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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#361

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Hey, wow! What was that? Am I a rapist? (Of course, he is!) 😆

Anyway, the update was awesome. Too good. 😳 Absolutely heart wrenching!! Women have got a lot suffer from, aah!

Continue soon.

PS: I love Samrat!! 😆😆

-Kanky

Edited by -Kanky- - 15 years ago

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Mansi bhatia

@-Mansi-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#362

This part...I dunno sort of murdered my heart. You wrote it so well that it was bound 2 happen. With every passing line I was so totally numb. Now hes finally realising..his mistakes..but I don think Nup shud ever forgive him!!!

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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#363

awesome verry touching 😭 update ruchi

why mayu why? 😲 thanks 4 d pm hun n plzz update soon

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-sam-

@-sam-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#364

i knew this suicide thing..
And samrat loves Nupur, haina?
I ws so waiting for this last night, i ws chking during lunch break too....

But what next? Jail?
I think self guilt nd no forgiveness is biggest punishment!

I m feeling so bad for Nupur....
Terrible!

Whn's ur clg? Lucky gal!
M suffering!

Take care
Love yaa....
🤗

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-sam-

@-sam-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#365

and yeah ur updates makes me emotional too much,
As if i feel numb, my neurons dead!
I mean the internal feeling lk...
Smtms it happen na, i hope u understand nd plz continue soon....

I love Samrat in this..
P.S, - whn r u ol on fb?

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Beet

@Beet

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#366

Aww, Ruchi that was a very touching part.

Immensely heart breaking. Every line went through my heart. And now Mayank is finally realizing his mistakes. *sigh*

Beautifully written Ruchi. Kudos to you for expressing the pain so well. Brilliant Ruchi. You're an amazzing writer.

Continue soon

Loads of love

Daania

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aswathy

@sreevijayan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#367

poor my nupzie.............she had faced the worst

juz wanna kill that mayank.......arrrgghhhhh

awesome update dear.............

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Anamika.5

@Anamika.5

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#368

Hey Ruchi

Fantastic update

A bit sad too,,,

I think now Mayank will be changed slowly

Hope for the best

Hope Nupur gets well soon

Update asap

Love,
Shreyu

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kirti123

@kirti123

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#369

ruchi
really nicely written
felt bad for nupur
its always with the men they get provoked and end up doing such crimes
and then realise when the damage is mostly done
but why always the girl has to suffer
u r a fab writter
continue soon
eager to know what happens next

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tehzeeb25

@tehzeeb25

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#370

GOSH wat a update

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWESOME
HAT OFF 2 UR RITING 👏

it was gr8888888888888 prt

good to c mayank like this

he should feel guilty 😡

dont make nups forgive him easy

he should sufferrrrrrrrr ALOT

luv sam n dia

ok so sam luvs nup ??????????????????

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