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maria

@Maria.

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 15 years ago

#421

heyy Ruchi

Awesom update as usual....i loved it

feel sorry for Nupur

waiting for next part

do continue soon

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-sam-

@-sam-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#422

Pehle bata deti na...

Lol.. kidding..

Well, what Mayank has done, is really bad and not forgivable...
But still u know my feelings 😕

I know he should get punished, 😡
but I felt pitty for him too. Sometimes things go out of control, when you lose the temper!
But later you cant just sit and regret....

Well, Mayank needs punishment

You have described feelings beautifully 👏
Do write Nupur's POV too.....

Take care
Love yaa...

Edited by -sam- - 15 years ago

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#423

finally u updated ruchiiii!!!!!!

gosh nupur's condition is so bad!!!!!feeling miserable for her!!!!!!!

i seriously hated mayank in ur ff but now i feel pity on him!!!!!1

poor guy!!!!!i agree he did a mistake but now he realised it!!!!

he is slowly turning positive and hopefully he will make nupur recover!!!!!

im happy tht he has becum positive!!!!!!

loved ur update!!!!!!!!!

i so love this ff like anything!!!!

u write so well!!!!!!!

do cont soon!!!!!!!

sariska

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Amrita

@Maahzabeen

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#424

awesum update dear...i read all da parts nw....omg!! mayank is such a loser in dis story....😡

n admire d frndshp of sam,dia n nupz....

thanks 4 such an update...

pm me nxt tym...

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peace_love

@peace_love

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#425

Very nice update Ruchi......

Mayank deserves hatred from everyone for being a jerk 😡 ...... You have brought up emtions very well in this part........ I m eagerly waiting to see what next move this FF takes.......................

Great work ...........

P.S : All the best for your results

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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#426

wonderful update ruchi feeling so bad 4 nups u descripe verry well hun thanks 4 d pm

Edited by samiralovemayur - 15 years ago

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bhargavi

@gopi06

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#427

nice updt
feel sorry for nupur
thanks for the pm

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#428

Hey Ruchi
thanx GOD finally u updated
oh i felt very sad for nupur.
i cant c her in this condition.
Mayank ruined her life.
loved dia and sam.
hope they will help her to cme out frm this miserable situation

and abt mayank- sigh its very difficult for me to imagine him in this way
mayank should get punished for whatever he has done.
but i dont knw why- somewhere i felt pity on him
hmm i think its happen becos he is mayank.

u know i love mayur a lot
and cant c them separate at any condition.
but this situation is different
pher bhi i want to c them together(sorry 4 that- i knw many of u dont want it . even i m also confused abt my feelings).

ruchi u made me confused yaar
kya karu main?

anyway i loved ur update.
u wrote the whole thing brilliantly.

keep it up
TC

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455394

Suspended

Posted: 15 years ago

#429

Though I dont like the Mayank in this story...
But i must say you are a great writer ...I got goosebumps reading it....feel terrible for Nupur...wat happened with her was deadliest thing for any wife .....But happy to see Sam & Dia are there to take care of her...
Eagerly waiting for the next part...