'Sum-I' Shots(on Rajeev)FairyTale Princess (pg-15) - Page 8

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

this was beautiful sumi
seriously, i dont have words
great one
Sur

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Aww Sumi...hope you r feeling alright now...!!!! This was extremely heart touching...!!!!

Originally posted by: Puri_2711

rula diya na 😭......something unexpected from ur Fics 😳 😳 😳...Really?? Ohh....this means u didnt cry during 'I Love...."....makes me feel better...😆... made Vyaan dead 😭............. very heat touching OS......... thank god this was not a long full fledged fic varna IF mein flood aa jata 😆...........Dont worry....only one moment can make me do this to Rajeev'a character....agar ek full fledged fic likhne jau...to end tak ate ate....main surely kahani change kar dungi...😆😆...and dont worry....no more sadness from my side....😉

ok coming to both OS...
read both of them ......... in one go........😛 😛😛......... do i need to say i loved the first 1 more 😍.....Nope...I do knw dat well..😆.😉.... all over again.............. Viraan 😍............ usse do baar kya, kitni baar bhi pyaar ho sakta hai 😳 😳 😳..........afterall he is RK 😳 😳....... it was very sweet & simple love story 👏........Oh yes...we can fall in love wid him....uncountable times...😆....and am glad u found it sweet and simple...thank you!!


second OS,--- it was really emotional 1 😭..... so can't say much about it i'm Helpless 😛 😛 😛........but it was a good 1....... 👏👏 👏 Ohh....I knw...ye padhne ke baad kuch kehne ka modd nahi rehta....yet am glad u liked it...

would wait more OS from u.......... maja aata .......😛😛...... ek hi baar mein start to finish 😃 Hehe....mujhe bhi one-shots achhe lagte hai....😆...and will surely write more....inshallah!!

so wud waiting 4 next 😛 😛 😛.................. continue whenever possible..... 😃 😃😃 I'll be trying my best dear....thanks for commenting Puri!!


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Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Beautiful story

Very emotional and heart felt but sad.

Keep posting more

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

hey...Achhi bachhi...tum baht buri ho...!!! Oops...😳maine toh jab janm li thi tab bhi itni nahi royi thi...jitna aaj tumne mujhe rulaya...!!! Ohho....itna sad feel karne ki kya zarurat thi?? Vyan ko bhut bana diya...!!! par yeh bhut toh baht pyara hai yaar... 😛 Hehe....we love this BHOOTH as well...hai na? 😳😳 Hadh hai yaar....jab baat Raj ki ho...to insaan/bhooth....kuch fark hi nahi padhta....😆😆

Vyan ko maar diya tumne...??? Police police...Sumi ko pakdo...!!! tumhara toh bail dene bhi koi nahi aayega...pakki baat hai...!!! par fiqar not...main tumhe tiffin dene aayungi...!!! kya karun...maine hi toh police ko bulaya hai na...Vyan ki wajah se...!!! ab dosti ka farz nibhane aayungi tumhe tiffin dete hue...😆 Ohh....Vyan ke prati AC ka farz nibhaogi....mujhe police me de kar...and mere sang frndship ka fraz nibhaogi....mujhe tiffin de kar??? 😲

baht hi touchyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy tha...!!! aur vaise bhi mujhe rona bilkul bhi achha nahi lagta...meri saansh phul jati hai...aur tum ne mujhe aaj baht rula diya...😭 Ohhh gosh....ab to tai hai....maine zindagi me ghalti se bhi sad fic post kar diya...to WARNING de dungi....😕😕...cho chollie yaar!! 😕😕

okay...ab baht ho chuki galiyan...point par aati hun...!!! Hmm...😳

jaisa ki maine hamesha kaha hai ki ek writer k upar depend karta hai ki voh apni writing se apne readers ko hassa sake ya phir rula sake...!!! aur yeh baat tum apne har ek fic me behtar se behtar sabit karti ho...👏

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 Arre wah....meri taarif!!! Thanqqq thanqqqq maine expect nahi kiya tha...iss shot k liye mujhe taarif milegi...😳😆

main bhi kafi helpless mehsush karr rahi hun...!!! baht achha os hai......beautiful...n touchy!!! main kabhi bhi is tarah ki ending par khud ko sambhal nahi pati...aur ro deti hun😭 Ohh...main bahut mushkil se padhti hu aise endings....but sach poochho to likhte waqt zyada bura nahi lagta...may be becoz u knw it too well to feel sad....but anyways....iska matlab ye bilkul nahi hai mujhe achha lagta hai....when I had read ur first shot in LAMHEIN.....I was sooo tensed abt the outcome....so I knw....it feels really sad!!

Ye saza nahi hai Anchal'.ye to hamara pyar hai'.jisse tum nibha rahi ho'.tum ho isiliye to main aaj bhi hu'.tumhara intezaar karte hue'. kyunki tumhe ana to mere paas hi hai !!

vyan apna idea thoda change kar sakta hai kya...??? matlab main aane k liye taiyar hun...agar voh chahe toh...😆 Anyday....waise bhi abhi to wo free hai...bore ho raha hoga...Anchal is not there yet....😆...and who knws tujhe dekhke apna iraada change kar de...😉😆😉😆😆😆

Originally posted by: Kool_Naina

Hey Sumi

beautiful update
very emotional n sad dear
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Luv
Naina