Tere Naina#2#(RN)Last Part Wid EPI pg 119(4/6)

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

Hi Priya

How r u?

Update was terrific,mindblowing,fantastic etc etc...👏👏👏

Sach mein tum itna accha likhti ho ki bas muaah👍🏼🤗

Naina ko sach mein goli lagi thi.But woh goli uske liye nahin raj ke liye thi.😕😕

Rajveer ne to Vikram ki jam kar dhunai kar di..Aise aise dialogues bole ki mera hans hans ke bura haal ho raha tha😆😆😆

These were some funny moments

"Rajveer:- "mujhe tujhe maarne k liye kisi kutte ki izazat lene ki jarurat nahi hai...!!!"

Dog to bol nahin sakta but Vikram ko marne ki permission koi bhi de sakta hai😆😆..Rajveer ke andar us waqt dhrmendra ki aatma aa gayi thi

"agar Naina ko kuch bhi hua toh tere hi talwar ki pyaas teri hi khun se bujhayunga...!!!"

talwar khoon bhi piti hai🤣🤣

"Rajveer ne us ki collor pakdi aur kah:- "Naina chahe rajkumari ho ya kanyakumari...mujhe is baat se koi faraq nahi padta...kyoun ki duniya jaanti hai aur tu bhi apne dimag me bitha le ki Naina sirf aur sirf meri hai...!!! aur dubara use kharoch bhi aayi toh...

.👏 😆😆😆agar yeh scene hall mein aata to log bahut siti maarte..

"Rajveer ne Vikram ko chod kar aage diwar ki taraf gaya...jahan Vikram ki ek badi si tashveer lagi hui thi...!!!Rajveer ne use utha kar zameen par phenka...glasses tut kar bikhar gaye...Rajveer ne un glasses k ander me se Vikram ki tashveer khinch kar nikali...aur apne lighter se us me aag laga diya...

Rajveer:- "tere zinda rahte teri tashveer ko aag laga raha hun...aur agar Naina ko kuch bhi hua toh tere body ka koi bhi part nahi milega...tere gharwalon ko.... jinhe voh aag laga sakenge...!!!"

👏👏👏 mast hai boss..hero se aise hi umeed hoti hai..Kya scene tha👍🏼

Phir Vishal ne bhi kuch mast dialogues maare

"1...Rajveer...2...Naina....3...Aditi...4....Gayatri devi...in logon ko agar ek bhi kharoch aayi...aur mujhe laga ki is me tera hath hai..toh ter rajagiri ki aisi ki taisi...teri dono ankhen fode dunga...taki zindagi bhar 'sholey' k imaam chacha ki tarah 'kya hai...kyoun hai...' karta rahega...!!! aayi baat samajh me.."

Sach mein Vikram vaisa lagega ki nahin???coz woh sholey wale chacha to kaafi patle the but Vikram ki sehat to hathi jaisi hai😆😆😆

"Vishal:- "yeh bass trailor tha...puri film kabhi furshat me dikhayunga...!!! abe is umar me Ramayan paath kar...agar Naina ka khayal karega...toh majburan humain Mahabharat dikhaana padega...!!!"

Vikram iss umar mein bhi swamyvar karna chahta hai😆😆Iss umar mein usko kuch Bhagwaanji ka dhyaan karna chahiye coz usne itne paap kiye hain ji narak mein uski jagah reserved hai..

Finally Naina was fine...

Raj was so worried over her..Der se hi sahi but akal to aayi..😆😉

Yeh dono to hospital mein hi romance karne lage..Naina ti abhi bhi jaane ki zidd kar rahi thi but Raj ne usko pyaar se mana hi liya..But usne woh 3 magical words nahin kahe..Naina is still waiting

"When you fall in love
It's not just a whim.
You spend every moment
Just thinking of him:
Where is he now?
Where was he then?
And he doesn't know
The unrest within!

When you fall in love
It's not just a whim.
For one glamorous night
When the music is dim,
You will utter the words
Which he will repeat
As he kneels down beside
Two prettiest of feet."

Flashback se to lagta hai ki Aslam ko Vikram ne hi kidnap karwaya hoga..😕😡

Continue soon

Bye

Joke was too funny..😆😆😆

When will u update Ehsaas n Ztmk???

Edited by suhana_dixit - 15 years ago

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

Priya !!! 😃

samajh nahi aa raha ki tujhe hamesha ki tarah Hi-hello kahu ki seedha ek jhappi dedu !! Chal second option hi perfect hai !🤗

Kya dhasoo start tha !

first line padhaa...and believe me, I could hear that thappad ka gunj....

Aur phir kya, main bass ek pillow ko pakad ke apni ungli chabate huye, curiosity aage padhne lagi..ki kya hoga??

Yeh saala Raj ko maarna chahta hai...

LEKIN.....

tabhi zabardast entry hui....Raj ki .....!!!

Rajveer:- "mujhe tujhe maarne k liye kisi kutte ki izazat lene ki jarurat nahi hai...!!!"

What dial baap !!! Maine toh ek zor ki seeti maari !!!

What grip man ! Vikram ki toh aaj khair nahi...

aur uske log kuch kar bhi nahi sakte...coz.....

Vishal:-"kahne ki jarurat nahi hai...par koi bhi agar aage ek bhi kadam badhaya toh jaan jayegi...Vikram ki...!!!"

Waise Raj was the STAR and HERO of the Update ...but Vishal bhi yaad rahega! His dial were just superb !

Aur kya style se ussiki sword nikaal usse hi dhamkaya!!

Raj chup chap jaa raha tha, par yeh Vikram!!! Kych jyaada hi khumkhumi hai ussmein...jo nahi bolna chahiye wahi bol diya aur phir aisa punch pada ki ki Khud uchal pada ! 😆

And this dial....

"Naina chahe rajkumari ho ya kanyakumari...mujhe is baat se koi faraq nahi padta...kyoun ki duniya jaanti hai aur tu bhi apne dimag me bitha le ki Naina sirf aur sirf meri hai...!!! "

Waah ! I just sent 2-3 muaah muaah muaah in air at this ! 😆

Haai !!! Kya lag raha hoga woh pure scene mein...!😍

Haila Priya woh tasveer waala scene....***sigh*** main kab aisa dhasoo likh paungi !!! Yaar teri script toh mind blowing hai !! Sach sach bata tu sachmein wahi hai na jo mujhe kehti hai, ya koi badi script writer???? par...phir tu IF pe kya karti ??? 😕

And then Vishal's dialogues were just mindblowing !!!

Specially woh 1...Rajveer, 2....NAina waala....

And Vishal bilkul sahi hai! Umar toh Ramayan paath karne ki hai par Naina ke sapne dekh raha hai gadha 😡

Waise maine apna kaam bahot sahi tareeke se kiya !! Naina safe hai !! 😛

Priya this RN scene makes you to receive 3-4 whistles, 4-5 jhappies, and a muaah !

I wanted Naina to behave this way only !

Bada shaana bann raha tha na? Naina ko dur bhej raha tha!

Ab mere kaleje thandak pohochi...jab woh usse rukne keliye mana raha tha! 😛

Par shai bhi hai, Naina usse chodkar kabhi bhi kahin bhi nahi jaa sakti !😉

That scene was quite sweet and romantic !

Aur tu kya keh rahi thi mujhse???

Itna romantic kaafi tha madam, hospital mein isse zyaada kya karegi??? 😆 😆 😆

Main allow nahi karti !! Raj ki entry hi bandh hojati jabtak Naina ka discharge na ho ! 😆 😆 😆 Abey serious patient hai yaaar....koi sardi,khaasi bukhaar ka case nahi !😆

But Yeh Raj na....abhi bhi tashan dikha raha hai! Aakhir woh three words bole bagair hi chala gaya !

Parr kabtak bhaagega!

Flashback was quite intriguing....Aslam kaha gaya??

And nice LRL joke ! 😆

Update soon please !

Edited by Revolutionbreez - 15 years ago

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

👏 Congratulations Priya! 👏

👏 continue d great work!👏

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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Yasmin

@Yazzi

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#24

although i know i shouldnt be because situation garam hain but still i'm laughing my ass of, not literally because thats not possible lol😆 haan haan you probably think im crazy laughing at such a tensed update 😕 but i'm sure even you know that your supposedly tensed updates was kind of hilarious 😆 and that is not at all a bad thing let me tell you,😃 i actually love how you can make the most serious of situations so light-hearted by just mere dialougues 😃 seriosly you should be a script writer, your film will definetly be a Mega Hit 😃

anyways the best dilaoge of the update i guess it had to be vishals, sholay and mahabbarat one ROFLING huge time here 🤣🤣 and now my back hurts after all the rolling round on the marble floor, let me tell you the floor was ice cold aswell it's all your fault 😆

Well although Vishal took the best dialouge award, rajveer was again the update stealer, yaar he should sometime let the others get the limelight 😆 he outshines everyone, even Naina 😳

His anger was woah !!! like a tiger 😳😳😳 very fierce and i can just imagine how hot he must have looked with those gorgeous eyes blazing in fire ☺️☺️ i think i'm melting over here lol, all of a sudden my room feels to hot to bear 😳😳

but you know what was the best, his funny dialouges even when he seemed ready to kill that good for nothing moron, jerk and *beep* vikram 😡😡😡 like that kutta dialouge 😆😆 and that rajkumari kanya kumari one lmao 😆😆 but the BEST od the best was Naina sirf meri hain, sirf meri *sigh* 😳😳 i could just imagine that scene infront of my eyes ... definetly that was a standing ovation moment 👏 he's a complete star ⭐️

Now steering away from Rajveer, although that's not really possible ... 😳😳😳 i am glad that Naina is okay, otherwise you wouldn't have been okay, i would have sent you where Naina is right now lol 😡😆 lol just kiddin, if anything happens to you what will happen to our updates 😕 Anyways i'm glad that she's okay and that short but very cute romantic moment was needed after that very Intense but somehow hilarious scene 😆 but yeh kya that idiot (do i really need to go into details on who that idiot is) why the hell did he not say those three magical words 😡😕 he is asking for a slap from me make that two right across his too cute for his own good face 😡😆

But i'm glad to see him all mischevious again, he was really worried for her ... atleast in all this we found out the intensity of his love for Naina 😳

Now i'm just waiting for him to confess .. and that stupid but so gorgeous veer better do that before i decide to pick up my shotgun 😡😆

Anyways a brill update and congrats for the second thread 👏 your rolling hommie lmao, i was really dying to use this phrase 😆

Take Care

Yasmin

p.s Suri jee lmao 😆

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya
Episode:21

Ek zor se slap ki awaz aayi......Vikram ki haveli se...

Vikram:-"maine tujh se kaha tha Rajveer par goli chalane k liye ...naina par nahi...!!! mujhe Naina zinda chahiye... Raghav...!!! oye ye itni zor zor se kyu chilla raha hai?Raj ne sun liya to?😆

achanak ek zordaar awaz aayi haveli k main door par...door khula...

ander apne tez kadmin k sath dakhil hua Rajveer...!!! haha ab ayega maza!

Vikram chillaya:- "mere bina izazat k ise kis ne ander aane diya...???" arre iski himmat to dekho...beta jaan pyari hai to muh band rakh!

aate hi Rajveer k hath sab se pahle Vikram k gardan par the...!!! us ne Vikram ka gardan kafi tightly pakda hua tha...aur use usi tarah se dhakelta hua...diwar k paas le gaya...!!! *clapping* mar de isko jaan se...fic ka bhala hoga

Rajveer us waqt kafi khatarnaak lag raha tha...us ki white shirt khun se pura bheega hua tha...hairs bikhre hue the...left hand me us ne ek gun thaam rakhi thi...aur us k piche vishal khada tha...!!! *whistle*

Rajveer:- "mujhe tujhe maarne k liye kisi kutte ki izazat lene ki jarurat nahi hai...!!!" lmao🤣...bhale hi Raj gusse me hai, but he still speaks gr8 dialogues!

diwar se sata hua Vikram khada tha...Rajveer k grip se apne aap ko chudane ki koshish kar raha tha...par Rajveer k ander us waqt voh takat thi jis ki kabhi bhi kalpana nahi ki thi Vikram ne...us ki saansh band hone lagi thi... hehe i cant stop laughing...although Raj ki harkate dara rahi hai mujhe...i cant stop laughing at vikram's fate

Vikram k kuch log bhaagte hue aaye...toh un k samne Vishal khada hua...apne revolver se unhe point karta hua kaha jab bade baat kar rahe ho to bachche bich me nahi bolte! haha

Vishal:-"kahne ki jarurat nahi hai...par koi bhi agar aage ek bhi kadam badhaya toh jaan jayegi...Vikram ki...!!!" cmon badhao kadam agey...marega to vikram na!

Rajveer ne apne gun ko apne paas rakha aur diwar par tange hue ek sword ko khinch kar bahar laaya aur kaha:- "agar Naina ko kuch bhi hua toh tere hi talwar ki pyaas teri hi khun se bujhayunga...!!!" m surprised Vikram didnt faint at this one! gr8 work Priya! mast dialogues hai

Vishal ne hath rakha Rajveer k kandhon par aur kaha:- "bhai jee...humain ab jald se jald hospital chalana chahiye...!!! Naina jee ka operation hona tha....!!!" haan...Vikramthank him varna aj Raj tera janaza liye bina yaha se nahi jane vala tha

Rajveer ki ankhen abhi tak Vikram par thi...

Rajveer:- "abhi se bhagwan se apni zindagi ki dua maang le...Vikram rai...kyoun ki agar Naina ko kuch bhi hua toh vohi waqt tere saanshon k liye bhi akhiri waqt hoga...!!!" hehe ab isko nani yaad ayegi...

Vikram ko chod kar rajveer aage badha...jane k liye...!!! Vikram zameen par gira...us ki saansh fuli hui thi...aur voh zor se saansh leta hua kahne laga... oye! isko sharam nhi ati kya?

Vikram:- "voh bullet tumhare liye tha Rajveer...voh toh Naina bich me aa gayi...varana is waqt tum apni akhiri saansh le rahe hote...!!! aur Naina ka khwaab dekhna chod do...!!! voh ek rajkumari hai...aur us ki shaadi sirf aur sirf ek raja se hogi yani ki hum se...!!!" shut up u idiot! yaha pe Raj Rajveer aur Rani Naina hai...idiots like u can only fill in for stupid villians...Priya ne tujhe hero k role k liye kab ka reject kar dia hai!

Rajveer ek jhatke me turn kiya...aur ek punch pada Vikram k face par...jo ki lagbhag...uchaal kar zameen pe gira...Rajveer ne us ki collor pakdi aur kah:- "Naina chahe rajkumari ho ya kanyakumari...mujhe is baat se koi faraq nahi padta...kyoun ki duniya jaanti hai aur tu bhi apne dimag me bitha le ki Naina sirf aur sirf meri hai...!!! aur dubara use kharoch bhi aayi toh.... *hooting* ye hui na baat...badia sa punch and ek mast dialogue to shut d villian up! We r wid u dear!

Rajveer ne Vikram ko chod kar aage diwar ki taraf gaya...jahan Vikram ki ek badi si tashveer lagi hui thi...!!!Rajveer ne use utha kar zameen par phenka...glasses tut kar bikhar gaye...Rajveer ne un glasses k ander me se Vikram ki tashveer khinch kar nikali...aur apne lighter se us me aag laga diya... lmao...ye idea to bahut achcha tha yaar...Vikram ko uski aukat batane ka... i guess the ashes will look better than Vikram when Rajveer will have finished with him.*jumping*

Rajveer:- "tere zinda rahte teri tashveer ko aag laga raha hun...aur agar Naina ko kuch bhi hua toh tere body ka koi bhi part nahi milega...tere gharwalon ko.... jinhe voh aag laga sakenge...!!!"hehe gharwalo k paise bach jayenge...

Vikram chillaya:- "main tum se darta nahi hun Rajveer...!!! yeh tum bhi jante ho aur main bhi...aur main kya kya kar sakta hun...us k hadh se bhi tum achhe se wakif ho..." abe o chup kar...ander ghus k marungi! Nobody talks to my Raj like dat!

Rajveer ne turn kiya toh Vishal ne rok liya:- "bhai is waqt humain Naina jee k paas hona chahiye...!!! is chuhe se toh hum kabhi bhi apna hisaab chuka sakte hain...!!" kyu roka...thoda aur action dekhne ko milta...aisa lag raha that bollywood ki picture chal rahi ho!

Rajveer bina kuch kahe chala gaya...Vishal kuch der ruka... Rajveer k main door cross karne k baad...Vishal ne turn kiya aur Vikram k kareeb aaya...us k chehre par ek mushkurahat thi...hahaha

Vishal:- "1...Rajveer...2...Naina....3...Aditi...4....Gayatri devi...in logon ko agar ek bhi kharoch aayi...aur mujhe laga ki is me tera hath hai..toh ter rajagiri ki aisi ki taisi...teri dono ankhen fode dunga...taki zindagi bhar 'sholey' k imaam chacha ki tarah 'kya hai...kyoun hai...' karta rahega...!!! aayi baat samajh me...!!!" demonstration k liye ek ankh abhi phod de

Vishal ne Vikram k paas pade ek table par zor se punch maara...kuch hi pal me voh table tut kar niche zameen par pada hua tha... chalo even this wasnt bad! hehehe

Vishal:- "yeh bass trailor tha...puri film kabhi furshat me dikhayunga...!!! abe is umar me Ramayan paath kar...agar Naina ka khayal karega...toh majburan humain Mahabharat dikhaana padega...!!!" ha! budhdha kahi ka...beti ki umar ki ladki k peeche bhagte huye sharam nahi ati...Rajveer aur Vishal iska keema banake dinner me kha jayenge aur dakar bhi nahi marenge!

cut to d hospital...

Rajveer aur Vishal corridor me hi baithe hue the...!!! Aditi aayi...

Aditi:- "bhai...Naina ko i.c.u me shift kar diya gaya hai...voh is waqt behosh hai...khun kafi baha tha na...!!! par doc kah rahe the ki voh jaldi hi thik ho jayegi...!!! doc ne kaha ki hum ek ek kar k us se milne ja sakte hain...!!! vaise tu tab kaha tha...jab us ka operation chal raha tha...???" ji kuch zaruri meeting thi, vaha gaye the...lol

Rajveer ne kuch nahi kaha...i.c.u k ander chala gaya...

Naina ander soyi hui thi...

Rajveer us k kareeb baitha...Naina ka hath thaama...😳 😳

apna chehra Naina k face k kareeb laaya...us k ankhon me anshun the...us ne dhire se kaha...

'sorry Naina...yeh sab meri wajah se hua hai...!!! agar main tumhe apne se dur nahi karta toh aaj tum yahan...is halat me nahi hoti...!!! bass tum jaldi se thik ho jayo...naina...vaada karta hua phir kabhi bhi tumhe aapne se dur nahi hone dunga...!!! plz naina mujhe maaf kar do...!!!" thank God bheje me baat to ghusi!

Rajveer jhuka...Naina k forehead ko kiss kiya...apna chehera hataya toh dekha ki Naina use hi dekh rahi thi...

Rajveer aur Naina ka face ek dushre k baht kareeb tha...Rajveer k ankhon se do boond anshun chalke...jo Naina k ankhon k ander gire...😳

Rajveer ne Naina k cheek ko touch kiya aur kaha:- "tum thik toh ho na...??? main abhi doc ko bulata hun...!!!" doc kya karega ji...har marz ki dawa Rajveer jo yaha hai!

Rajveer vahan se utha jaane k liye par ja nahi paya...Naina ne us ka hath thaam rakha tha...Rajveer ne turn kiya...toh dekha... ki Naina ki ankhon se anshun bah rahe the...voh anshun...jo Naina aur Rajveer...dono k the...!!! haaiii..how touching...priya..dis is for u..👏

Naina ne ishaara kiya Rajveer ko apne kareeb aane k liye...!!! Rajveer us k kareeb aaya...toh Naina use aur bhi jyada kareeb aane ko kaha...

Rajveer Naina k baht kareeb aa kar baitha...

Naina ne dhire se saansh lete hue kaha:- meri Delhi ki train chut gayi hai...!!! aap next train k liye mera reservation kar denge plz...!!! main thodi si thik ho jayungi toh chali jayungi...aur aap ko taklif nahi dungi..!!!" ab ise kya ho gaya? ek baar me ek ki hi akal chalti hai kya?

Rajveer ne apna face Naina k face baht kareeb laaya...apne hath se Naina ka kaan pakda aur kaha:- "kaan pkadta hun...aage se aisi galati nahi karunga...aur agar aisa kabhi kiya toh tum mujhe khinch k do thappad maar dena...!!! aur haan...aage se tum ne agar mujhe 'aap' kaha toh main tumhe do thappad maar dunga...samjhi...???" haan...samjhi?

Naina:- "tum ne mera kaan pakda hai...!!!" gud observation..lol

Raj mushkuraya aur kaha:- "ek hi baat hai...!!!" really?

Naina:- "parr mujhe sach me jana hai..." aise kaise?

Rajveer:- "main jaane dun tab na..." haanji...kaise jaogi zara hum bhi to dekhe? itni tragedy k baad agar Priya ne aisa kuch karne ki koshish kari to hum usey chodenge nahi

Naina:- "toh kya tum mere sath zabardast karoge...???" sure darling

Rajveer:- "jarurat padi toh voh bhi karunga...lekin tumhe khud se alag nahi kar sakta...kabhi nahi...!!!" us ne Naina ko cheek apne hathon se brush karte hue kaha... aawww...Raj mujhe aise dekhe to zindagi bhar hospital me padi rahu...😳

Naina:- "par mera faishla abhi tak nahi badla...main jarur chali jayungi aur mujhe koi nahi rok payega...!!!" hehe pagal

Rajveer:- "aur agar maine rok liya toh...

Naina:- "nahi rok payoge... im betting on Raj

Raj jhuka Naina k chehre par...n showering kisses on her face... Naina chup rahi kuch nahi kaha...Naina k lips kareeb aa kar Rajveer ruka aur kaha :- "tum mujhe chod kar kabhi bhi...kahin bhi nahi ja payogi...!!!" ab iske baad kon jayega yaar?

Naina ne apna hath rakha...Rajveer k face par aur kaha:- "i think tumhe kuch kahana hai...!!! kuch spl...!!" go ahead go ahead

Rajveer k ankhon me shararat thi...us ne kaha:- "kya kahna tha mujhe...zara tum hi kah do...!!!" ab koi itna bhav khata hai?

Naina:- "main kah chuki hun...ab tumhe kahana hai...!!!"

Naina ne zidd ki...Raj:- "kya kahana hai...???" either he is too dumb or zada bhav kha raha hai

door k paas kuch aahat aayi...toh Raj Naina se alag hua...oh no

doc aa kar Naina ka cheak-up kar k chale gaye...un k jane k baad Naina ne dekha...Raj gayab tha...lekin Aditi aur Vishal vohi the... as expected...kaam k time hamesha gayab!

Aditi ko dekh kar Naina mushkurayi...Aditi:- bhai ko dhundh rahi ho...??? voh bahar maa se fone par baat kar raha hai...!!!" smart girl, Adi

Aditi aa kar Naina k paas baithi aur kaha:- "sorry Naina...yeh sab bhai ki wajah se hua hai...!!! na hi bhai tumhe jane ko kahta aur na hi voh log tum par goli chalate...!!!" ye sab sirf us sirfire Vikram ki wajah se hua hai

Naina:- "goli mujh par nahi Rajveer par chalayi gayi thi...!!!" 😲 😲😲

Aditi:- "kya...???"😲

Naina:- "haan...maine jab dekha ki us aadmi ne Rajveer ko point kar k khada tha...toh main Rajveer ko batane ja rahi thi...aur..." she stood between him and death...naina Raj se kitnaaaa pyaar karti hai! haaiii...ab jab Raj ko ye pata chalega to vo kya karega?

Naina ne aage aur kuch nahi kaha aur mushkura diya...!!!

Vishal:- "aap us aadmi ko pehchaan sakti hai...???"

Naina:- "nahi...voh aadmi baht dur tha...aur face par ek kapda baandh rakha tha...isiliye main us ka chehra dekh nahi payi...!!!" bad luck

Flashback......

Vikram shaadi k liye haan kar k chala gaya tha...!!! par Rajveer ko abhi bhi Vikram par shaq tha... hmmm right

baarat jane ko taiyaar thi...par Aslam gayab tha...!!! why???😕

Rajveer:- "Vishal... Aslam kahan hai...???"

Vishal:- "bhai...us ne kaha ki voh namaaz aada kar k jaldi aa jayega...!!! par abhi tak nahi aaya...!!! gadbad hai...

Rajveer:- "maine kaha tha na ki use akela mat chodna...!!!"

Vishal:- "voh akela nahi tha bhai...us k sath kuch aur log bhi gaye the...!!!"

Vishal ne ek aadmi ko bulaya aur kaha:- "Aslam k sath toh tum bhi gaye the na...phir Aslam kahan hai...???"

dat man:- "Aslam ko kisi ka fone aaya tha...voh vohin khade baat kar raha tha...!!! phir kahne laga ki voh kuch hi der me ghar pahunch jayega...aur yeh kah kar akele hi chala gaya...!!!" pakka gadbad hai...is Vikram ki to...aisi ki taisi

Vishal:- "aur tum ne use jane diya...kyoun...???"

dat man:- "hum sab ne baht mana kiya par voh maana nahi... akela bike le kar kahin chala gaya...!!!" arre ye shadi nahi karna chata kya?

Rajveer:- "yeh Aslam kab se itna bewakuff ho gaya...??? kya kar raha hai voh...??? kahan chala gaya...??? achha Vishal use fone karo...!!!"🤢

Vishal:- "kab se try kar raha hun bhai...ring ho raha hai par koi receive nahi kar raha hai...!!!" 😭

achanak ek police van aa kar ruki...aur ander se Jigyasa bahar aayi...aur Rajveer se kaha

Jigyasa:- "aap ko ek baht buri khabar deni thi...!!! marr gaye...🤢

end of d epi......

ek baat batao thoda aur likh k end nahi kar sakti thi? jaise hi mujhe lagta hai k this time suspense khulega, Priya ji ka end of epi dikh jata hai...aisa mat karo na...plz batao na kya hua tha...

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okkk ab aap sab k comments ki baari...mujhe pata hai ki is ud me aap sab ek lambi chadi hospital k bhagam-bhaag ud ko xpect kiya hoga...par maine aisa kuch nahi kiya...kyoun ki mujhe story aage badhani thi...!!! achcha kia doctor shab wale scenes pe time waste nhi kia..i hav enough of them already! Part was fantastic! Raj ka har scene was outstanding...jab usne /vikram ko dhamki di thi, i was jumping wid joy...aur Naina k sath wale wer soooo sensitive sweet caring nd romantic...bahut hi pyara tha.

Finally usne kaha k Naina uske paas rahegi...wow! ab akal ayi sir ko...dat sending her away is not a gud idea...

aur ye Naina kya jana hai jana hai ki rat laga rahi hai? ek baar me ek hi ka dimag chalta hai...😆

scenes and dialogues wer commendable! 👏

and very gud for d quick uds...we love it...ab aise hi lagi raho aur next ud bhi jaldi post karna ok?

LRL joke was also very funny!😆

plz dont forget to write ur precious comments for me...!!! i will b waiting for ur generous support...!!! plz do comments...or press d LIKE botton...!!!😃

i hav a feeling this fic is gonna cont in the 3rd thread 2! keep up d gud work dear!

love

Sur

Edited by Sur_Singhania - 15 years ago

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sweet_shona

@sweet_shona

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Posted: 15 years ago

#26

Hi Priya, How r u dear?

First of all COngratulation on the 2nd thread of Tere Naina...!!! 👍🏼

Update is awesome.... yes naina is in the hospita but still update is just mindblowing..!!
Raj threatened Vikram... ofcourse..he deserves it..actually he deserves more than that.. 😡
So finally Raj ne apna haq jataaya... he asked naina to forgive him... its a lovely scene... small yet romantic... liked this side of Raj's... 😳
but the spoiler..the doc... came to spoile the very moment.. 😡 ...kuchh der baad nahi aa sakta tha kya??
hmm..flashbackk..Aslam is gaayab...ofcpurse Vikram's hand behind it... 😡
waiting for the next update...😊
n yeah..LRL joke....just awesome... 🤣

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Prerna

@prerna1

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Posted: 15 years ago

#27

that was awesome
and congo for second thread
plz continue soon

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sea_nyx

@sea_nyx

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Posted: 15 years ago

#28

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Naina chahe rajkumari ho ya kanyakumari...mujhe is baat se koi faraq nahi padta...kyoun ki duniya jaanti hai aur tu bhi apne dimag me bitha le ki Naina sirf aur sirf meri hai...!!! aur dubara use kharoch bhi aayi toh....

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Naina:- "toh kya tum mere sath zabardast karoge...???"

Rajveer:- "jarurat padi toh voh bhi karunga...lekin tumhe khud se alag nahi kar sakta...kabhi nahi...!!!" us ne Naina ko cheek apne hathon se brush karte hue kaha...

😍 😍 😍😍😍 Thank God! kum se kum use samajh aaya ki naina ki jagah unke sath hai, and I have to admit yeh baat woh bade romantic tarikhe se maana hai. hai mere Sharukh, yeh hui na baat!!! 😳

Also CONGRATS!!!! and a huge 🤗 for the second thread, 🥳

I don't believe this, yeh mein teesri baar post ko edit kar rahi hoon , lekin I had to say thanks for listening to our ahem! "request" 😉 and adding some romance. Mogambo khush hua!!! maine abhi ke liye apni gun se goliyaan nikaal rahi hoon lekin yaad rahe dono mere paas hi rahenge 😈 ......mwah ha ha ha ha!!! (that was my villainous laugh 😉)

Edited by sea_nyx - 15 years ago

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

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Posted: 15 years ago

#29

Congratulations for the Second Thread of Tere Naina!!!!!!

😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

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Posted: 15 years ago

#30

Too good!!!Awesome!!!!!

Vikram is angry at his men kyunki woh goli Naina ke liye nahi Raj ke liye thi!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Raj ne kya dhamakedaar entry maari!!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj ne gusse mein Vikram ki gardan ko pakda with a gun in his other hand!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Wow!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

His angry is very fierce like a tiger!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj's dialogues were just too good!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Vikram ki toh haalat kharab ho gayi hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Vikram ke aadmi bhaagte huye aaye inko lagta hai pata nahi hai ke jab do bade log baat kar rahe ho toh beech bacche nahi bolte!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Vikram still had the nerve to say that the bullet was meant for Raj!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

He said ke Naina ek rajkumari hai aur uski shaadi sirf aur sirf ek raja se hogi!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ne usse jo punch maara aur phir Raj ka rajkumari waala dialogue was fantastic!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

I loved it when Raj said ke Naina sirf aur sirf uski hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj ne Vikram ki tasveer ko aag laga diya and warned him of the consquences if anything happened to Naina!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Par jaate jaate bhi Vikram ko Raj ke gusse ko aur bhadkana tha!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Accha huya Vishal ne Raj ko rok liya and said ke unhe Naina ke paas hona chahiye warna Raj sach mein Vikram ko maar deta!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Vishal's Sholay dialogue was awesome!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Uska trailor bhi kamal ka tha and he said ke puri film kabhi fursat mein dikhayega!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Vishal ne sahi kaha ke Vikram ish umar mein Ramayan padhe, agar Naina ka khayal karega toh majburan unhe Mahabharat dikhani padegi!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

Magar Vikram toh ish umar swayamvar rakhwana chahta hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Thank God Naina is safe now warna Raj pata nahi kya karta!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ko aakhir ehsaas ho hi gaya ke agar woh Naina ko khud se dur nahi karta toh woh ish haalat mein nahi hoti!!!!! 😔 😔 😔 😔

Raj ki ankhon se Naina ki ankhon mein aasoon girna aur phir Naina ki ankhon se Raj aur Naina dono ke aansoon behna was very touching!!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Naina ab Raj se apna badla le rahi hai aur jaane ki zidd kar rahi hai!!!!!! 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj ka Naina ka kaan pakadna aur kehna ke ek hi baat hai was very cute!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ab Naina ko pyaar se mana raha hai aur uspe apna haq jaata raha hai aur kehta hai ke kabhi Naina ko khud se alag nahi karega!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj and Naina are romancing in the hospital and Raj is showering kisses on her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj ko abhi bhi shaitaani sujh raha hai and he is not saying the three magical words thats Naina is waiting to hear from him!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛

Naina told Aditi ke goli Raj pe chalayi gayi thi and she was just going to warn Raj when she got shot!!!!!

Baarat jaane ko taiyaar hai aur Aslam gayab hai!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Ho na ho iske peeche zaroor Vikram ka haath hai!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Ab Jigyasa aayi hai aur keh rahi hai koi buri khabar hai!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲Vikram ne zaroor Aslam ko kisi cheez mein phasaya hai!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

The joke was very funny!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Waiting for Raj to confess his love to Naina!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago