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Posted: 15 years ago
yaar ruchi plezzzzzzzzzzz update soooooooooooooooooon na plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz im dying to know wats going to happen nxt so plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago
@tehzeeb - I am gonna update it by Monday !
I am so sorry for givin such a heart-breaking update
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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing twist
hmmm waiting for mayank side of story
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Posted: 15 years ago
Ruchi.Can you do a favor?? Put Mayu in jail atleast for one day😡..You know he has done the biggest crime in the world... In real life , we are so helpless.. Atleast we can relax seeing justice happening in stories.. Even murder is forgivable - not this one.
I don't want nupur to fogive him without any punishment -however he change himself... Whatever explanation he gives..Nothing holds good in front of that crime.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice update Ruchi

But sad for Nupur

Pls update soon

Love,
Shreyu
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Posted: 15 years ago

m feeling terrible.....poor nupur

very nicely written......i dont know what to say?i wasn't expecting this at all....i didn't know one day i'll say this that i hate mayank

plz update soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
ye kya hua
update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hello so i landed upon this a few minutes ago and read all parts 😆
First, I like the concept.. Though at first it was hard to see Mayur like this, but afterwards, it got very interesting.
I thought Mayank was a real bad guy who has no feelings. But when I saw the bits you gave from his POV, he doesn't seem that bad. I kind of get that his feelings for Nupur may be genuine, but it's just the way he expresses them in usually makes him look soo cruel.
As for your last part, felt sooo bad for Nupur. Poor girl didnt expect that. But I want to see Mayank's POV after this.
good going
update soon, and do add me to your pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
😡I hate Mayank I hate Mayank I hate Mayank I hate Mayank I hate Mayank I hate Mayank😡
i want to kill him😡
poor nups, she's helpless........dead.😭
bt, i think, this is d turning point..........after this crime, mayank sd change............woh kehte hain na, jab bohot bura ho jaye, aur bura hone ko kuch nahi hota, toh sirf achcha hi hota hai.
nice update.........i want to read more........thnx 4 pm.😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
sorry guyz for the delay !! Thanku al..for great comments...and i know , u al were not in best of spirits after reading the previous update ...!! It might be the case , this time tooo...so avoid chappals again 😆😆
here goes the next one

Part-6

I opened my eyes and saw mayank sleeping next to me , with his arm across my waist . I didnt have any feelings left now , i didnt feel this touch ..i didnt have tears left..i didnt have my soul with me..nothing !! but still my mind wavered back to past ..the dreadful past which marked the truth of today
After the incident with Mayank ..nothing went normal . Evryday i was subjected to one-or-other ragging stuff and everytime i had to reply him back . Things settled but my luck didnt . Mayank followed like my shadow ...i prayed every moment but with very next turn , he used to stand in front of my eyes .
College , which was the best place for any student turned to be worst for me . Mayank became the part of my nightmare ..the bubby , chiry girl was lost in some frightened one . I was afraid of moving out alnoe...everytime i used to think about mayank n only mayank .
Mom-Dad started getting worried coz of my sudden behaviour change but i always made an excuse to avoid there questions.
Samrat and Dia were the only two person who knew my turmoil ..they stayed with me everytime ...and whenever i used to be alone...it became freaking hell ..
Mayank blocking my way , trying to get closer , making me work in his activity and giving me the lusty-filled look ...this was becoming routine with me but everytime my fright increased..
Meanwhile , i applied for other universities ..
It had been six months in college ...but nothing changed , instead got worst
That day we had to come in evening hours to get our projects signed . I came with samrat , as Dia was out-of-town .
Samrat was called by princi...so he went while i moved towards my class...but instead was pulled into an empty classroom
I tried to shout by a strong hand gripped my mouth . I opened my eyes to see Mayank standing with smirk on his face..
''so..finally u are here with me'' he said and tears formed in my eyes. He removed hand from my mouth
''please..let me go .'' i pleaded
''ohh..i thought , u prefer shouting or giving slap whoever mis-behaves with you ''
''i..i..i am sorry...please leave me '' i tried to get out of his grip but in vain . His body was pressing against mine..
''i'll tel you..what does insulting your senior means'' he moved towards me ...his hand tracing my face ..tears rolling down my eyes ..
His lips were just inches away , when someone pulled him and i sat at that very place , numb.''I am ashamed '' samrat shouted
''what the hell ...!! Its none of ur business' mayank retorted
Samrat didnt say anything ..but moved towards me and took me out .
The entire journey i was quiet and samrat also didnt utter a single word
Next day
''dad..i want to tel u something '' i said
''u didnt go to college?..u fine na?'' mom asked concerned
''yeah..i am '' tried sounding normal '' dad , i want to go to Delhi to continue my studies ''
''what ?...but beta , excel is one of the best college '' papa said
''i know..but please , i am not finding it comfortable here '' i didnt wish to make an excuse this time
Papa-mamma didnt object , owing to my changed behaviour and the very next day , i shifted to Delhi . Only samrat and dia knew about it and i was in constant touch with them
After completing my studies , i came back to Mumbai..not knowing things to go worst
I grabbed the night gown lying next to bed and moved out . My body ached , evn didnt have the courage to take one step but i had to do this ...I went to table and did what i wanted to do from the day i was married to this beast ..and suddenly i felt at peace ...all my pain erasing..everythng soothing down...
Mayank's POV
I felt something moving under my arm but didnt bother to open my eyes . I felt hammers banging on my head ..I carressed my temples and soon realisaion struck me ..I got up instantly . It was not my room ..it was Nupur's..I was lying half naked with bed-sheet all crumbled and mess all over the room ..i shouldnt have done this ...!!..i shouldnt .. i was still in dilema when i heard a ''thud'' sound .
I grabbed my tee and went towards the washroom to witness the worst sight ever . Nupur was lying in pool of blood . I was baffled , not expecting this ..I picked her up and hurried to the nearby hospital .
I was not in a condition to think evn for a minute .Nupur was admitted immideately and her treatment began , considering she lost too much blood .
I sat outside OT , feeling helpless and guilty ..then only nurse came
''We need to operate her immideately , u ned to sign here '' She gave me a form and i signed it
''Nurse..is she fine ?''i asked
''sorry sir ..but her pulse is weak and her bp had dropped down considerably , so cant say anything'' with this she walked away and i sat there like a statue .
Its just because of me...
All the events of yesterday night flashed in front of my eyes ..
''Mayank ...'' i was brought back to reality by RV ,my closest buddy
''yeah..sorry ..i was..'' i tried to reason out
''chill dude ..!!.Its okk ..lets go to pub today '' he suggested
''naa..not interested ''
''hello..are u the same Mayank Sharma ..the dude of college ..cum'on yaar ! be a sport''
I thought for a while and then nodded , maybe this is gonna help me come out of my good-for-nothing wife . I started to feel suffocated in my own home ..i was left alnoe...Just because of Nupur ...that bitch took everything from me ..My mom , My brother ..everything !..I hate her ..with every thought of her , my hatred for her increases ...but she had to pay for it ...she had to !
We both went to pub , i never discussed anything about Nupur with RV ..but today something different was supposed to happen
''so..hows ur life ?'' he asked casually , sipping his drink
''not good..from the moment she entered my life !..it has become a bigg mess '' i practically gulping the entire drink in one go
''cum'on yaar ..u wanted her and now she is yours '' he commented
''she is not..we dont evn share a room !'' i said out of frustration and then repented
''what !!'' he had a bigg O '' u mean , u didnt make-out !!..fissshh '' and he mocked . Anger took over me , that girl again became the reason of my embarrasment...
''make me one large '' i said to bar-tender , while RV still mocked
''i cant believe ..u didnt make-out ..i mean , u were crazy about her ..and now..'' he again commented
The time went by and without realising , i had more than enough..I somehow managed to reach home but i couldnt get over RV's mocked statements ...
I banged open the door to Nupur's room...and....
I had tears in my eyes ..i hated her but never wanted her to be in this condition . I covered my face with hands ...
Samrat's POV
I parked my car ..and sensed something wrong ..maybe the fact i was not at home last night ,made me freak out a bit . I knocked at the door but realised it was already open . Why didnt Nupur bolt ..is she ok !! i rushed to her room ..and terrible sight waited for me . Her room was completely a mess ..her bedsheet crumbled ..books on floor and last thing i wanted to see was Mayank's coat on the couch . My entire body froze ..felt dizzy , it was like the entire earth broke down on me .. I had tears in my eyes but didnt know , what to do .. My mind just stopped working ..everything came to a hault . I stepped inside , gulping some courage in ..and saw blood near the washroom . was something more terrible to come ?..my head banged . I dialed nupur's number but her phone was lying on the table itself and i was left with only one option ..
''where is nupur ?'' i managed to speak ..
''city hospital '' he replied .
I was broken but i had to be strong for her ..for my best friend ..for my ......
I drived as fast as i could to hospital and in meanwhile informed Dia too . After nupur , the person i can blindly trust is Dia and maybe i was selfish ...coz i didnt have the guts to face Nupur now
Mayank's POV
After attending samrat's call ..i felt relieved that he was coming here but at the same time fear engulfed me of losing him permanently
I was still waiting for Doctor to come out of OT , when samrat came and grabbed me by my collar
''I wanna kill u ...jus because of u ..she is lying there...just because of u '' samrat shouted
''samrat..just listen to me..''
''what ?..that u made-out with her ?..what ...that she didnt try to kill herself after that !!..what ??...'' he shouted again but Dia came
''Samrat , leave him...sarat please '' she said
''Dia..'' samrat tried to speak
''this is not the right time ...Nupur needs us more ! '' Dia explained and samrat left me
''U know..i want to put him behind bars but...'' gulping his tears ''just because i dont want mom and aunty-uncle to know about there so-calld Mayank...!!..Beast '' he said and Dia consoled him
''I understand ..just pray for Nupur's recovery !'' dia said as Samrat hugged her
''Nupur teekh ho jayegi na ? ''samrat asked while dia patted his back
And she nodded admist her tears
Doctor came out of OT ..
''hows nupur ?'' dia asked immideately
''she is fine..but...'' doctor looked towards me ''Mr.Sharma , i want to talk to you ''
I nodded and went , while samrat-dia headed towards nupur's room
''Mr.Sharma..wel , this is a suicide case..'' she said
''hmm.''
''wel..i know how much Sharma Industries hold reputation , so i didnt want to disclose in front of everyone ..'' I looked at her ''That ur wife RAPED ''
I stood still....
''rest is on you ..'' her pager beeped ''wel..i have another case '' She went while i was still in shock
The word ''Rape '' zoomed in my ear again and again!!....
Am i a rapist ??.....
@ak - wel , it took me some time..sowwwie !!
@Nirvrithi - i got what are u trying to say...i'll c , if i could make it in next part . Wel cant promise anything . Sowwie
Edited by ruchimayur - 15 years ago

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