotions were emotionless today . Dia helped her to eat something and she , just like a puppet did what Dia asked except for uttering a single word . Each moment both me and Dia were dying but to estimate the pain Nupur went throu was far beyond words to explain .
I wanted to punish Mayank but sometimes , our relations and society fail to us miserably . Not that i had any soft corner for that b*****d but the thought of mom and Nupur 's parents made me go in a dilema .
Nupur , due to pain-killers hardly stay awake .
''Dia ..i just dont know what i am gonna do '' i said like a big loser , while handing juice can to Dia .
''evn i dont know samrat . But nupur need to get over it ..otherwise ..i am afraid..'' she said stroking Nupur's hair
''Should we inform Nupur's parents ?'' i asked scared
''we cant hide it from them ..but let aunty come back . ''
''hmm..yeah . Mom is coming day after tomorrow '' i replied while Dia nodded
Rest we went silent looking at Nupur ...
Next Day !
I woke up , not knowing when i fell asleep on the couch itself . I looked at Dia and Nupur . Dia was sleeping with her head rested on nupur's bed .
After checking Nupur again , i moved out to find Mayank sleeping on the bench outside . I just hate myself for pitying at him evn for a moment but ..sometimes it happen
I went pass him , not evn giving him last look ,to doctor's cabin
Mayank's POV
Just coz of nurse screaming at some random ward-boy , i woke up ! My neck was stiff but i hardly cared . I stepped in Nupur's room to find her sleeping but not at peace . The lines on her forehead and dried tears on her face , were enough to convey the nightmare she went throu .
I was about to take my steps bacck when Samrat along with doctor came to room .
Samrat shot a deadly glare at me while Dia got some juice for Nupur.
''Mr. Sharma , i guess u can take her , as she will recover fast at home than here '' doctor said after checking her , while Nupur was still asleep
I nodded and made my way out before Nupur gets up and again see me .
After finishing up with last inute formalitiies , i went back to nupur's room but to not to my surprise , Samrat had already left with Nupur and Dia . Wel , i cant expect them to welcome me with open arms .
I reached home but they hadnt reach there . I got scared but then maybe Dia-Samrat took nupur to some other place than coming back home . I sat on couch just to feel miserable . I ruined Nupur's life , the one whom i was attracted to , the one who made me think beyond myself , the one who had guts to confront me ..and the one who made place in my heart ..!!..Maybe , that is the reason i fought with myself more than her and crossed all my lines .
Finally done ..hope u like it . Lol...everything is turning upside-down for me
PS- Do hit like ttab , if u find it good
Love
-Ruchi
Edited by ruchimayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Yay! First time first to comment!!😉 I got so excited seeing ur update! I love this FF!

Well..I felt so sad for Nupur..gosh! I cant imagine her state...But Sam n Dia were so helpful. I loved how you potrayed Samrat's reaction on seeing Nupur. Mayank...im tryin 2 hate him!!😡 but I feel pity on him too! But hey what he did wasnt FAIR.😡 He needs a punishment. I felt so bad when Nups saw Mayank and screamed and cried and fainted. God that was like really..............😭😭 I could feel her emotions!!
This is really unpredicatble. Please update sooner=D And good luck for ur result!🤗
Edited by -Mansi- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
the update was awesome ........i feel terrible for nupur ...... her life is nothingbut full of misery ............. nd samrat nd diya are such grt friends ........... nd abt mayank though he is repenting wat he has done but my harted for him isstill intact ....... this FF is becoming more nd interesting as well as unpredictable .........cant wait to read da next part .......... nd all da best for ur results ruchi u ll surely do well ...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
i despise mayank in the FF ..and i hate despising mayank sigh.. but here he is not worth a thought..ughh ,sorry to say , its disgusting what he did..

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