Tere Naina#2#(RN)Last Part Wid EPI pg 119(4/6) - Page 5

gr8 updt....👏

firstly congo on ur new thread for dis fic.....👏👏👏

raj was really angry and dat part was amazingly written loved d aggression shown der and dialogues der wer awesome...👏👏

and den hospital part.....rn scene was very emotional and romantic as well...but beautiful......😳👏

flashback was awesome as well......👏👏

gr8 part indeed👏
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aache u ha raj kiss on n 's face wow plz up soon

Hey guys.... Our Priya is Out of station due to some personal reasons...

baaaaaaaaaapreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Raj ka gussssssssaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa...............
agar main Viram hothi tho main tho Raj ke aane se pehlehi bhaag jathi.par uss akalke andhe ko kaun samjhaaye?pad gaya na Raj ka hath uspe.agar insaan hotha tho kamse kam ab tho hosh main aajatha.par ye tho insaan kam aur haivaan jyaada hai na.abbhi nahi sudhra.well iska tho ab 'Bhagwaan hi maalikh hai'😆

Vishal ke dialouges bohuth acche the isbaar.kaafi emotions the unmein.it's nice to see his this 'avtar'.

RN scenes were very good.yaar tum kehthi ho ki tumhe romantic scenes likhna nahi aata.par tune tho hospital main bhi romance shuru karvadi yaar😆but no complaints,😳it's really cute,vo kaan pakad ke sorry kehna,Naina ka zidd(pata nahi yaar ye Naina hameshase itni ziddi kyun hai)Raj ka manana(waise manane ka tareeka accha tha).par ye 'thappad' ka business kab shuru kiya Raj ne?dene main bhi 'thappad' aur lene main bhi 'thappad'😆 😆kaafi interesting aur khatarnaak business hai,nahi?

aur yaar yeh flashback jaldi khatam karo na,kabhi kabhi mujhe samajh nahi aata ki pehle waala FB kaha roka tha tune aur ab ye kaha se shuru ho gaya.

waise i think now i can definetly expect more n more RN scenes from the comingUDs.😉 so,waiting to see them........i mean read them...............continue soon.

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priya don't stop ur fic. pls pls. jisne bhi kaha o sab tumhara writing se jalte hain, aur kuch nehi,

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

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SORRY guys...bt i cant...😭

main aage apne koi bhi fics ko cont nahi kar payungi...😭

maine baht koshish ki...par mujhe laga ki mera yahi faishla hi sahi hai...😊

according to some ppl...mere sare fics...ek damm bekaar...ghatia...aur bakwaas hain....just WASTE OF TIMES...

aur sirf meri frndship ki wajah se hi sare readers comments karte hain...varna is me sirf baseless comedy k alawa aur kuch nahi hai...

may b sayad aap sab feel kar paye ki...yeh kisi bhi writer k liye...baht hi insulting hai...

may b aap sab ko lage ki main over-react kar rahi hun...par...main baht upset hun...!!! aur pichle kuch dino se apne studies par bhi concentraite nahi kar pa rahi hun...maine baht koshish ki in sab ko bhul kar phir se hassun aur hassayun...par nahi kar payi...n i think ki itz better for all of us...ki main is se quit kar lun...😊

is ka matlab yeh nahi hai ki main IF chod kar chali jayungi...!!! main apne frnds k fics me reg comments karti rahungi...PROMISE...!!! aur vaise bhi yeh achha hi hai...is se main aap sab k fics par jaldi jaldi comments kar payungi... ryt😊

always love u

n care for u

PRIYA😊

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

hmmmm...

Hogaya???? Kehdiya jo kehna tha????

Tune jo kehna tha kehdiya, Maine( or rather hum sab ne ) sun liya !! Baat khatam!

Koi ek aakar agar kuch bhi kehta hai aur tum maan leti ho???

Itna hi pata hai kya tujhe hum sab ke baaremein??? ki we comment ONLY coz we r frnds???? ofcourse WE ARE FRIENDS....but U ARE A BRILLIANT WRITER, A GEM and YOUR FICS ARE OUR FAVOURITES !!! We have said you time and again in our comments....tujhe kya lagta hai??? har baar ki humlogoki comment jhooth mooth nautanki hoti hai???

Mujhe na tujhe request karni hai aur na tere pair pakadne hai...

MAIN BASS ORDER KAR RAHI HOON !!! SAMJHI?????

Chup chap uss cheez ko dimaag se nikaal aur apne studies pe concentrate karne ke saath saath fics continue karo!

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