MANZIL-The Ultimate Goal[RN]-Part 3/Pg24/14.04.11 - Page 9

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Update was very good Thanx yaar..........

Raj has proven navin innocent and Lala Gehot guilty. Its good that Ritu is dead...one less enemy for Raj to worry about. Its bad that Lala was able to escape and he has treathened raj that he will come back destroy Raj's life.

I truely hope that Raj is married to naina... Let's see ur hope is fulfilled or not.......

you have stopped at a very exciting point...so please continue soon and

If possible can you please send a PM when update the next part........yeah........my pleasure dear........

Originally posted by: sania_58

wow

awsome update

too good

mindblowing

interesting part

beautifully written

great going

plz continue soon

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

hey Siri...😃 hellooo ji.......Priya ji.........😃

Tu DDPA ki member hai is ka ek subut toh de hi diya...matlab abhi tune sirf ek hi xam pass kiya hai...😆!!!achchaa........ koun sa xam batayun...😛!!! haa....jaroor.........sare DDPA k members na...kuch aise point par UD end karte hain ki readers unhe galiyaan dete hain...!!! jaise ki main abhi tumhe de rahi hun...."Maar Khani Hai....Yahan Par Ud Kyoun Khatam Kiya'😡 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 ye achchaa hai......pehle bolo fir gaaliya do.........

chalo koi baat nahi..par Ud tha ek damm Mast bole toh ek damm Zabardast👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 arre wah...Thanx mere sher...oops........sherni......😉

chalo ek baat achha hua ki Ritu mahatma...bhagwan ko pyari ho gayi hai...😃!!! vaise bhi voh upar jyada achhi lagti hai...nichewalon ko pareshan karne k liye pata nahi bhagwan ne use kyoun post kiya tha...??? aur jab bhagwan ko apni galati ka ehsaas hua toh apna wrong post wapas le liya...😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛

POST??????wah yaar tu toh bhuth achchi baatein use ar rahii hai......... very good......😆😆😆

ek aur baat achhi hui Lala jee bhi guilty sabit ho gaye...!!! matlab abhi sayad kuch dino tak un k darshan se bach jayenge...hum log...agar Siri maam ki daya rahi toh...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 haa mai na tujhse bohuth khush hu issliye meri daya rahegi tum pe......abhi Lalaji ki darshan nahi karni padegi........😆😆😆

pooja...ali aur suri jee ki batain baht achhi thi...!!! pooja k paas dimag hai...yeh baat pahli baar pata chala...!!! varna voh aage k bare me kaise sochti ki graduation ho jane k baad voh KMA ko miss karegi...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃
ab kya kare Pooja bhi teri jaisi hi hai........kabhi kabhi galthi se dikha hi dethi hai ki usske paas bhi dimaag hai..........😉

Yudi kabhi nahi sudhrega...na toh serial me aur na hi kisi bhi fic me...!!! use baht sari shikayatin hamesha rahti hai...har jagah...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
haa ye sach kaha tu ne.......par main soch rahi hu ki ladke ko Doc.Mana ke paas bhej ke sudhaar du........kaisa rahegaa???😆😆

Neelu...alekh aur naina Delhi kyoun gaye hain...??? ab is k piche koi raaz toh hai...aur voh Raaz part 1 hai ya part 2 yeh toh tumhi bata sakti ho...!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 RAAZ PART 3........😈.........kaisa hai???aur isski khasiyath ye hai ki ye raaz jaldi khulegaa nahi........😆 😆 😆

ab baht sare confusion daal diye hain tum ne...!!! haa mera iraada bhi kuch aisa hi tha.......tum sab ko confuse karna 😆😆..........sab k bare me main kuch na kuch toh guess karr rahi hun...!!! par bolungi nahi...varna tum meri peetai karr dogi...!!! haa vo toh main jaroor karungi agar tu ne kabhi bhi apne dimaagless guesses ko jaahir hone diya toh 😡😡😡...............dimagless logon ki guesses ko kabhi bhi nahi padhna chahiye...!!! voh kya hai na...is se side-effect padta hai...😆 😆 😆!!! isiliye main tumhare aage UDs ka wait karungi...taki yeh dekh sakun ki main kahan tak sahi thi....😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉.......hmmm.....good girl......

toh tum ne Raj ko promotion de hi di (ab yeh toh tumhare hi hath me tha)...!!! achha kiya...!!! serial k suru se le kar 20th august 2007 tak sare dard...sari taklifain usi ne hi toh sahe hain...!!! haa yaar mujhe bhi yahi lagaa.........aur waise bhi kab tak hum usse CAPT. ki tarah dekhthe.........kabhi toh aage badhnaa chahiye na.........serial mein na sahi hamaare fiics mein hi sahi........right?😛

ab maam zara jaldi se next ud post karr dena...plz...😃 dekhungiiiiii.....sochungiiiiii........fir UD karungiiiiiii............😆😆😆😆😆

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome, brilliant prologue.
but iye tune kaise jhatka dia, raj ka shaadi kisse ho rehi hain
jaldi bol.
Hope naina se ho.
update soon.

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome update. loved it.
Accha hua oh lala ka gunah samane aagaya.
Naveen innocent bhi prove ho gaya.
continue soon.
sorry for short comment exam ke baad lamba , lamba comment dungi.

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

nahi yaar...tu sahi direction me ja rahi hai...lage raho...!!!Thanks............... aur agar kabhi tum ne apna dimag galati se lagane ki koshish ki toh...social work karne k liye hum sabb to hain hi...!!! mana...main Guglu...sumi...!!! arre yaar list baht lambi hai...!!! Ha pata hai mujhe.........aur DDPA k aur bhi baht se code words hain...par main tumhe bata nahi pa rahi hun...!!! kyoun ki use yaad rakhne k liye Dimag ki jarurat hoti hai...aur voh chiz toh kab ka maine chiz sandwitch bana kar daan karr diya hai...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 ab jab usse daan karna hi tha toh aise hi kar deti .......bechara jisne bhi usse galthi se khaya hoga usski tho ab tak watt lag gayi hogi.........😆😆😆😆

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

vohi toh main bhi kah rahi hun yaar...!!! is ud ko dekh...hamare dimagless club ki members ki tarah us ne sahi tym par Ud end karr diya...!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

bilkul sahi kaha tune...hum sabhi kamm se ek baar apna dimag ishtemal kar k apni fic ko dis-cont karne k bare me sochte hain...😆!!! par us k baad voh galiyaan paddti hai ki hamare KAAN PAVITRA ho jate hain...aur hum achhe bachhon ki tarh phir se next ud type karne lagte hain...!!!😆
🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

par jahan tak mujhe umeed hai Siri yeh trend follow nahi karegi...!!! bilkul nahi................kyoun ki sayad use achha nahi lagega ki us k kaan hum apni galiyon se PAVITRA karen...!!!😆 haa sahi mein.......mere kaan abhi ke liye thik hai........mujhe unhe PAVITRA nahi karvaana......vo bhi tum logo se toh bilkul bhi nahi............😲 😲 😲

aur tune bilkul sahi kaha hai ki hum is trend ko apne club se bahar fhenk ne wale hain...😃!!! baht taklif hoti hai...main...as a reader bhi kah rahi hun aur as a writer bhi kah rahi hun...!!! kyoun ki dono hi halat hum sab ne feel kiya hai....👏 👏 👏 👏 👏.......BRAVO DEARIES..........

Originally posted by: rajeev fann

hiii.....loved the update...Thanx dear......

sorry m repying sooo late and that too with a short comment...not at all a problem yaar........

but i m really helpless😭😭 but i guess something is better than nothing.....yeah true..........

in one line i want to say that it'll be gud for u if raj is married to naina and not anybody else😡 or u know na that i m a very loyal member of "DIMAAGLESS GROUP"...soo u can very well think of the consequences😆........arre yaar main bhi toh ussi group ki member hu.........tu apne hi group ki member ko maaregi kya 😭😭? kya zamaana aagaya hai......apne hi apno ko maar ne ke liye utaavle ho rahe hai dekho😆😆😆😆😆..........

update soon and take care😊

Originally posted by: sweet_shona

Wowww..one more RN ff n that too based on LRL...

so raj is alrdy married..but whom?? i hope its naina...

pls solve this mystery soon... lovely concept... n gr88 storyline....

pls add me in ur pm list..n pls update soon...