MANZIL-The Ultimate Goal[RN]-Part 3/Pg24/14.04.11

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ChhalkiSyaahi

@ChhalkiSyaahi

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#51

Siriiiiiiiiiiiiiiii...

Ab agar mai tujhe maar daalun to shikayat mat karna...how can you end this part at such an interesting point...😡😡😡

Thankfully Lala Gehlot is proved guilty and that witch Ritu is dead...but Lala farar hai aur ye chinta ki baat hai...after all Raj aur unke cadets ka sawal hai...

The convo between Suriji and Ali and Pooja was very nice...matlab Pooja soch rahi hai ki Graduation hone ke baad wo KMA ko kitna miss karegi...

Aur Yudi ki complaints dekho...kitna complain karta hai...mujhe hasi aa rahi thi..Neelu bhi delhi gayi hai aur Aalekh aur Naina bhi...m sure ki daal me kuch kaala hai...aur agar as u said TUMHARA DIMAG GHUM GAYA to puri ki puri daal hi kaali hogi...

Now why were her friends dazed to see Naina...mujhe kuch kuch samajh me to aa raha hai par maine bhi faisla kiya hai ki kuch nahi bolungi...tumhare agloe part ka intezaar karungi...

Last but not the least...the best part was Raj's promotion to the post of Major...he deserved it...sabse jyaada taklif to usse hi hui hai...matlab kitna kuch khoya hai usne...apna dost, apna pyaar aur fir ab lala Gehlot...usne bhi dhoka diya...My poor Raj...😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Khair, continue soon...

Love
Guglu

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 15 years ago

#52

awesome update. loved it.
Accha hua oh lala ka gunah samane aagaya.
Naveen innocent bhi prove ho gaya.
continue soon.
sorry for short comment exam ke baad lamba , lamba comment dungi.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

Trailblazer

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Posted: 15 years ago

#53

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Lala Gehlot has been proven guilty and Navin has been proven innocent!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Thats great!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Yeh accha huya that Ritu is dead magar woh toh khaayi mein giri thi matlab uske wapas aane ke chances hai!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

Its bad that Lala was able to escape and he has sent a letter to Raj threatening him that he will destroy Raj's life!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Lala ko pakad nahi paya Raj kyunki woh desh chhod ke bhaag chuka tha!!!!!

Lala is like a wounded animal who will surely take his revenge but I am sure Raj can take care of him!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Raj ka promotion ho gaya and now he is a Major!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Thats great!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

But yeh kya Raj ka KMA se jaane ka waqt aa gaya hai!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Uske bina KMA suna suna lagega!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

The convo between Suriji, Pooja and Ali was very nice!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Pooja is thinking about how much she will miss KMA after passing out!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Pooja is missing her Shahrukh and thinking who will save them from Nair now!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Yudi is complaining about Aalekh deserted him and went to Naina's house with her!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Neelu bhi Delhi gayi thi aur Aalekh aur Naina bhi and even Shalini was there!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Something is fishy!!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

I am sure yeh sab wahan Naina aur Raj ki shaadi ke liye gaye thhe!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Why were Naina's friends stunned to see her when they were wating for both Naina and Aalekh??😕 😕 😕 😕

Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#54

hi dear

Gr8 update

finally new year start ho hi gaya

its nice, the way u have changed the story

aur ye kya, kma me no Raj? iske bina to sab soona soona ho jayega na..

but i know tumne kuch aur achcha plan karahoga

thnx for the pm

love

Sur

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362035

Suspended

Posted: 15 years ago

#55

awesoooooooooooome.........
superb.........
fantastical......
excellent...........
wonderful.........
lovely........
just too good.......
and thanx for the pm..........

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Dhara Singh

@Dhara_s

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#56

Guglu how do knw ke Raj ne apna pyaar bhi khoya hai
??

Anyways...it was a superb vpdat Esh..u hv described d academx vry beautifully...!

Chalo, at least Ritu is Dead..nw dat also means ke Raj ki shaadi Naina se hi hui hai aur agar ab bhi kisi aur se hui hai toh Tera kya hoga Kalia..mera matlab hai Esha ??
This Yudi is so silly.. N so dumb ..lol..!
Nw u hv stoppd at such a point dat if u dnt update soon toh Peter ke saath saath tu bhi gayi kaam se..!

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ChhalkiSyaahi

@ChhalkiSyaahi

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Dhara_s
Guglu how do knw ke Raj ne apna pyaar bhi khoya hai
??

Anyways...it was a superb vpdat Esh..u hv described d academx vry beautifully...!

Chalo, at least Ritu is Dead..nw dat also means ke Raj ki shaadi Naina se hi hui hai aur agar ab bhi kisi aur se hui hai toh Tera kya hoga Kalia..mera matlab hai Esha ??
This Yudi is so silly.. N so dumb ..lol..!
Nw u hv stoppd at such a point dat if u dnt update soon toh Peter ke saath saath tu bhi gayi kaam se..!

Dhara..I meant it from the point of view of LRL... Naina's hating spree to be precise...ab iss fic me Siri kya karne waali hai ye to mujhe bhi nahi pata...

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#58

Update was very good

Raj has proven navin innocent and Lala Gehot guilty. Its good that Ritu is dead...one less enemy for Raj to worry about. Its bad that Lala was able to escape and he has treathened raj that he will come back destroy Raj's life.

I truely hope that Raj is married to naina...

you have stopped at a very exciting point...so please continue soon and

If possible can you please send a PM when update the next part

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sania_58

@sania_58

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#59

wow

awsome update

too good

mindblowing

interesting part

beautifully written

great going

plz continue soon

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#60

hey Siri...😃

Tu DDPA ki member hai is ka ek subut toh de hi diya...matlab abhi tune sirf ek hi xam pass kiya hai...😆!!! koun sa xam batayun...😛!!! sare DDPA k members na...kuch aise point par UD end karte hain ki readers unhe galiyaan dete hain...!!! jaise ki main abhi tumhe de rahi hun...."Maar Khani Hai....Yahan Par Ud Kyoun Khatam Kiya'😡

chalo koi baat nahi..par Ud tha ek damm Mast bole toh ek damm Zabardast👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

chalo ek baat achha hua ki Ritu mahatma...bhagwan ko pyari ho gayi hai...😃!!! vaise bhi voh upar jyada achhi lagti hai...nichewalon ko pareshan karne k liye pata nahi bhagwan ne use kyoun post kiya tha...??? aur jab bhagwan ko apni galati ka ehsaas hua toh apna wrong post wapas le liya...😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛

ek aur baat achhi hui Lala jee bhi guilty sabit ho gaye...!!! matlab abhi sayad kuch dino tak un k darshan se bach jayenge...hum log...agar Siri maam ki daya rahi toh...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

pooja...ali aur suri jee ki batain baht achhi thi...!!! pooja k paas dimag hai...yeh baat pahli baar pata chala...!!! varna voh aage k bare me kaise sochti ki graduation ho jane k baad voh KMA ko miss karegi...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

Yudi kabhi nahi sudhrega...na toh serial me aur na hi kisi bhi fic me...!!! use baht sari shikayatin hamesha rahti hai...har jagah...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Neelu...alekh aur naina Delhi kyoun gaye hain...??? ab is k piche koi raaz toh hai...aur voh Raaz part 1 hai ya part 2 yeh toh tumhi bata sakti ho...!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

ab baht sare confusion daal diye hain tum ne...!!! sab k bare me main kuch na kuch toh guess karr rahi hun...!!! par bolungi nahi...varna tum meri peetai karr dogi...!!! dimagless logon ki guesses ko kabhi bhi nahi padhna chahiye...!!! voh kya hai na...is se side-effect padta hai...😆 😆 😆!!! isiliye main tumhare aage UDs ka wait karungi...taki yeh dekh sakun ki main kahan tak sahi thi....😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

toh tum ne Raj ko promotion de hi di (ab yeh toh tumhare hi hath me tha)...!!! achha kiya...!!! serial k suru se le kar 20th august 2007 tak sare dard...sari taklifain usi ne hi toh sahe hain...!!!

ab maam zara jaldi se next ud post karr dena...plz...😃

Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago