BroKen EndS-MayUr Part-21 , Page-148 12/aug - Page 40

Originally posted by: ak12

@Nivi Di
I am so glad you said that di. You r absolutely right. Craziness for mn on one side, individuality n our beliefs n morales on another! N this another side should be dominating!

@Ruch
Im sorry we r becomin all jazbaati but i cant stop thinking bout this!

You continue wid what you planned. We'll read it anyway. Haina Nivi di?

same here !

Originally posted by: ak12

@Nivi Di
I am so glad you said that di. You r absolutely right. Craziness for mn on one side, individuality n our beliefs n morales on another! N this another side should be dominating!

@Ruch
Im sorry we r becomin all jazbaati but i cant stop thinking bout this!

You continue wid what you planned. We'll read it anyway. Haina Nivi di?

@Nivi di

Hum sab bahut jyada jazbaati ho gaye. No doubt, there cant be any second view on this!

But well, i feel we are putting a lot of pressure on this sweet little girl called ruchi. Ruchi, i just wanna say, in the end, ideas will be ideas. Mine, nivi di's fatima di's n yours. We all are going to talk about it here. But there's little we can do in real life. Yes ofcourse, a change can be brought about by an idea but its all very theoritical. I cant deny that just because its Mayank, even i feel that this should end happily. N thats where we lose. This is where things fall apart. This is where everybody forgets the injustice.

Forgive the 'madly in love with mayank' girl one part of whom wants to see this ending happy.

But anyway, i'd say again. Ruchi, write what you had thought of the story. I m just glad we are discussing this.

mm...Ruchi - You dont have to be depressed or in dilemma.. Go ahead with your story... We are with you 😊

@ nivya di, aki

I guess yeah hum thode zyada jazbaati ho gaye lekin kya kiya jae....topic hi aisa tha

and yeah nivya di I guess ur ryt....if rv or nyone of that sort replaced mayank then the audience wud want him to punish but not mayank ...tht's unfair and not morally right.....

but then wht can one do ...happens !

and pls if we've hurt anyone sorry !

People, I don't exactly know what you'll are talking about BUT, all I wanna say is that one must not try to restrict a writer from writing ever.

Whatever Ruchi feels is good enough for the story, she should be free to pen that down. 🤓 It's all fictional anyway. And on our parts, it's quite ironic to be getting a break from the absolutely-goody-two-shoes Mayank. RIght??

ruchi i am absolutely stunned after reading this update ........ you have written each nd everything soo well ....... nd my hatred for mayank in this FF is increasing more nd more .................poor nupur i feel like crying seeing her condition ....... being raped by her own husband .,,,,,,,,,,, whatcan be more worse dan this for a women ...............the character of mayank disgusts me sooooooo much .............being a hard core mayurian i always want a happy ending for mayur ........... but at da same time i cant get over what he has done to nupur in this FF ...... nd now the guilt , the repentance , the realisation of the crime which he has committed ........ i am sooooo looking forward to read dat ..... i want mayank to suffer alot ..........he fully deserves it after wat he has done ............. ruchi you arean awesome writer .....through ur words i can actually feel nd sense da pain which nupur is undergoing ............ nd it has really made me cry .............. cant wait for da next update .........

omg nupur cut her veins.feel so sad for her.
this was really terrible.
& i think samrat loves nupur.
& mayank is now feeling guilty.
awesome update.
continue soon.

i am going to kill mayank'

mayank you are so dead

poor nupur

she did the right thing

i am glad mayank is finally realising

continue soon