||Just One Breath Away-AN FF~VM pg 122||

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shalini

@wow123

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#411

Wah Khush

Pyar ache khase insaan ko pagal bana deta hai.Iska jeeta jagta udharan hai Abhi.Nikki to thori si pagal shuru se thi par Abhi ko usne pagal bana diya.

Abhi is always seen as sensible n mature person who believes in simple thinking n high living.But sometimes loves make u do the things which u never expected.He always has the answer to the question but loves make him stammer thats lovely.

Hope confession is in a line.

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#412

Thanks everyone for the lovely comments...feels so good to come online and see a long line of your beautiful thoughts! 🤗

@Rati...kaise maarti yaar! Tu to meri dost hai! 🤗

@Aisha...thanks so much! And I'm so glad you found this part to be nice despite it not being long...well, I always look for content, not for length! 😳 Well, this is a transitiory phase...they're both beginning to realise their feelings are true, and are accepting it slowly. That's why Nikki said that 😃 Thanks for the jhappiz jana...back at you too! 🤗

@Ivy...so good to see you here! 🤗 So you managed to read all the parts! 😃 Thanks for the comment! Glad you'r enjoying it!

@Jyothi...thanks! Glad you liked the phone call! Yes I think the next part will be longer...might have to split it though! 😆 😉

@Fahi... 🤗 Thanks! You're sooo right when you said this: "hai na woh pura entertainment package.. kabhi comedy, kabhi serious, kabhi romantic, kabhi sadu, kabhi aggressive.. " 😆 This line of yours totally cracked me up: "And there was me thinking they just did it for fun.. time pass.. "🤣 Yes...so they're finally getting a move on! 😃 Confession is most certainly coming up, but not in the next part sorry... 😕 Sabar ka fal meetha hota hai! 😉

@Mich...thanks! Glad you found the part cute! It wasn't planned actually...in fact this whole Paligaon trip wasn't planned 😆 The last two parts were completely spontaneous as I keep writing blindly, not knowing where I'm going 😳 Glad it clicked! 😃 Yes Abhi is truly extremely adorable!!! 😳 And I love that side of him! He's so cute when he stammers and tries to hide things! 😳 Thanks for the comment! 🤗

@Fuzz....🤗 Welcome on board to my thread dear! Sure...you take your sweet time in reading jana, I don't mind! 😃 I hope you'll like it! 😳

@Kalindi...yes 16 missed calls! 😆 Great phone plan...uh, I dunno lolz! 😆 😆 😆 Glad you liked it! Thanks for the comment!

@Cherry...thanks for the colourful comments! 😃 🤗 Yes! "Distance makes the heart grow fonder"! 😉 😆 Glad you enjoyed the flashbacks! 😃 And Abhi coming to Paligaon? Hmm...😛 Many ppl are voting for that! Let's see how accurate the guesswork is! 😉

@Shale...good to see you here! 🤗 Was missing you around! 😉 Haha I agree...Abhi was sensible and mature and look what Nikki and their pyaar did to him! 😆 But you can't deny he's acting really cute! 😳 Yes confession is definitely in line, but a lil later...😳 Thanks for the comment!

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Sarah

@DMG_LOVER203

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#413

Hey Kush ^^

WOW it was awesome i totally loved it!! it was wonderful and i can't wait 2 read the next part!! Thanks

*Jhapiz*

Love Sara

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#414

@Sara...glad you liked it! Good to see you here! 🤗

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jyothi

@jyothi_cool

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#415

kush whens the next update

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#416

I don't know Jyothi...let me finish writing it...

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jyothi

@jyothi_cool

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#417

hmmmmmmmm k a preview atleast i am not able to concentrate on my books thinkin of ur fic

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#418

Hey bhagwaan aisa mat karo!!! Padhai important hai!

I've not reached a place where I can post a precap...thodi der intezaar karo...I'll give e precap!

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#419

SNEAK PEEK TO PART 18

Nikki followed him, having finished the guava. As he made to go outside the tent, his foot hit the wire that connected the light.

The plug loosened, and the light went off. It was suddenly pitch dark.

Nikki's heartbeat sped up as the darkness overtook her senses. Her innate fear of it made her head reel as she heard different insects making noises outside.

It scared her out of her wits. Jumping to the first silhouette her eyes could make out in the dark, Nikki clung to him.

Stumbling back slightly when she grabbed his shirt and hid her face in his chest, he steadied himself in time before he fell backwards.

Edited by Khushboo_AN - 15 years ago

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cherry

@cherry_an

Stunner

Posted: 15 years ago

#420

Originally posted by: Khushboo_AN

SNEAK PEEK TO PART 18

Nikki followed him, having finished the guava. As he made to go outside the tent, his foot hit the wire that connected the light.

The plug loosened, and the light went off. It was suddenly pitch dark.

Nikki's heartbeat sped up as the darkness overtook her senses. Her innate fear of it made her head reel as she heard different insects making noises outside.

It scared her out of her wits. Jumping to the first silhouette her eyes could make out in the dark, Nikki clung to him.
Stumbling back slightly when she grabbed his shirt and hid her face in his chest, he steadied himself in time before he fell backwards.