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Purnima

@-purnima-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#61

rula diya na 😭......something unexpected from ur Fics 😳 😳 😳...... made Vyaan dead 😭............. very heat touching OS......... thank god this was not a long full fledged fic varna IF mein flood aa jata 😆...........

ok coming to both OS...

read both of them ......... in one go........😛 😛😛......... do i need to say i loved the first 1 more 😍.......... all over again.............. Viraan 😍............ usse do baar kya, kitni baar bhi pyaar ho sakta hai 😳 😳 😳..........afterall he is RK 😳 😳....... it was very sweet & simple love story 👏........

second OS,--- it was really emotional 1 😭..... so can't say much about it i'm Helpless 😛 😛 😛........but it was a good 1....... 👏👏 👏

would wait more OS from u.......... maja aata .......😛😛...... ek hi baar mein start to finish 😃

so wud waiting 4 next 😛 😛 😛.................. continue whenever possible..... 😃 😃😃

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Edited by Puri_2711 - 14 years ago

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#62

Beautiful story

Very emotional and heart felt but sad.

Keep posting more

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#63

hey...Achhi bachhi...tum baht buri ho...!!! maine toh jab janm li thi tab bhi itni nahi royi thi...jitna aaj tumne mujhe rulaya...!!! Vyan ko bhut bana diya...!!! par yeh bhut toh baht pyara hai yaar... 😛

Vyan ko maar diya tumne...??? Police police...Sumi ko pakdo...!!! tumhara toh bail dene bhi koi nahi aayega...pakki baat hai...!!! par fiqar not...main tumhe tiffin dene aayungi...!!! kya karun...maine hi toh police ko bulaya hai na...Vyan ki wajah se...!!! ab dosti ka farz nibhane aayungi tumhe tiffin dete hue...😆

baht hi touchyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy tha...!!! aur vaise bhi mujhe rona bilkul bhi achha nahi lagta...meri saansh phul jati hai...aur tum ne mujhe aaj baht rula diya...😭

okay...ab baht ho chuki galiyan...point par aati hun...!!!

jaisa ki maine hamesha kaha hai ki ek writer k upar depend karta hai ki voh apni writing se apne readers ko hassa sake ya phir rula sake...!!! aur yeh baat tum apne har ek fic me behtar se behtar sabit karti ho...👏

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

main bhi kafi helpless mehsush karr rahi hun...!!! baht achha os hai......beautiful...n touchy!!! main kabhi bhi is tarah ki ending par khud ko sambhal nahi pati...aur ro deti hun😭

Ye saza nahi hai Anchal'.ye to hamara pyar hai'.jisse tum nibha rahi ho'.tum ho isiliye to main aaj bhi hu'.tumhara intezaar karte hue'. kyunki tumhe ana to mere paas hi hai !!

vyan apna idea thoda change kar sakta hai kya...??? matlab main aane k liye taiyar hun...agar voh chahe toh...😆

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Naina

@Kool_Naina

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#64

Hey Sumi

beautiful update
very emotional n sad dear
😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺

Luv
Naina

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 14 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: pinky901
beautiful!!!!

Thanks for reading and liking it Pinky....am glad to knw u found it beautiful!! 😛

Originally posted by: chinmayi
hey tht was simply an beautiful OS...ending thoda sad tha but still, it had a very beautiful msg wid it.Ohh...yeah this ending is very upseting....I knw.....but am glad u liked the mssg.😛 I simply luv the names u giv 2 Rajeev's character, they're sumthg diff & exclusive.Aweee....I am glad u liked VYAN name as well....donno why my sis found it really bad...😕😆 Keep up the gr8 gud wrk...😊👏👍🏼 For sure....and yeah....no more sad sad ones....😉😆...thanks for commenting Chinmayi!! 😃

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: togepe30

Haila...

Bhoot ki story thi ye toh...Gosh Vandu....only u can make me laugh wid ur comment....even in this sad story!! 😆😆

Lol !! I dunno feeling ajeeb after reading it...LOL !! Pehli baar aisa kuch padha hai...Khud dukhi thi toh sabko dukhi karne chali?? Ye acha hai !! :P:P Hehe....its kinda true that....I was upset...isiliye upseting ek shot post kiya.....😆....and yeah....likhne ke baad main khud ajeeb feel kar rahi thi....I read it again and again....😆...tumhe to ajeeb feel karna hi tha...😆😆😆...thanks for commenting!! 😉

Luv,

Vandu

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 14 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: monikaseth
awesome , mind blowing , very nice , perfect , so sweet & nice .....Thank You Dear....

Hey Monika....thanks for using so many adjectives dear....Am glad u liked it....and of course...the pleasure was all mine!! 😛😛 Thanks for commenting!! 😃

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: neha10.for.u
hi sumaiya...Hey Neha...😃

the only thing i can say abt ur os is that it was beautiful....really emotional.....i am sure it touched the heart of every reader......atleast it did touched mine......Ohh....its gud to knw this cud touch ur heart....and am soo glad to knw dat u found it beautiful dear!! 😛

kitna simply tumne itna beautiful msg de diya sabko....to express our love for our loved ones....as time waits for none....Well....I blv its necessary to SAY IT....😳....at least we shud try everytym we can....so that we dont regret anything later on....😊

yes..the ending does makes the heart heavy....but was probably essential to bring abt the msg...True....or else...the mssg wud hav been surpassed for sure...😉

In all it was a superb os....thanks for sharing it with us.... Pleasure is all mine dear....thanks for reading it....and sharing ur valuable opinion wid me....😛

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: spvd
hey dear nice shot but very depressing......................i dont like sad endings...................i hate them.......................but the story was nice and of course twas touchy..........................

Hey Deepa....i knw the shot was interesting....and to tell the truth....even I hate sad endings...and I never ever go thru them again...😆....UNLESS I'm too upset oevr sum silly matter 😆....but thanks for reading it and leaving the comment dear....I'll make sure I never get that upset to write such a thing again...😆...😆

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez
AMAZINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG !!!!
I just loved it Sumi !!!

just too too good!!!

keep posting more !

Phew....thanks Mana....tumne mujhe nahi daanta....😆...and am glad u found it nice.....thanks for liking it...and yeah....I'll surely post more...but happy ones...😉😉...Thnx for commenting Mana. 😛

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