Tere Naina#2#(RN)Last Part Wid EPI pg 119(4/6)

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Nisha

@nisha1984

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#31

Congratulations on your 2nd thread of "Tere Naina" 👏

Another awesome part........

Raj ne vikram ki haalat bigad di aur Vishal ne bhi dhamki de di..........

Naina and Raj convo was nice.......

Finally Naina and Raj will be together chalo Raj ko kuch akal to aayee...... Ab vikram ki khair nahi wo to gaya lekin ye Nandini kahan hai? Pichle kuch episode se dikhayee hi nahi di.......

keep up the good work.......

Please PM me when you post the next part.........

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-serenity-

@-serenity-

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#32

Congratulations Priya for ur new thread'.!!!!!

keep rocking dear'!!!👏👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

ur fanfic is just too mind blowing,i really appreciate ur creativity which u have depicted through ur fanfic.hope to read more wonderful parts

Edited by princessyogitha - 15 years ago

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-serenity-

@-serenity-

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#33

Hey Priya wow!!!! kya baat hain yaar do do updates in this month aur wo bhi in a week gap utna hi nahin this time mujhe dhamkiyan dena ka mauka bhi nahi diya ....i am so happy 😃 😃

Now coming to the update,ab main kya kahun yaar is ud ke bare main..... mindblowing 👏 👏 👏 👏.fatastic 👏 👏 👏 👏awesome 👏 👏 👏 👏superb 👏 👏 👏 fabulous 👏 👏 👏 amazing 👏 👏 👏 wonderful n beautiful part dear 👏 👏 👏aur bhi kuch kehna chahthi hun but kya kare i am poor in vocab

Is update main saare scenes mujhe bahut pasand aaye ' rajs dhamekadhar entry us ka gussa n raj ka ek haath main gun n dusre haath vikram ki neck par...n his powerful dialogues aur phir raj n naina ka wo cute n lovely scene'all r well written

Vikram ki kya halat ki raj ne ....maine bahut enjoy kiya us scene ko'. not to forget raj ka dialogues wo kutta wala...i laughed so much when I was reading that one'......whistle karneka bahut mann kiya ...but kya karun i dont know how to whistle......i tried so many times but i always fail...the best thing about your writting skills is in serious situations also tum aisa kuch likthi ho ke we cant stop laughing

Raj ne itna badha warning diya vikram ko n still that idiot vikram had the nerve to say raj.... naina ko bhuljayo n the bullet is actually for raj.....accha kiya raj ne bhi mast jawab diya wo bhi punch maarke n the dialogue kanyakumari n rajkumari'.oh awesome yaar hats off to your writing skills

vishal bhi vikram ko badiya warning di... vishal ne tikhi kaha vikram ko is umar main ramayan paath karna chahiye

raj n nainas scene is so nice n so cute 'specially when raj ki do boondh aanson naina ki ankhon ki andar girna....n after that naina ki aankhon se aanso bahe rahe the..jo aanso naina aur rajveer donon ki he.... kya scene tha yaar ...tu itna acche se kaise likthi ho yaar

why raj is not saying what naina n we all want to hear from him'lagtha hain accha sa muhurat ka intezaar hain . flash back main ye aslam kaha chalagaya n wo chudail kaunsa bad news dene chali aayi priya thank u so much dear for the lovely part par kya tujhe nahin laghta ki ye update ki length thoda short hain compared to your previous ones....gussa mat ho yaar ...agar tujhe nahin lagtha to tikh hain this time u updated fast mujhe bahut accha laga ...love u for this 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

ab jaldi se ek accha sa muhurat nikalo raj ke liye to tell naina wo teen magical words

Lrl joke is too funny 😆 😆 😆 waiting for the next part eagerly

Edited by princessyogitha - 15 years ago

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ChhalkiSyaahi

@ChhalkiSyaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#34

Hi Priya!!!

Superb update! Just fabulous. 👏 👏 👏And if your update has made Yasmin break Yasmin her clicking the like button spree, then it is in itself the greatest comment you can get.😆 😆 😆

Anyways coming to the update, I completly agree with Dhara and Yasmin, they have said it all. Rajveer sure is the show stealer.👏 👏 👏 Poor guy, he was so angry. And I had been thinking about this that the bullet was meant for Raj and Naina came in between. Vishal too had some very good dialogues to his credit. Bbut for me the best moment was the RN scene in the hospital. It was such a romantic one. Naina apna badla le rahi thi Raj se ye kehkar ki usse jana hai par Raj ne usse bahut pyar se mana liya. Wish you had made it longer. We are still waiting for Raj's confession and rather waiting eagerly for it.

I'm sure something has happened to Aslam and it is our villian who is behind it. I mean villians hote hi isliye hain.😡 Anyways, I expect you to continue soon.

The LRL was joke was very nice. Really hilarious!😆 😆 😆. But I guess you had a joke regarding Huda's visit to Kolkata. The "AMI JAANI NA" wala joke. That was really too much.😆 😆 😆 . I could understand his confusion, poor fellow.😆 😆 😆.

Anyways, contiinue soon.And please forgive me if there are any spelling mistakes in this part, I'm sure there are some mistakes. I'm sitting in a net cafe and the stupid keyboard doesn't seem to be working properly.😡 😡 😡.

Waiting for another rocking update.

Love
Guglu

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sania_58

@sania_58

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#35

wow

awsome update

mindblowing

too good

superb

u rocked

very well written

great going

plz continue soon

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#36

Helo 😃😃😃....waise main na har comment pe sabse pehle Raj ka naam leti hu.....aur kyunki maine abhi abhi le liya hai....to I want to say...u r awesum Priya!!!!!!!

Sabse pehle bata du....maine koi rushing to the hospital nahi expect kiya tha....😆😆...I knw u too well to expect that....waise bhi common sense hai yaar....goli lagi hai to hospital hi le jayenge....😆😆😆....isme itni bhagam bhaag dikhane wali koi baat thodi hai....lolz!!

And now Rajveer ki wo dhaasu entry....wah wah wah 👏

Aur wo confrontation....I cud visualise it all......aur kya lag raha tha wo....main kya kahu...haiii....u make me fal for him all over again!!!😳

And even Vishal was awesum in his dhamki...😆😆😆....Ramayan-Mahabharat wali baat....jhakas tha bilkul!!!

Aur phir uss idiot ki himmat kaise hui Raj pe goli chalane ki??? Khud ko raja kehta hai???😆😆😆...Samne dekha nahi kaun khara tha...RAJVEER!!!😳😳😳 Aur wo soch bhi kaise sakta hai apni Rajkumari Kanyakumari Naina apne Raj k alawa kisi aur ka ho sakti hai....ab ye kaisa Raja hai yaar....jiske paas chiti k jitna bhi dimag nahi hai??? Ye to hum se bhi aage hai Priya....I mean in the sense of Having No Dimag!!!😆

And now hospital scene btwn Raj-Naina......😳😳....wo aansoon wala scene....when u said....both Raj n Naina's tears....I was like wow!!! It was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo beautiful dear!!!

Ab bahut hui taarifein....ye flashbak kyun end kiya???? Mujhe janna tha wo Aslma Raj ko pareshan karke kaha gaya??? Aur Raj ne kya kiya??? Kitne sawal hai yaar!!!

Khair jaldi se continue karo.....mujhe aage padhna hai...😛😛...aur sirf mujhe hi nahi sabki padhna hai....we all r very eager...isiliye ek achhi bacchi ki tarah tum bhi likhna shuru karo....😃😃

Now LRL Joke:

Surijee ko laga unka koi photo le raha hai...😆😆😆...unhone to kabhi bataya nahi unhe photo khichwane ki itni tamanna thi...😆😆😆

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#37

Superb part,
Raj vo bhi gusse me, hieeeee kitna cute lagta hai na vo aise.
Vikram ki halat kharab ho gayi ho gi, Raj ko apne yahan dekh kar. Us ne umeed nahi ki hogi ki jis baat pe vo abhi kisi ko thappad laga raha tha us par proper action lene k Raj vahan aa jaayega.
Raj ne bhi kya kamaal kiya us ne Vikram ko acche se samjhaya ki agar Naina ko kuch bhi ho gaya to kya haal honewaala hai us ka, Vikram bhi bahut mushkil se bacha hai Raj k gusse se.
Accha hua samay rehte Vishal ne Raj ko samhaala varna bachta nahi vo. Sab se jyada hassi mujhe Vikram k vo Princess waali baat pe aayi , ki Naina ki shaadi ek Raja se hi hogi.
Par Raj ne bhi us ko kya solid answer diya na ki Naina bus us ki hai aur kisi ki nahi hai.
Filhaal Naina ko jyada jaroorat thi na Raj ki. Par yahan bhi Vikram nahi maana aur Raj k jaate-2 sach us ne bol hi diya na Raj ko. Aur ek baar fir Raj ka gussa bhadak gaya us par.
Thank god Naina ab Safe hai varna Vikram aur baaki k log to unsafe ho jaate. Par ek baat acchi hue, isi bahane Naina ko pata chal gaya ki Raj bhi bahut pyaar karta hai us se.
Abhi bhi Raj ko shaitaani soojh rahi hai aur us ne, abhi bhi nahi kaha Naina se i love u aur fir se Naina intezaar kar rahi hai. Adi n Vishal bhi milne aaye to Naina ne sach bata diya ki goli ka nishana Raj tha.
Par ye Aslam k saath kya hua tha?
Ab update kar de aur bhi fics ko like Ehsaas n ZTMK.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago

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vvdn

@vvdn

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#38

as always Gr888888888 update !!!

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#39

Superb, Brilliant, Fantastic. 👏👏👏

Raj ki entry hila dene wali thi. Vikram ki toh ab khair nahi😡. Raj ke dialogues were awesome.

It was good that Vishal came there on time...nahi toh raj saach mein Vikram ko maar deta. And Vikrams dialogues were too good.

It is scenes and dialogues like this that show the brilliance in your writing.👏

The scene in the hospital was great. Raj and naina are so perfect for each other...even at times like this they can find something to laugh about😉. Naina is right...it is now Raj's turn to say i love you.

Aditi is shocked to hear that this attack was made on Raj. 😲

In thie flashback it seems that Vikram had only kidnapped Aslam....😲

Please continue soon.....waiting for some more RN scenes.