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Shruti_0505

@Shruti_0505

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Posted: 15 years ago

#371

each n every update of urs is just so shocking
RAPE
omg

plz update soon
am dying to know wat happens further

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supercool3

@supercool3

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Posted: 15 years ago

#372

i felt my heart beating while reading this poor Nupur.. even I would've done the same if I was in her situation so I guess Mayank's attitude is slowly going to change but it's going to take him great effort to win her back...

Can't wait to read more..

update soon and thanks for the pm 😳

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#373

awesome update......
beautifully written dear!!!!!heart wrenching
totally numb while reading
really feel bad fr nupur
mayank is a rapist.....
cont soon

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Senny

@Senny

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Posted: 15 years ago

#374

Sheesh man, Ruchi i feel disgusted by what M did. See as were speaking about Rati acting so powerfully, you also write with so much impact man, it all feels so real. I am all hopeful that N would recover physically but emotionally don't know and for how long she would be in a depression stage or even worse. You are doing a great job, update soon!

God bless you!

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maria

@Maria.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#375

heyy ruchi

Amazing,mindblowing n emotional update.........i loved it

very well written.....i feel sad for nups..poor nups..very touching update

i hope now mayu will be changed

waiting for next part

plzzz update soon

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#376

The Mayank Sharma who was till now a jerk became a rapist also😡😡😡 GREAT U knw i jus feel lik killing him

I wish i culd jus kill him in this FF

Nups is in the worst condition

Hop she gets well soon

Sam loves Nups Yup Samrat loves Nupur paka

Lets c wat happens

Hop Mayu gets sum brain now atleast n he leaves his ego n behaves nicely wit her n ask forgiveness also

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Nirvrithi

@Nirvrithi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#377

Thanks ruchi for considering my request..I know its not easy too... Even I am so much connected with the character of Mayank.. But if I cannot see a character punished in a story for such a disgusting crime, what can we expect ourselves in real life??

One qn - Did Samrat love Nups?? What did you mean by this uncompleted statement..

..for my best friend ..for my ......

So If you cannot punish mayu for whatever he did, the last thing I want is Nups forgiving him. I never expected that I will ask someone to write a story to separate mayur.. But in this, I would love to see Sanu instead.. I cant believe I am saying this..

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

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Posted: 15 years ago

#378

Originally posted by: Nirvrithi

Thanks ruchi for considering my request..I know its not easy too... Even I am so much connected with the character of Mayank.. But if I cannot see a character punished in a story for such a disgusting crime, what can we expect ourselves in real life??

One qn - Did Samrat love Nups?? What did you mean by this uncompleted statement..

..for my best friend ..for my ......

So If you cannot punish mayu for whatever he did, the last thing I want is Nups forgiving him. I never expected that I will ask someone to write a story to separate mayur.. But in this, I would love to see Sanu instead.. I cant believe I am saying this..

Mannnn....u catched it !!

I purposely left it incomplete ..

I love to experiment with Mayank's character . Maye ..coz in show , i culdnt connect to it ..as i culd connect to Nupur 's ..coz i am more like her😆

I tried making him ...whatever i can think off !

Wel..if i separate Mayur...trust me...along wih chappals , rotten vegiies will be in my pm box !!

U made me go in a dilema now...😕

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dua

@dua22

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Posted: 15 years ago

#379

amazing update

now m waiting for mayank to change

cont soon

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_ArTi4ever_

@_ArTi4ever_

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Posted: 15 years ago

#380

ruchs the update has shaken me in n out...i so well can place myself in nupur's shoes....cant wait 4 the transformation in mayur relationship...and i m sure that the changed mayank wil be a treat to watch 4.continue fast🤗