MANZIL-The Ultimate Goal[RN]-Part 3/Pg24/14.04.11

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 15 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: esha143

yaar Priya ab mere paas dimaag hai ya nahi ye main kaise bataa sakthi hu?? ye kaam toh tum sab ka hai na...issiliye maine ek aur ud post kiyaa hai........ab isse padh lo aur decide karo ki mere paas dimaag hai bhi ya nahi.........waise iss ud ko padh ke mujhe khud nahi lagtha ki mere paas koi bhi dimaag hai😆😆😆😆...........aur haa DDPA ke code word bataane ke liye shukriyaa.......😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

nahi yaar...tu sahi direction me ja rahi hai...lage raho...!!! aur agar kabhi tum ne apna dimag galati se lagane ki koshish ki toh...social work karne k liye hum sabb to hain hi...!!! mana...main Guglu...sumi...!!! arre yaar list baht lambi hai...!!! aur DDPA k aur bhi baht se code words hain...par main tumhe bata nahi pa rahi hun...!!! kyoun ki use yaad rakhne k liye Dimag ki jarurat hoti hai...aur voh chiz toh kab ka maine chiz sandwitch bana kar daan karr diya hai...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 15 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: guglu088

Bilkul sahi kaha hai Priya tune... bas thoda sa intezaar karna baaki hai....😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

vohi toh main bhi kah rahi hun yaar...!!! is ud ko dekh...hamare dimagless club ki members ki tarah us ne sahi tym par Ud end karr diya...!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 15 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: guglu088

Bilkul sahi kaha priya...mai bhi padhkar yahi soch rahi thi ki agar DIMAG hua to fir to Siri ko DDPA ki membership nahi mil sakti na... DDPA ke members humesha haste rehte hain ye ek baat hai aur dusri unki ek aur khubi hai.,..bataun kya...soch soch....hum sab kam se kam ek baar apni fics discontinue karne ki sochkar fir se continue kar rahe hain...😉😉😉😉😉😉 Bas ab yahi hope hai ki Siri madam ye trend na follow karen kyunki iss abb is trend ko hum DDPA se bahar fenkne waalen hain...

bilkul sahi kaha tune...hum sabhi kamm se ek baar apna dimag ishtemal kar k apni fic ko dis-cont karne k bare me sochte hain...😆!!! par us k baad voh galiyaan paddti hai ki hamare KAAN PAVITRA ho jate hain...aur hum achhe bachhon ki tarh phir se next ud type karne lagte hain...!!!😆

par jahan tak mujhe umeed hai Siri yeh trend follow nahi karegi...!!! kyoun ki sayad use achha nahi lagega ki us k kaan hum apni galiyon se PAVITRA karen...!!!😆

aur tune bilkul sahi kaha hai ki hum is trend ko apne club se bahar fhenk ne wale hain...😃!!! baht taklif hoti hai...main...as a reader bhi kah rahi hun aur as a writer bhi kah rahi hun...!!! kyoun ki dono hi halat hum sab ne feel kiya hai....

Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago

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luvraj4ever

@luvraj4ever

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Posted: 15 years ago

#64

hiii.....loved the update...sorry m repying sooo late and that too with a short comment...but i m really helpless😭😭 but i guess something is better than nothing.....in one line i want to say that it'll be gud for u if raj is married to naina and not anybody else😡😡😡😡 or u know na that i m a very loyal member of "DIMAAGLESS GROUP"...soo u can very well think of the consequences😆😆😆😆

update soon and take care😊

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sweet_shona

@sweet_shona

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Posted: 15 years ago

#65

Wowww..one more RN ff n that too based on LRL...

so raj is alrdy married..but whom?? i hope its naina...

pls solve this mystery soon... lovely concept... n gr88 storyline....

pls add me in ur pm list..n pls update soon...

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Prerna

@prerna1

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Posted: 15 years ago

#66

hey that seems nice and interesting concept
but plz let Raj married to Naina
plz continue soon and do pm me too

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Star

@starasdf

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Posted: 15 years ago

#67

😊😊😊Hey😊😊😊

😳😳😳Thanks for sending me all those pms and sorry i could reply cause i havemt got a chance to read all these new RN ffs but i am bak i am will be reading them so i will comment soon😳😳😳

Star⭐️

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Preet

@RadhaKrishan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#68

Hi Siri
How r u?

Dekho, me aa gayi comment karne finally...........mene socha MOTW se pehle kar dun varna agar guglu jaise meharbani mere uppar ho gayi, to mein to comment karna hi bhool jaungi

Chalo ab tumhe aur bore na karke aati hun FF par

Starting with the prologue:-
Ur writing style is awesome, thanks to MOTW ki tumne is talent ko bahar lane ka amuka mila aur hum sab ko new ff. You have expressed all the emotions in a wonderful way, just loved it.

So, Raj is married, I think he got married with naina and as he is leaving KMA, so he is very upset as he can not ne there to save his fav from any trouble.

M very excited, please show her bride as soon as possible, as I want to see naina in that place, Loved the marriage scene. He is very upset regarding his departure, as he dont want to go there and we can completely his point,

Very beutifully written Siri.
Loved it
Luv Preet

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Preet

@RadhaKrishan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#69

Hi again!!!!!
mein phir se aa gayi
ab bore mat hona

I loved the part yaar, finally raj ne naveen ko innocent prove kar hi diya aur naveen ab martyr keh layega.

Ritu aur laala dono arrest ho gaye aur lala desh srohi bhi prove ho gaya, its an awesome paart, un dono ko to maar dena chahiye, kitna tang kiya na unhone raj naina ko.

I can understand raj ko kitna bura laga hoga jab usse lala ka sach pata chala hoga, par phir bhi usne ek sache sipahi ki tarah apna har farz nibhaya aur apne dost ko begunah sabiit karke guneh garo ko saza dilwai...he is so good na, role model for so many people.

Cadets ne bhi raj ka saath abhut ache se diya aur naveen ko innocent prove karwa ke lala ko pakad vaya, but wo kamina lala vahan se bhi bhaag gaya, aur uski himaat to dekhi raj ko dhamka raha hai, par raj uski band agli baar bhi bajayega, wo chahe jitna marjhi chup le. par cornel chandra ko yeh sab pata hai and m sure ki wo raj ka saath zarur denge.

cadets ab apne next year me hai par is baar raj unka saath dene ke liye nahin hoga, par raj ke bina KMA ka kuch nahin ho sakta, usse vaapis lao, please.

cadets r back in the acaademy, loved their scene, want to know their reaction when they will come to know about raj's exit and his marriage too.

Now, continue soon.
M really excited to read more.
Luv Preet

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Esha

@esha143

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan
wow! an awesome update............so, naina is married to rajveer,i hope. i was waiting for the update..........thanks for the pm.

Thanks for the comments dear............😊