MANZIL-The Ultimate Goal[RN]-Part 3/Pg24/14.04.11 - Page 8

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Esha Hii Suhana............😊

How r u??? I'm fine..........

Update was really gud..Lot of things were revealed in this part... yeah it was necessary to explain the story to continue it further........

Navin has been prooven innocent n Lala has run off to some other country...He is like a wounded animal who will surely take his revenge but I am sure Raj can take care of him..
hmm....lets see what Raj will do.........

Pooja was so nostalgic to see KMA..after all this will b their last year n den they have to leave this place..So many memories are attached to it.some gud some bad but still this is the same place which has given dem some really gud friends for a life time.. yeah u r absolutely right........

Yudi was so angry on Alekh coz he left him n went with Naina..But every1 cooled him..Why has every1 gone to Delhi..Raj was dere n den Naina n her family was dere too along with Alekh n Neelu..Something is dere which is not clear...If I am not wrong has Raj married Naina only...??now this is what I too don't know😕.......they are not telling me too😭......u see

continue soon

Bye

Originally posted by: rajeev_myfriend

wow the up is very nice plz dear up soon and thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

Now this is reallly reallly baddddddddddd !!! kya hogaya Mana??????

humko lollypop toh dikhayi, par jaise hi khane keliye aage badhe, tune jhtase haath peeche kar liya ! wow mana...kya description hai....pata hai tu bilkul ek 4 saal ki bachchi dikh rahi hai mujhe...😆😆😆😆😆😆.....jo apne lollypop ke liye ro rahi hai...........😆😆😆

I mean i was trying to decipher th reality out of the cadet's convo, and u stopped the update at Naina !

Not fair !!!!! ALLS FAIR IN LOVE N WAR dear.....aur yaha toh dono hai............I mean iss fic mein.........😉

coming to the update from start....

Update was superrrrrbbbbb !!! Thankssssssssssssssss!!!!!!😆

something new....Lala already proven guilty and now that coward has ran away and had promised Raj to turn his life in to hell.....😡 yeah .......damn Lala....😡

Lets see...what he does ! Hmm.......

The description of KMA ....Surijee cadets convo was nice... Thanx.......

Ab i am guessing that my guess regarding Raj's marraige might be true from cadets convo..... par aisa kyun?aisa toh unhonne kuch nahi kaha😕!!!

Aur kya kahu??? Tune toh UD beechmein hi kaat diya ! 😡 arre beech mein kahaa.......end mein hi kaataa hai 😆😆😆............

Update soon !!!! yaa sure..........

Originally posted by: guglu088

Siriiiiiiiiiiiiiiii... Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.................😆😆😆😆...........yaar tum sab ko ho kya gaya hai.........pehle Mana...ab tu......aise cheenk kyu rahe ho..............

Ab agar mai tujhe maar daalun to shikayat mat karna...how can you end this part at such an interesting point...😡😡😡 ab jab end interesting na ho toh tum log aage ki kahaani kaise padhoge yaar.........main toh bas apne readers ko bhaagne se rokna chahthi thi............😭

Thankfully Lala Gehlot is proved guilty and that witch Ritu is dead...but Lala farar hai aur ye chinta ki baat hai...after all Raj aur unke cadets ka sawal hai...haa sach kahaa hai tu ne......ab pata nahi ye Lala kaha se waar kare??????

The convo between Suriji and Ali and Pooja was very nice...matlab Pooja soch rahi hai ki Graduation hone ke baad wo KMA ko kitna miss karegi... Thanx dear.......

Aur Yudi ki complaints dekho...kitna complain karta hai...mujhe hasi aa rahi thi.......hasi matlab phasi.........😆😆😆.........yudi ki complaints toh kabhi khatam hi nahi honge na...........

Neelu bhi delhi gayi hai aur Aalekh aur Naina bhi...m sure ki daal me kuch kaala hai...aur agar as u said TUMHARA DIMAG GHUM GAYA to puri ki puri daal hi kaali hogi...haa yaha ka daal toh kaala hi hai.........tujhe abhi tak nahi dikhi😲 😆😆

Now why were her friends dazed to see Naina...mujhe kuch kuch samajh me to aa raha hai par maine bhi faisla kiya hai ki kuch nahi bolungi...tumhare agloe part ka intezaar karungi........achcha faisla hai....aur mujhe pata hai tujhe kya samajh mein aa raha hai.......par jaisa tu soch rahi hai waisa mein karne waali nahi hu.....😆😆😆😆😆

Last but not the least...the best part was Raj's promotion to the post of Major...he deserved it...sabse jyaada taklif to usse hi hui hai...matlab kitna kuch khoya hai usne...apna dost, apna pyaar aur fir ab lala Gehlot...usne bhi dhoka diya...My poor Raj...😭 oye itna bhi mat ro yaar ki mere fic mein baadh aajaaye😆😆😆...........ab chup ho jaa........abhise itna royegi tho aage jaake kya karegi...............😉

Khair, continue soon...

Love
Guglu

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!! Thank u Shaina............

Lala Gehlot has been proven guilty and Navin has been proven innocent!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Thats great!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Yeh accha huya that Ritu is dead magar woh toh khaayi mein giri thi matlab uske wapas aane ke chances hai!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔 Very Smart 👏.................😉

Its bad that Lala was able to escape and he has sent a letter to Raj threatening him that he will destroy Raj's life!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Lala ko pakad nahi paya Raj kyunki woh desh chhod ke bhaag chuka tha!!!!!

Lala is like a wounded animal who will surely take his revenge but I am sure Raj can take care of him!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 lets hope so.......but a wounded animal is more dangerous ............

Raj ka promotion ho gaya and now he is a Major!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Thats great!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏....yaa..MAJ.RAJVEER SINGH SHEKHAWATH...cool hai na😛?

But yeh kya Raj ka KMA se jaane ka waqt aa gaya hai!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Uske bina KMA suna suna lagega!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

The convo between Suriji, Pooja and Ali was very nice!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 Thanx.............

Pooja is thinking about how much she will miss KMA after passing out!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Pooja is missing her Shahrukh and thinking who will save them from Nair now!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Yudi is complaining about Aalekh deserted him and went to Naina's house with her!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Neelu bhi Delhi gayi thi aur Aalekh aur Naina bhi and even Shalini was there!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Something is fishy!!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔 FISHY.......FISHY........😆😆😆

I am sure yeh sab wahan Naina aur Raj ki shaadi ke liye gaye thhe!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 Achchaa😲???itna sure ho tum?????

Why were Naina's friends stunned to see her when they were wating for both Naina and Aalekh??😕 😕 😕 😕 ye toh aage jaa ke hi pata chalegaa...........

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

hi dear heyy Sur.......

Gr8 update Thanks........

finally new year start ho hi gaya haa.........ho gaya final year shuru...........

its nice, the way u have changed the story Thanx a lot yaar.........

aur ye kya, kma me no Raj? iske bina to sab soona soona ho jayega na.....haa vo toh hai.........

but i know tumne kuch aur achcha plan karahoga haa plan toh hai.......hope ki tum sab ko pasand aaye........

thnx for the pm no problem dear..................

love

Sur

Originally posted by: mayadika11

awesoooooooooooome.........
superb.........
fantastical......
excellent...........
wonderful.........
lovely........
just too good.......
and thanx for the pm..........

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Guglu how do knw ke Raj ne apna pyaar bhi khoya hai
?? Haa.........guglu how do u knw???good question Dhara.............👏

Anyways...it was a superb vpdat Esh..u hv described d academx vry beautifully...! Thanx yaar........

Chalo, at least Ritu is Dead..nw dat also means ke Raj ki shaadi Naina se hi hui hai aur agar ab bhi kisi aur se hui hai toh Tera kya hoga Kalia..mera matlab hai Esha ?? arre yaar tum sab shaadi ke peeche kyu pade ho?ho gaya na shaadi........ab koi kya kar saktha hai???

This Yudi is so silly.. N so dumb ..lol..! haa.......vo toh hai......par ab mature ho jaayegaa....final year mein jo aagaya hai..........😊

Nw u hv stoppd at such a point dat if u dnt update soon toh Peter ke saath saath tu bhi gayi kaam se..!agar mein PETER KE 'SAATH SAATH' jaaungi toh mujhe toh koi aitraaz nahi hai yaar 😛maintoh khushi khushi jaaungi usske saath 😆😆😆😆............

Originally posted by: guglu088

Dhara..I meant it from the point of view of LRL... Naina's hating spree to be precise...ab iss fic me Siri kya karne waali hai ye to mujhe bhi nahi pata...