MANZIL-The Ultimate Goal[RN]-Part 3/Pg24/14.04.11

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Esha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: prerna1
hey that seems nice and interesting concept
but plz let Raj married to Naina
plz continue soon and do pm me too

Thanx for liking the concept Prerna............and for the comments too..........😊

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#92

Originally posted by: starasdf
😊😊😊Hey😊😊😊
😳😳😳Thanks for sending me all those pms and sorry i could reply cause i havemt got a chance to read all these new RN ffs but i am bak i am will be reading them so i will comment soon😳😳😳

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No problem yaar..........u can comment on the fic whenever u r free..............don't worry and no hurry 😆😆😆............Thanx for dropping by..........😛

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Esha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: preet09
Hi Siri Hey Preet..........
How r u? I'm fine dear................

Dekho, me aa gayi comment karne finally...........mene socha MOTW se pehle kar dun varna agar guglu jaise meharbani mere uppar ho gayi, to mein to comment karna hi bhool jaungi 😆 😆 😆 😆 sahi hai..........aur main dua karungi ki usse bhi jyaada meher tujhpe barse sab ki........😆 😆 😆

Chalo ab tumhe aur bore na karke aati hun FF par....... main bore nahi hui yaar.........

Starting with the prologue:-
Ur writing style is awesome, thanks to MOTW ki tumne is talent ko bahar lane ka amuka mila aur hum sab ko new ff. You have expressed all the emotions in a wonderful way, just loved it. Thank u dear.........

So, Raj is married, I think he got married with naina and as he is leaving KMA, so he is very upset as he can not ne there to save his fav from any trouble. good thinking..........get going..............😉 😆 😆

M very excited, please show her bride as soon as possible, as I want to see naina in that place, Loved the marriage scene. He is very upset regarding his departure, as he dont want to go there and we can completely his point,
yes he is upset regarding his departure but not because he don't want to go but because he don't want to leave every1 alone in danger.........

Very beutifully written Siri.
Loved it Thanks again..................
Luv Preet

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Esha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: preet09
Hi again!!!!! Hey again!!!!!!😆
mein phir se aa gayi firse welcome dear............😊
ab bore mat hona main toh pehle bhi bore nahi hui....😛

I loved the part yaar, finally raj ne naveen ko innocent prove kar hi diya aur naveen ab martyr keh layega. haa.........Thanx............

Ritu aur laala dono arrest ho gaye aur lala desh srohi bhi prove ho gaya, its an awesome paart, un dono ko to maar dena chahiye, kitna tang kiya na unhone raj naina ko. arre baapre itna gussa.............😲

I can understand raj ko kitna bura laga hoga jab usse lala ka sach pata chala hoga, par phir bhi usne ek sache sipahi ki tarah apna har farz nibhaya aur apne dost ko begunah sabiit karke guneh garo ko saza dilwai...he is so good na, role model for so many people. well said Preeto ji.........👏 👏 👏 👏

Cadets ne bhi raj ka saath abhut ache se diya aur naveen ko innocent prove karwa ke lala ko pakad vaya, but wo kamina lala vahan se bhi bhaag gaya, aur uski himaat to dekhi raj ko dhamka raha hai, par raj uski band agli baar bhi bajayega, wo chahe jitna marjhi chup le. par cornel chandra ko yeh sab pata hai and m sure ki wo raj ka saath zarur denge. haa jaroor ...............

cadets ab apne next year me hai par is baar raj unka saath dene ke liye nahin hoga, par raj ke bina KMA ka kuch nahin ho sakta, usse vaapis lao, please.
arre abhi toh gaya hi nahi thik se aur tu usse waapas laane ko keh rahi hai.......thoda ruk jaa wo waapas aayegaa par abhi nahi...........

cadets r back in the acaademy, loved their scene, want to know their reaction when they will come to know about raj's exit and his marriage too.
filhaal Raj ki shaadi ke baare mein koi nahi jaantha hai aur kuch waqt tak kisi ko pata bhi nahi chalne waala hai......cadets ko bhi nahi....secret u know...........😉

Now, continue soon. yes ma'am sure..............
M really excited to read more.
Luv Preet

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Esha

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: rajeev fann
update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

haa kar rahi hu.........

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Esha

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Please check out the character sketch in the first page...........I have edited the section by adding the new characters............Thank you...........😛

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Esha

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PART-2

A few hours before............

Army Intelligence HQ,Ladakh......

An officer entered his commander's cabin and saluted him.The commander looked at him questioningly to which he answered, "All set Sir.Everything has been prepared according to your instructions.Any further orders,sir?"

The commanding officer walked up to the window over-looking the Himalayas at the far.

He gazed at them for few minutes before saying,"We'll be starting for our destination in the next two hours.Get everyone ready till then.I don't want any delay in this mission.Is that clear?"

"Yes,sir",the officer replied and saluting his senior,he came out of the cabin.

The commander continued gazing at the beautiful mountains......for him they appear as beautiful as HER,as pure as HER smile......he is here in person only.......his mind is at somewhere else at present.....he is with HER.. his soul will be with HER always.....how can he leave HER,that too at a time like this?She needs him now.But he has no choice. For him,his duty comes first and foremost than anyone or anything in this world.....even HER!!If at any point of life he has to choose in between his duty and HER,he will definetly choose his duty....his country!!!! And she knows this fact....... and appreciates it too!!!She is the only one who understands him completely,even more than he himself. She is the one who once misunderstood him but she is the one who now understands him so much that she can tell his thoughts just by looking in to his eyes.......

His chain of thoughts were interrupted by the ringing of his cell phone.He took the call immediately and asked,"Aryan,I have been waiting for your call yaar.What took you so long?Pataa hai mujhe kitni tension ho rahi thi?Kaha ho tum sab?"

Aryan,at the other end of the phone was smiling and stopped his questioning spree saying,"Bhai.....bhai....please saans toh lo yaar.......kitne sawaal karthe ho aap?Jawaab dene ka mauka toh dedo pehle.Hum bas traffic mein fas gaye the issliye thodi der ho gayi.Yaha toh har waqt traffic hotha hi hai na.Ab hum sab airport par hi hai.Flight time pe hai aur hume koi problem nahi hui hai.Hum bas check-in karne jaa rahe hai. Fir voh chaaro bhi wapas ghar chale jayenge.Unnke saath chaar guards bhi hai so don't worry.....aur humara bhai bhi toh hai na?Kuch nahi hoga.Aur bhabhi shaayad aaj hi KMA jaayengi........ Aap sunn rahe hai na....bhai.....Rajveer bhaiyya....aap hai na line pe?"

Rajveer immediately responded,"Haa yaar yahi hu,chal thik hai main koi tension nahi lunga ab.Tum dono ho naa waha toh mujhe kisi baat ki chintha nahi hai.Main bas do ghanto main apne mission ke liye nikalne waala hu. Pata nahi fir kab contact kar paunga.Par main tum dono mai se kisi na kisi se touch mein rahunga jaroor.Thik hai? Aur tum dono sab ka dhyan rakhna waha.Aur khaas kar meri pariyon ka.Agar unhe tumne pareshaan kiya toh tum dono ki khair nahi,samjhe?"

Aryan -- "Haa bhai samajh gaya,dhyan rakhunga aur usse bhi bataa dunga.Aap yaha ki chinta chod do aur apne mission par focus karo.Abhi main chaltha hu,".

Rajveer -- "Thik hai beta,sab ko mera 'Hi' bol denaa,and have a safe flight".

"Thanks bhai.....aur suniye.....take care,we'll be waiting for you.Come back soon,"Aryan replied with tears.

"I promise beta,I'll come back,"Rajveer said and cut the line.

Rajveer was flooded back with memories but this time they were of his family.....yes he has a family.

Rajveer's parents died in a plane crash when he was just 7 years old.He was not at an age to do anything.Then came Mr.Yash Singhania,his father's cousin brother.Inspite of being cousins,they both were like own brothers. They were also partners in their business empire 'SS GROUP OF INDUSTRIES'.Yash and his wife Madhvi were not in the country when this accident had happened.They returned immediately with their 4 yr old son Aryan when they heard the news.They gladly took Rajveer in to their family. After that,he never felt the absence of his parents in his life.Yash and Madhvi always treated him as their first son and he also considered them as his parents.They never differentiated between Rajveer and Aryan.Rajveer loved Aaryan very much and Aryan too doted on his big brother.Rajveer was more close to Madhvi and she also loved him more than Aryan.But Aryan never complained about it as he too loves Rajveer more than anyone.He always look up to his brother for everything.

Mr.Yash Singhania is a name to be reckoned with in the present day business world.His business is spread all over the world. After the death of Mr. & Mrs.Shekhawath,Yash had to work very hard to uphold their business empire.After 5 years of continuous struggle,he was sucessful.Whatever he is today,he achieved it on the basis of his principles,ideologies,honesty and sincerity,the qualities he learnt from Rajveer's father,Mr.Shekhawath.He is a man true to his words.He overcame many obstacles to be where he is today and in this journey Madhvi had been a pillar of strength and support to him throughout.

When Yash decided to settle in Germany for some business purposes some 10 yrs back,Rajveer expressed his desire to join army and serve the country.Yash and Madhvi were shocked to hear this but didn't object his wish.They were proud of him instead. They permitted him to join the Army but due to his business pressures Yash was forced to go to Germany leaving Rajveer alone in India.But he never lacked him anything. Rajveer completed his college studies in Delhi and joined KMA where he met Navin Singh Ahluwalia and also caught the attention of Lala Gehlot due to his brilliance and enthusiasm and also being the son of a rich and famous industrialist and businessman Late.Mr.Shekhawath.He announced Rajveer as his God-Son and took him under his care.

Before joining KMA,Rajveer decided to stay quite on his family details, thinking of the future consequences as his family was not there then.He only stated that his parents are dead.He never got a chance to confess this truth to his God-Father,who remained in dark regarding Rajveer's family. Only navin knew that Rajveer has a family in Germany but he too kept quiet about it.

This proved as a plus point for him at the present situation.So after marriage,he insisted his mom and dad to go back to Germany along with Aryan.He revealed the truth regarding Lala's letter and asked them to keep themselves away from danger.He also requested his in-laws to go with his parents and they obliged.As the marriage has been conducted with utmost secrecy,no one but a few trusted people knows about Rajveer being married now.So half of his family will be safe in Germany. And the rest will be in KMA for the time being.They'll be safe there with all the protection.His wife will be there too,along with sherry and his favourites cadets.

The thought of his cadets brought him back to the present.He recalled everything that had happened in the last few months."Why Naveen......why is this happening to me?What have I done so wrong to get this?I don't know how much more I can bear.Please help me yaar........ please,"he prayed silently,tears in his eyes.

Then composing himself,he said aloud,"I have to come back at any cost Aryan.....kuch adhure kaam hai jinhe poora karnaa baaki hai......kuch adhure rishtey hai jinhe nibhaana hai.......aur kisi ke aankhon mein intezaar hai jo sirf mere aane ke baad hi khatam hogi........I will come back at any cost," Rajveer promised himself and left for his quarters to get ready for the mission that has been assigned to him two weeks earlier..........

Now at KMA,

All the 4 friends stood up in shock seeing Naina,none of them were able to utter a single word.First time,Pooja is finding it difficult to speak.The usually over- enthusiastic Yudi stood confunded.Ali,for a change,is gaping at Naina open-mouthed.And for Huda, well,there is no word to describe his present condition......he's simply bowled over completely. Because....there stood Naina,clad in a red saree,wearing some jewellry and looking just like a bride..smiling at her friends' reactions.

Pooja recovered first.Moving around Naina,she asked,"Oye Naina,ye tu hai? Hai rabba tu kitni soni lag rahi hai yaar,bilkul dulhan ki tarah!!Kahi tune shaadi toh nahi karli na hume bina bataaye??Ye achaanak tune apna poora hand-set hi badal diya,aisa kyun?"

By now,all the others also recovered from their daze.Huda was glaring at Pooja for talking about Naina's marriage.Today, Huda felt perfectly sure that he is really in love with his phoolan.She is just like the girl that he has always dreamed of.Now he can't live without her.But first he has to know her feelings for him.He has to confess his love to her.Yes,he will confess his love soon.......

While Huda is in his thoughts,Naina hugged Pooja and said,"I missed you so much Pooji,I missed all of you guys.Kaash tum sab bhi mere aur Aalekh ke saath aathe toh kitna mazaa aatha.Pata hai hamaare ghar jaane ke baad pata chala ki meri cousin sister ki shaadi hai Delhi mein.Toh hum sab Delhi chale gaye.Wahaa itne saalo baad sab se milke bohuth achcha lagaa mujhe. Sab log Maa-Baba ko kitni izzat de rahe the.I felt so happy.Humne wahaa bohuth mazaa kiya.Fir Aalekh apne kuch doston se milne chala gaya jo Delhi mein hai.Ussne kaha ki vo khud KMA aajaayega.Shaadi aaj subah ke early hours pe thi.Main shaadi se direct KMA aayi hu.Mujhe aaj bhaiyya ki bohuth yaad aa rahi hai.Issliye socha ki KMA aa jaau. Yaha toh bhaiyya ke hone ka ehsaas har jagah par hai.Aur ab toh unnki tasveer bhi hai na WALL OF FAME pe.Bas issliye aise hi aagayi,"she completed with tears in her eyes.

Pooja hugged and consoled her.Ali and Yudi too came forward and hugged her.Ali said,"Aap aaj bohuth khoobsurath lag rahi hai Naina.Khuda kare aap ko kisi ki nazar na lage."

Yudi said,"Bilkul sahi kaha chief,Naina you are looking gorgeous in this saree.Tabhi toh Huda ko dekho,kuch bol hi nahi paaraha.Kyun dude,sahi kaha na maine?"

Huda looked at all of them and went towards Naina and suddenly went down on his knees and held his hand out before her.None understood what he was upto.Then he asked Naina,"Phoolan,mujhse shaadi karegi?"

Everybody stood shocked for a moment looking at him.Seeing all those shocked faces, Huda started laughing madly.Then controlling himself he said,"Arre yaar,aise kyun dekh rahe ho?Main toh apne phoolan se flirt kar raha tha.Tum sab ko kya laga?Main aise hi kahi bhi,kabhi bhi propose kar dunga kya?Baawra hu kya main?Nahi na.Main toh Haryana ka jatt hu. Saaddi style hi kuch alag hai,"he raised his collar to show off while Naina ran to beat him up.He dodged her and ran across the mess to save himself while the others stood there laughing at them.

Finally Naina caught Huda and he apologised her holding his ears.Then all of them spent some time in the mess chatting up when they heard BC's voice over the speakers telling them to be in the assembly at exactly 1900hrs to welcome the new faculty members.Wondering who'll be coming to KMA and also when Aalekh is going to join them,all the friends went back to their rooms to unpack and settle down..........

1900Hrs
Assembly Hall,KMA

All the cadets who have already arrived were standing in attention chatting among themselves quietly as Maj.Nair is standing at the podium looking as menancing as ever.Then Brig.Chandook came there along with the other faculty members.There was a new person in the group who was talking with Dr.Shalini.BC took the mike and addressed the cadets,"Welcome to Kanchanjunga Military Academy,cadets.And for the senior cadets,welcome back.Ye yaha par aap logon ki aakhri saal hai cadets.So work hard.Poori mehnat aur lagan ke saath iss saal ko bhi poora karo aur iss desh ke kaabil sipaahi bano.Make KMA proud by your standards.

Jaisa ki aap sab jaanthe hai ki aapke classes do din baad se shuru honge. Tab tak keliye aap sab free hai.Par mujhe iss academy mein koi bhi indiscipline nahi chaahiye.Maine aap sab ko yaha aapke naye faculty members se milwaane keliye bulaaya hai.Taaki inn do dino mein aap logon ki jaan pehchaan badh jaaye.Toh ye hai Capt.Abhimanyu Rai Chauhan, aapke naye drill commander aur music teacher.Waise innko assist karne keliye ek aur faculty member appoint ki gayi hai par lagtha hai vo abhi tak aayi nahi hai.so..........."

"Sorry to interrupt you Sir,par main yahi hu.Ek ghante pehle hi aayi hu.Tab aap yaha nahi the issliye aapko report nahi kar paayi,"a young woman came infront of BC and said.

Seeing the young woman,Capt.Abhimanyu was surprised."Itne saalon baad,ye yaha? Pata nahi ab hum kya karenge.Oh God!Inn ko bhi yahi aanaa tha kya?Ab toh Raj bhi nahi hai yaha hamari help ke liye.Aisa lagtha hai ki waqt kabhi aage hi nahi badha hai.Aaj bhi ye waisi hi hai,utni hi khoobsurath,bilkul nahi badli hai"he thought looking at her.

"Very well Capt.toh aapka bhi introduction kar hi dete hai,"BC told her.

She came forward and saluted BC saying, "Capt.Nandini Rathode reporting, Sir."

Hearing this,Naina was shocked.She stared at the new officer standing beside BC while several memories flooded her.She didn't hear a word of BC introducing her to the cadets as their new Strategy and Communications teacher along with assisting Capt.Abhimanyu in the drills.After the introduction,everyone were dismissed but Naina stood there reliving her memories.........

"Sir,ye Nandini kaun hai?"

"Tumhe Nandini ke baare mein kisne bataaya,Naina?"

"Woh Sir bhaiyya ki diary mein inn ka naam hai aap sab ke saath,issiliye poochliya.Kaun hai ye?"

"Ye Abhi ki tarah hamaari dost thi,Naina.Filhaal kaha hai ye mujhe nahi pata."

"Par iss mein bhaiyya ne innka naam aapke naam ke saath kyun likha hai? Aur ye kyu likha hai ki Raj ne bohuth badi galthi ki hai?Kya galthi ki hai Sir aapne?"

"Sir boliye na.......aap chup kyun hai?"

"Hamaare academy days mein Nandini aur main ek couple the,Naina.We were together.Ye thi meri galthi...................."

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Raj is in Ladakh for some secret mission!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

He is missing his wife very much but he knows that for him his duty comes first and his wife too knows about this!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

He is lost in her thoughts when Aryan calls him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍

Aryan said ke uski bhabhi shayad aaj hi KMA jayengi!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Now I am sure its Naina!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Its good to hear about Raj's family and that his foster parents are so nice!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

They are proud of him and he cares for them a lot!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

He hadn't talked about them to anyone except Navin and this proved as a plus point!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Aryan is Raj's younger brother and loves him a lot!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is determined to come back as he knows there is someone waiting for him!!!!!! 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina's friends are shocked to see her in a saree!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

She is looking beautiful and just like a bride!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina tells them about her cousin's wedding in Delhi but somehow her story sounded like a well scripted screenplay trying to hide the truth!!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

Aalekh was with Naina but he still has not come back!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Of course Aalekh has to be there at Naina's wedding!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Everyone complimented Naina that she is looking gorgeous!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Huda is bowled over by Naina and proposed to her!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Why doesn't he keep away from her??😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

But then he laughed it off and Naina ran to beat him up!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Abhimanyu and Nandini are the new faculty members in KMA!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Abhimanyu is surprised to see her and seems have feelings for Nandini!!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛

Naina is shocked to see Nandini here because she knows that Nandini was friends with Raj and Navin when they were cadets!!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

She also knows that Raj and Nandini were a couple in their academy days and that was a huge mistake!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago