'Sum-I' Shots(on Rajeev)FairyTale Princess (pg-15)

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lallulal2010

@lallulal2010

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#91

nice one shot sumi di. hoping to see an updxate in one of ur fics soon. Don't kill me for being this desperate for updates.

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lallulal2010

@lallulal2010

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#92

sumi di, i just went through helpless, and it did make me feel helpless...........vyan's pain, aanchal's pain and........................my own pain.

I had an acquaintance with whom I used to to fight at every occasion, but whose side I took in each situation,.......we were just like sisters.......I could never tell her that she was indeed special to me, the best friend I ever had. i just could not. And today we don't have any contact, life has moved on and I'm still waiting to have a glimpse of her, so that I can atleast tell her that I never took her as an enemy, It was always friendship.

She once told me, accha hua tum mere taraf aa gayi...........................I could never tell her that I was always on her side, it's just that she never noticed.

I really miss her. Hope wherever she is, she is happy.

Vidushi.

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#93

Hi Sumaiya

Another terrific story from u...👏👏 I really loved it😃

Rakshit and Kangana were so very different from each other but they became very gud friends..both were aware of each other in special ways but none tried to break the barrier..They thought its better this way..they didn't wanted to risk their friendship..

Even when they started having difference in their opinion they searched for different partners in order to avoid any problems in their friendship..

In the end they thought they r not meant for each other and went to their different paths..but destiny had something else stored for them..😃

They again met accidently when their parents decided that they'll b a gud match for each other..they both were so shocked to meet once again but then they again didn't let their feelings come out..Both were so very confused abt each other..They wanted to b married to each other but were scared of getting rejected ..😆😆😆

Thank God!! finally they got their senses back on time and they decided to confront each other..but at wat time!!!!!!!!😆😆😆

so it was Rakshit who spoke abt his feelings first😃 and then it was easy for Kangana to express her love for him..😊

Rakshit and Kangana were miles apart then too they were destined to meet and get married..😊

This song is perfect for them...

Kitne door door ho un dono ke raaste mil jaate hain jo bane ek dooje ke vaaste..😃

Do write some more OS soon

Bye

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C3_IF

@C3_IF

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#94

hieee sweety, ur simply a darling sWeetHrt....thnkuu sooo much for writing ths, & rahi baat bore karne ki & lamba likhne ki so plzzz do continue wid ur thse antics as i simply luv 2 get bored by u😉...Again kuddos 2 u 4 choosing an awsum name for RK(again frm R & a different 1)😊.....nw cuming 2 d OS, i seriously think u shud keep writing more OS, & itna kya iska double length ka OS bhi mujhe chalega🤗.....I simply luved d 2 characters, story waise common tha but d way u potrayed it was naaaiiicccceeee & special. I'v always luved d simplicity of ur fics & same goes 4 ths 1....& sach kahu to 2day mood was super off cuz of clg & then wen came bak & saw ur PM, so nw aftr reading d fic i'm all gudie & happy 1ce again....thnx 2 u 😊....so keep up d awesum , gr8 wrk going on...👍🏼👏🤗😊⭐️

Edited by chinmayi - 14 years ago

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tina_1234

@tina_1234

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#95

it was beautiful......truely loved it :) ;)

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#96

hey dear twas cute and beautiful.......................like it might happen in real life too to someone.............................nice one....................

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#97

Great story

Rakshit and Kangana dono hi ek dusrese bahut alga hai phir bhi dost ban jate hai. They treasure their friendship but soon realise that their thoughts are very different. and so they fall apart.

But fate had other plans for their parents want both of them to get married. At first both of them are hesitant to accept this relationship but later both of them realise that they love each other.

Enjoyed reading their story

thanks

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#98

beautiful...

Rakshit...kya complicated naam hai yaar...bilkul raj ki tarah...!!! ab raj bhi yeh admit kar chuka hai na...

khair point par aate hain...kangana aur rakshit dono hi ek dushre se alag hain phir bhi ek dushre ke achhe dost hain...!!! jab ki dil me toh kuch aur hi laga mujhe...!!! hamesha pyar jab samjh na aaye na toh use dosti ka naam de dete hain...!!! yehi hota hai...par is se tym bhi toh milta hai khud ke zindagi me us inshan ke sahi jagah ko dhundhne ki...

yeh kya...dono khud ke liye lyf partner dundh rahe the...!!! par kyoun...samne andhera tha kya...jo kangna ko raj oops...rakshit dikhayi nahi de raha tha...

par ek waqt aaya jab dono ek dushre se alag hi ho gaye...!!! kabhi kabhi duriyan us inshan ko aur bhi kareeb le aata hai...jo anjane me humare liye khaash ban jata hai...

lekin kahte hain na..jis ke naseeb me jo likha hota hai vohi milta hai toh phir phir se mil gaye...Rakshit n kangana...!!! aur is baar toh dono parents shadi ka card print karne ke firaq me the...

kitna confused rahte the dono yaar...!!! par chalo koi na...kam se kam dono ke feelings bahar toh aaye...par kaise...aur voh bhi kis waqt...

chalo rakhsit ne kadam aage badhaya...aur apni dil ki baat bata di...!!! dekh lo...raj kitna achha hai...kangana ke confession ke liye achha sa rashta nikal diya...pahle khud kah kar...

song bilkul perfect tha...one of my fav...!!! par film sayad 'Dil toh pagal hai' ki hai na...!!! is movie ke story ne mere dimag me ghushne se mana kar diya tha...isiliye sare songs toh mujhe achhe lage the...par aage hum kuch nahi kahenge...

Beautiful shot...sumi
...pata hai tumhe khashiyat is fic me yeh thi ke tum ne sab ke emotions kafi hadh tak natural likha hai...matlab jaise aam zindagi me hota hai...!!! yeh OS kafi apna sa laga...

batana bhul gayi...raj ki jo pic pahle tum ne post ki hai na...kafi cute lag raha hai us pic me...!!! isiliye is fic ko padhne me double maza aaya hai...!!! matlab..."tera chehra kitna suhana lagta hai....tere aage chaand purana lagta hai...tera chehra kitna suhana lagta hai..." ya phir..."tera chehra hai aaine jaisa...kyoun na dekhun main dekhne jaisa...tera chehra hai aaine jaisa..."

Edited by Sweet-Lioness - 14 years ago

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The Tilde Girl

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Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#99

hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii sweetuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu summuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu....................

i love rajeeeeeeeeeeeeeeevvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv....................... ☺️

one shot hmmm 🤣 bahot maza aya padhke.. exam k baad yeh chahiye hi tha.. 🤗 abb jakar acha feel ho raha hai sach main.. 😛 waise rakshit rudhir bann gaya tha bich main.. shayad tune baad me naam change kiya aur ek jagah saboot mitana bhul gayi.. 😈 🤣

pata h rakshit ko padhke ridit yaad aa gaya.. 😛 😆

yeh jo bhi tha bahot acha tha 😆😆 aise hi kuch bhi post karti raha kar.. 😃😆

waiting for next 'aise hi kuch bhi' 😆😆 i loveeeeeeeeeeeee rajeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeevvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ 😆😆

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Oliveya Aniston

@Illumination

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#100

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMGGGGGG! ........sumaiya .....................😛😛.....

OMG!...............😛......amazing ..story line....really nice concept ...............OMG !how can do this sumaiya ...😆.ur are one of the best story writer ....⭐️......outstanding .......simply .....great..👍🏼.i have no words...for describe .......ur amazing ...work...beautiful story👏👏

Very touch..difff .......woooooOOMG i loved......it i really enjoy...after read the whole story .. shots(for rajeev)meant to be ..ff ..first part is...............very touch very touch ..and emotional and painful..it is very ...............beautiful story Very emotional and heart felt but sad...........................🥱

luv..oliveya

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