BroKen EndS-MayUr Part-21 , Page-148 12/aug - Page 39

Originally posted by: ruchimayur

Mannnn....u catched it !!

I purposely left it incomplete ..

I love to experiment with Mayank's character . Maye ..coz in show , i culdnt connect to it ..as i culd connect to Nupur 's ..coz i am more like her😆

I tried making him ...whatever i can think off !

Wel..if i separate Mayur...trust me...along wih chappals , rotten vegiies will be in my pm box !!

U made me go in a dilema now...😕

ruchs an ardent request...plzzz dont ever try to do it..otherwise it wil be too ordinary...on the cortrary when the person comes back 4m his evil self n gets back to the place where he belongs...makes it all the way even more outstanding...!!plzzz dont seperate mayur..and i m sure u wil deal with it effortlessly..bring them back together at the end..plzz

Hey girl!

I came online for this! And i really wanted to talk about this, you know! Marital rape is one of the social evils that women go through n never talk about. One of the many.

You know, until now, i was taking it in good stride. Its 'just a story' i told myself. But this part moved me completely. Completely.

I shuddered while reading this. It was so amazingly written.

Two, n an important thing is about the issue. If i were Nupur, i would have killed Mayank. Not myself. Anyway, this is just a shame to the society you know. N all this 'pati parmeshwar' thing...women dont speak up. Sixty plus years to independence, but we still arent imdependent. Women r chained by the very society in which they live.

You know, if this was reality, which is not very rare to talk about, i'd wish the girl never forgives the guy. These men should be castrated in public. So that they never repeat such crimes again. So that the realise the importance of woman kind. So that they respect the women one of which gave them birth.

I understand this is just a story n things are going to be positive. N thats what all of us expect. But seriosly i wish Nupur never forgives Mayank. Another part of me, wants to see them together n mayank regretting, i wont deny. Bt you know, that exactly is the point where woman loses. We all, like me, think this should be forgiven. Anyway, everybody has their view. I have mine.

Nupur has been through a lot. N girl, the fact that you brought me to say so much shows how much your words touch me. You have a penchant for emotions. The right words, at the right time, you sure know how to make your reader feel as if they themselves are in the story. Love you gal! You are a true rockstar.

Omg, i wrote an OS! Anyway, ive class at seven tomorrow! Good night! N thank you so much for updating today!

Please continue soon. Go with whatever you've planned for the story but i hope mayank faces the rejection, the hatred. Coz maybe thats his only punishment.

Love,
Akansha!

P.s. You made me cry with this update girl.

P.p.s take care!

Ruchiiiiiiiiiiiii
my heart is ached after reading ur update.

i was speechless after reading this part.

u made me cry

actually after reading ur update ii m not in a condition that i could write something
my hand is shaking

pardon me ruchi- cant write more

i just want to c nups happy plz do something

do something for our nupur.................

hmm i dnt know wht to say ... iam in delima now.....wht he is Good or bad...bt i am still hating him.....though a bit less than the last time .......poor nups...but gr8 update..

amazing part plzzzzzzzzz cont soon and thx alot for the pm

Originally posted by: palz_ArTi4ever

ruchs an ardent request...plzzz dont ever try to do it..otherwise it wil be too ordinary...on the cortrary when the person comes back 4m his evil self n gets back to the place where he belongs...makes it all the way even more outstanding...!!plzzz dont seperate mayur..and i m sure u wil deal with it effortlessly..bring them back together at the end..plzz

Originally posted by: ak12

Hey girl!

I came online for this! And i really wanted to talk about this, you know! Marital rape is one of the social evils that women go through n never talk about. One of the many.

You know, until now, i was taking it in good stride. Its 'just a story' i told myself. But this part moved me completely. Completely.

I shuddered while reading this. It was so amazingly written.

Two, n an important thing is about the issue. If i were Nupur, i would have killed Mayank. Not myself. Anyway, this is just a shame to the society you know. N all this 'pati parmeshwar' thing...women dont speak up. Sixty plus years to independence, but we still arent imdependent. Women r chained by the very society in which they live.

You know, if this was reality, which is not very rare to talk about, i'd wish the girl never forgives the guy. These men should be castrated in public. So that they never repeat such crimes again. So that the realise the importance of woman kind. So that they respect the women one of which gave them birth.

I understand this is just a story n things are going to be positive. N thats what all of us expect. But seriosly i wish Nupur never forgives Mayank. Another part of me, wants to see them together n mayank regretting, i wont deny. Bt you know, that exactly is the point where woman loses. We all, like me, think this should be forgiven. Anyway, everybody has their view. I have mine.

Nupur has been through a lot. N girl, the fact that you brought me to say so much shows how much your words touch me. You have a penchant for emotions. The right words, at the right time, you sure know how to make your reader feel as if they themselves are in the story. Love you gal! You are a true rockstar.

Omg, i wrote an OS! Anyway, ive class at seven tomorrow! Good night! N thank you so much for updating today!

Please continue soon. Go with whatever you've planned for the story but i hope mayank faces the rejection, the hatred. Coz maybe thats his only punishment.

Love,
Akansha!

P.s. You made me cry with this update girl.

P.p.s take care!

@Nivi Di
I am so glad you said that di. You r absolutely right. Craziness for mn on one side, individuality n our beliefs n morales on another! N this another side should be dominating!

@Ruch
Im sorry we r becomin all jazbaati but i cant stop thinking bout this!

You continue wid what you planned. We'll read it anyway. Haina Nivi di?

Originally posted by: Nirvrithi

Aki - I second each and every word of you 👍🏼

God this is what I truly felt reading the update👍🏼....and aki I agree to each and every word of yours 👏.....when we write stories we should place them on grounds of reality and flow with it as they are a means to impart info to the masses....if even the story ends in an happily ever after mode maybe people will try to in act the same in real life !

This was a mere story at the beginning but not anymore it touched my nerves and I'm proud ruchi that you bought up this so very beautifully !! 👏

Sorry I din comment earlier as I was falling short of words coz I was busy shedding tears but aki did the job and too wonderfully !! 👍🏼

Originally posted by: palz_ArTi4ever

ruchs an ardent request...plzzz dont ever try to do it..otherwise it wil be too ordinary...on the cortrary when the person comes back 4m his evil self n gets back to the place where he belongs...makes it all the way even more outstanding...!!plzzz dont seperate mayur..and i m sure u wil deal with it effortlessly..bring them back together at the end..plzz

I think separation is a better option I mean you've suffered and gone thro' so much then why be with that person ? They deserve punishment don't they especially after realizing their guilt ! Where did the guilt and feelings go when you committed such a heinous crime, was it out on a walk on that very day ?

And I feel we all must look at things from a rational pov...say for example this happens with someone close to you would you still tell them to forgive their husband and lead a happily ever after with them becoz if u tell them to separate it'll be ordinary ?? No na coz that is real life ! So why here in a story ? Story connect masses and a medium to spread messages so I guess the right thng wud be a punishment for mayu and not for nupur !

It's not that since they are the lead they have to end up together......thy will still be the lead !

And I'm really liking this story of your ruchi...it's very mature !! 👍🏼

No hurt and harm intended to anyone who doesn't agree with my pov !
This is a secular nation and everyone has the right to express their opinions right !!