||Just One Breath Away-AN FF~VM pg 122|| - Page 41

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Posted: 15 years ago
@Rati....jana...🤗 Achha gaana hai! 😆 Ahh and you finally got the point! 😃 You're right...it's important to stall the romance and the touching, so that both understand that they want it and the readers don't take it for granted and actually enjoy it in a classy way! 😳 Maarungi nahi jana tumne toh achhi baat keh di! 😃 Thanks for the comment! 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushboo_AN

@Rati....jana...🤗 Achha gaana hai! 😆 Ahh and you finally got the point! 😃 You're right...it's important to stall the romance and the touching, so that both understand that they want it and the readers don't take it for granted and actually enjoy it in a classy way! 😳 Maarungi nahi jana tumne toh achhi baat keh di! 😃 Thanks for the comment! 😳



Thanks jana, tumne mara nahi..🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG Khush!!! 😲

You totally rocked this part!!!🥳
Loved it to bits!!!! ⭐️
It's the content, not the length that matters, after all!!! 😉

It was soo sweet when Niki told Abhi that she didn't want to say bye to him!! 😳 It was great how you showed Abhi's and Niki's thoughts - Fab!!!

And when Niki was thinking that she feels even more depressed with Akash around!! 🤣

Ooooooo - you took me completely by surprise when Niki said:

"Now I just need you" 😳 😳 😳 😳 Really adore that part!!!⭐️

I wonder what Abhi is going to do - for his 'solid confirmation' and I loved the part where Niki was thinking:

As if the kisses aren't enough😉 😆 😆

I hope Abhi goes to Paligaon!!!!! 😍 Let's see what happens!!!
Awesome update sweety!!! ⭐️ Can't wait to read the next part!!!

Bohot Saare *Shwit Jhappizz* 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
So I finally got the chance to go through all ur updates! great job Khushbhoo. Its really well written. I enjoyed reading it very much! Update soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part yaar loved the phone call cont soon but a longer part yaar
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hello Khushiiii 🤗
Yaar love the update... especially Abhi's frustration at the start.. hehe how cute.. 😆
Ohh Nikki is missing arguing with him? 😆 Entertainment? LOL.. hai hai na woh pura entertainment package.. kabhi comedy, kabhi serious, kabhi romantic, kabhi sadu, kabhi aggressive.. 😆
16 missed calls? 😲 and he says it was a mistake!!🤣
I really liked their phone convi... very sweet... ok so Nikki did feel that Abhi felt something after all those kisses? 😆 And there was me thinking they just did it for fun.. time pass.. 😆😆😆 But seriously, finally one of them is taking the first step to the next level.. 👍🏼
OMG OMG i finally sense a confession coming up.... plz tell me its in the next part... Nikki as good as said it but i agree they guy should say those three words first, its common courtesy.. 😆
Ab jaldi jaldi update likhna.. 🤗
Edited by pagli91 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Khushboo,

This is such a cute, cute part......Really enjoyed and loved it.....
I loved how both of them were missing each other. You brought that out so well and I had such a laugh at Abhi not realising he called her 16 times and then trying to deny it 😆😆 Abhi na, he is so adorable when he tries to hide his "such obvious" feelings.....
Loved their phone convo...
Great read !
Looking forward to the next update
Love
Mich
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Posted: 15 years ago
Khushiii I havent even read the first part I have alot of catching up love... Im sure its great though :P thanks for the pmmm I will surely read all the parts sometime soon 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey lovely update, 16 missed calls.OMG!!!! Abhi must be having a great phone plan😆
Waiting for the next🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushboo_AN

Khushi 🤗🤗
WOw!! part is absolutely superb.
m happy!!!
Itz sad that nikki is very far 4m abhi bt doorise hi to pyar badhta hai na😉😳😃😃
I lov ths whole updt!! (as usual)😛😆
Bt still ma favrt partz r-
The scene in Abhi's office the previous day repeated itself in her mind.☺️☺️

poor niks!!

She hadn't even called him before leaving. She didn't have the heart to listen to his voice. It was hard enough that Akash was with her.

Thanx 4 writing abt flash back yaar.I lov those dayz of abhi nikkki !!,
her previous trip to Sanjeevani floating to the forefront of her mind.

It had been so much fun. Even arguing with Abhi was an entertainment of sort. They had ended up getting lost in the woods. Fighting over who'll sleep in the car, Abhi had decided that he would tie her up for his own sake.😆😆

After making sure she was bound and gagged, he had gently placed her on the back seat, making sure she was comfortable'well, as comfortable as one could be in that state. She had writhed and almost tried to kick him, but he had shouted at her and glared with those beautiful eyes. That had been enough to shut her up.😍😳

They had played terrible pranks on each other all through their stay. She remembered seeing him shirtless ☺️☺️she had tried to hide her blush in her laugh, but the truth was he had made her heart flutter.☺️☺️

The first time he had ever cracked a joke she never knew that he was even capable of doing so. She had genuinely thought that he was interested in her'the way he had cornered her, she had expected he would say something. But he had fooled her. She remembered the self-satisfactory smirk on his face which had afterwards turned into a cute smile which she adored😳😳.😃😃

***

. He unlocked the keypad, and pouted at the screen, hating the fact that he had no unread messages or unattended calls. It was highly frustrating.😃

She spent all her time with her friends and with Akash, and when they tried to talk they ended up kissing.😆😆😆 She could kiss him and hug him and run to him when scared but she couldn't call him to say bye.😳😉😆😆😆

So maybe she wouldn't even miss him. No thatz nt true.

Plz koi jaake modiko batao na tht she missd him so mch!!! ( othwise giv me his number I wil cal him)😉
ofcrse to tel him abt nikki yar!!😉😆😆

*****

Life without Abhi was really hard.😳

But now, it was far worse. Not even getting to see his face was like torture. She wanted to be near him, and having Akash around was making her even more depressed.😔

Riddhima had been understanding. She gave her the space she desperately needed. It was good to have such a nice friend with her.😃

The phone call she was waiting for never came. ( arey niks 16 bar aake gaya yar!!)😆😆

She remembered placing it there sometime after midnight, after waiting for Abhi's call and being disappointed. She had shoved it under the pillow angrily and let sleep overtake her. She had dreamt of him again.Oww Niki is so cute. You r in lov nikki darling!!!

She pulled out the phone and unlocked the keypad.

16 missed calls.
Abhi
.😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

***

"Abhi are you sure you're okay?" she asked tentatively.

"Yes!" he sounded angry now. "I'm fine. You didn't worry so much yesterday, in fact you didn't even bother to call!" he burst out. "So why're you so concerned now?"

She could picture him pouting into the phone.😆😆

"I do feel it Abhi and I'm really sorry", she said. "I wanted to call but" she drifted away, not knowing what to say.

"But?" he repeated. "But I guess you forgot, right? You're having so much fun with Akash in Paligaon that you forgot all about me", he scoffed.😡😡

"Because I didn't want to say bye", she admitted in a voice barely audi😳😳😳😳😃😃😃

***

Abhi smiled softly, her words repeating themselves in his mind. 😃

(Oww abhi smiled , hayye😍😍)

He cleared his throat in an attempt to break the silence. It was pretty uncomfortable, but he somehow liked it. Knowing that she cared enough to think so was heart-warming. yup abhi u r on the right track nw!

***

She was sure she heard him murmur something that sounded like "Sixteen? I didn't know I'd called her so many times"😆😆😆😆😆😆

"Admit it Abhi", she laughed. "You were missing me. And so much so that you called 16 times!"😳😃
"You've got proof", he replied softly. "How much more confirmation do you need?" OWW *HUG abhi*

The subtle change in the tone of his voice touched her. She knew that he missed her. It felt wonderful to hear him. 😳😃😃

"Tell me Nikki isn't it enough that you left while we were still on fighting terms that you're hiding something now?" his question was soft, gentle. Yet it hit her hard. She knew the truth in it.
"Now I just need you", she finished. (M happy m happy m happy)

***

Her direct answer was like music to the ears.😳😳

***

All that met her reply was silence from his end. She could only hear him breathe. It was a calming sound made her feel close to him.😳

She said a small bye and waited for his reply before cutting the call. But he never said anything. Yet his silence spoke volumes to her.😃😃
( Nw aftr al this, I thnk Abhi is gona cum 2 paligaon)😉😃
(Tab aayega mazaa) in gabbar style!!😆😆😆
I lov it! I lov it!!
Nw cant wait 4 next update!!!
plz plz plz khushi update sooon!!
M restless nw!!
Lov ya!! TC!!
jhappizz🤗🤗

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