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Posted: 15 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: preet09



congrats priya on the second thread 👏 👏 👏
plz continue soon
luv preet

Thanxxxxxxx a lotttt Preet...!!!😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: esha143

CONGRATULATIONS......................👏

👏 Thanqqqqq esha...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

i wish ki tere saare fics issi tarah se aage badhte hi jaaye aur humsab ko khush karthe hi jaaye.😃
aap ne wish kar hi liya hai toh masaallha main aap sab ko bore karne k liye taiyaar rahungi...😃😃

par ek problem hai,aage badhne ke liye update karna bhi tho jaroori hai na?😆isliye jaldi update kardijiye maate,😉 aapke bhakth aapke UD ki prateeksha kar rahe hai.plz hame MUKTHI(i mean UD)pradaan karo😈. kar rahi hun baalike....matlab de rahi hun...bass thoda sa tym lagega...😆 😆

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: tina_1234

congzzzzzz....party tym....ek romantic update toh banta hai....:P :P

Thanqqqqqq Tina...😃!!!hmmmm romantic ud...😛??? sochna padega...!!!😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sun_423

priya ab naya topic open ho hii gaya hai tho jaldi se update karo.. waiting for the update eagerly...😊

kar rahi hun yaar...bass thodi der aur...!!!😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: guglu088

Congratulations on the second thread Priya!!!

And I agree with Mana!!! Products jaldi dikha, samjhi!!!!😆 😆 😆

Love
Guglu

Thanqqqqqqqqq guglu...😃!!! Products dikhati hun...ek k sath ek muft hai yaar...!!!😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

A lot of hugs and kisses to u for writing a perfect and brilliant fic like "Tere Naina".🤗 🤗 🤗thanqqqqqqq darl...!!!🤗 🤗 🤗

I hope u will continue the same thing and this good work with your other fics too sweet heart. ab aap ne kah diya hai toh meri kya mazal ki main aap ki baat kaat sakun...!!!😃 😃 😃 😃 😃😃

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Episode:21
Ek zor se slap ki awaz aayi......Vikram ki haveli se...
Vikram:-"maine tujh se kaha tha Rajveer par goli chalane k liye ...naina par nahi...!!! mujhe Naina zinda chahiye... Raghav...!!!
achanak ek zordaar awaz aayi haveli k main door par...door khula...
ander apne tez kadmin k sath dakhil hua Rajveer...!!!
Vikram chillaya:- "mere bina izazat k ise kis ne ander aane diya...???"
aate hi Rajveer k hath sab se pahle Vikram k gardan par the...!!! us ne Vikram ka gardan kafi tightly pakda hua tha...aur use usi tarah se dhakelta hua...diwar k paas le gaya...!!!
Rajveer us waqt kafi khatarnaak lag raha tha...us ki white shirt khun se pura bheega hua tha...hairs bikhre hue the...left hand me us ne ek gun thaam rakhi thi...aur us k piche vishal khada tha...!!!
Rajveer:- "mujhe tujhe maarne k liye kisi kutte ki izazat lene ki jarurat nahi hai...!!!"
diwar se sata hua Vikram khada tha...Rajveer k grip se apne aap ko chudane ki koshish kar raha tha...par Rajveer k ander us waqt voh takat thi jis ki kabhi bhi kalpana nahi ki thi Vikram ne...us ki saansh band hone lagi thi...
Vikram k kuch log bhaagte hue aaye...toh un k samne Vishal khada hua...apne revolver se unhe point karta hua kaha
Vishal:-"kahne ki jarurat nahi hai...par koi bhi agar aage ek bhi kadam badhaya toh jaan jayegi...Vikram ki...!!!"
Rajveer ne apne gun ko apne paas rakha aur diwar par tange hue ek sword ko khinch kar bahar laaya aur kaha:- "agar Naina ko kuch bhi hua toh tere hi talwar ki pyaas teri hi khun se bujhayunga...!!!"
Vishal ne hath rakha Rajveer k kandhon par aur kaha:- "bhai jee...humain ab jald se jald hospital chalana chahiye...!!! Naina jee ka operation hona tha....!!!"
Rajveer ki ankhen abhi tak Vikram par thi...
Rajveer:- "abhi se bhagwan se apni zindagi ki dua maang le...Vikram rai...kyoun ki agar Naina ko kuch bhi hua toh vohi waqt tere saanshon k liye bhi akhiri waqt hoga...!!!"
Vikram ko chod kar rajveer aage badha...jane k liye...!!! Vikram zameen par gira...us ki saansh fuli hui thi...aur voh zor se saansh leta hua kahne laga...
Vikram:- "voh bullet tumhare liye tha Rajveer...voh toh Naina bich me aa gayi...varana is waqt tum apni akhiri saansh le rahe hote...!!! aur Naina ka khwaab dekhna chod do...!!! voh ek rajkumari hai...aur us ki shaadi sirf aur sirf ek raja se hogi yani ki hum se...!!!"
Rajveer ek jhatke me turn kiya...aur ek punch pada Vikram k face par...jo ki lagbhag...uchaal kar zameen pe gira...Rajveer ne us ki collor pakdi aur kah:- "Naina chahe rajkumari ho ya kanyakumari...mujhe is baat se koi faraq nahi padta...kyoun ki duniya jaanti hai aur tu bhi apne dimag me bitha le ki Naina sirf aur sirf meri hai...!!! aur dubara use kharoch bhi aayi toh....
Rajveer ne Vikram ko chod kar aage diwar ki taraf gaya...jahan Vikram ki ek badi si tashveer lagi hui thi...!!!Rajveer ne use utha kar zameen par phenka...glasses tut kar bikhar gaye...Rajveer ne un glasses k ander me se Vikram ki tashveer khinch kar nikali...aur apne lighter se us me aag laga diya...
Rajveer:- "tere zinda rahte teri tashveer ko aag laga raha hun...aur agar Naina ko kuch bhi hua toh tere body ka koi bhi part nahi milega...tere gharwalon ko.... jinhe voh aag laga sakenge...!!!"
Vikram chillaya:- "main tum se darta nahi hun Rajveer...!!! yeh tum bhi jante ho aur main bhi...aur main kya kya kar sakta hun...us k hadh se bhi tum achhe se wakif ho..."
Rajveer ne turn kiya toh Vishal ne rok liya:- "bhai is waqt humain Naina jee k paas hona chahiye...!!! is chuhe se toh hum kabhi bhi apna hisaab chuka sakte hain...!!"
Rajveer bina kuch kahe chala gaya...Vishal kuch der ruka... Rajveer k main door cross karne k baad...Vishal ne turn kiya aur Vikram k kareeb aaya...us k chehre par ek mushkurahat thi...
Vishal:- "1...Rajveer...2...Naina....3...Aditi...4....Gayatri devi...in logon ko agar ek bhi kharoch aayi...aur mujhe laga ki is me tera hath hai..toh ter rajagiri ki aisi ki taisi...teri dono ankhen fode dunga...taki zindagi bhar 'sholey' k imaam chacha ki tarah 'kya hai...kyoun hai...' karta rahega...!!! aayi baat samajh me...!!!"
Vishal ne Vikram k paas pade ek table par zor se punch maara...kuch hi pal me voh table tut kar niche zameen par pada hua tha...
Vishal:- "yeh bass trailor tha...puri film kabhi furshat me dikhayunga...!!! abe is umar me Ramayan paath kar...agar Naina ka khayal karega...toh majburan humain Mahabharat dikhaana padega...!!!"
cut to d hospital...
Rajveer aur Vishal corridor me hi baithe hue the...!!! Aditi aayi...
Aditi:- "bhai...Naina ko i.c.u me shift kar diya gaya hai...voh is waqt behosh hai...khun kafi baha tha na...!!! par doc kah rahe the ki voh jaldi hi thik ho jayegi...!!! doc ne kaha ki hum ek ek kar k us se milne ja sakte hain...!!! vaise tu tab kaha tha...jab us ka operation chal raha tha...???"
Rajveer ne kuch nahi kaha...i.c.u k ander chala gaya...
Naina ander soyi hui thi...
Rajveer us k kareeb baitha...Naina ka hath thaama...
apna chehra Naina k face k kareeb laaya...us k ankhon me anshun the...us ne dhire se kaha...
'sorry Naina...yeh sab meri wajah se hua hai...!!! agar main tumhe apne se dur nahi karta toh aaj tum yahan...is halat me nahi hoti...!!! bass tum jaldi se thik ho jayo...naina...vaada karta hua phir kabhi bhi tumhe aapne se dur nahi hone dunga...!!! plz naina mujhe maaf kar do...!!!"
Rajveer jhuka...Naina k forehead ko kiss kiya...apna chehera hataya toh dekha ki Naina use hi dekh rahi thi...
Rajveer aur Naina ka face ek dushre k baht kareeb tha...Rajveer k ankhon se do boond anshun chalke...jo Naina k ankhon k ander gire...
Rajveer ne Naina k cheek ko touch kiya aur kaha:- "tum thik toh ho na...??? main abhi doc ko bulata hun...!!!"
Rajveer vahan se utha jaane k liye par ja nahi paya...Naina ne us ka hath thaam rakha tha...Rajveer ne turn kiya...toh dekha... ki Naina ki ankhon se anshun bah rahe the...voh anshun...jo Naina aur Rajveer...dono k the...!!!
Naina ne ishaara kiya Rajveer ko apne kareeb aane k liye...!!! Rajveer us k kareeb aaya...toh Naina use aur bhi jyada kareeb aane ko kaha...
Rajveer Naina k baht kareeb aa kar baitha...
Naina ne dhire se saansh lete hue kaha:- meri Delhi ki train chut gayi hai...!!! aap next train k liye mera reservation kar denge plz...!!! main thodi si thik ho jayungi toh chali jayungi...aur aap ko taklif nahi dungi..!!!"
Rajveer ne apna face Naina k face baht kareeb laaya...apne hath se Naina ka kaan pakda aur kaha:- "kaan pkadta hun...aage se aisi galati nahi karunga...aur agar aisa kabhi kiya toh tum mujhe khinch k do thappad maar dena...!!! aur haan...aage se tum ne agar mujhe 'aap' kaha toh main tumhe do thappad maar dunga...samjhi...???"
Naina:- "tum ne mera kaan pakda hai...!!!"
Raj mushkuraya aur kaha:- "ek hi baat hai...!!!"
Naina:- "parr mujhe sach me jana hai...
Rajveer:- "main jaane dun tab na...
Naina:- "toh kya tum mere sath zabardast karoge...???"
Rajveer:- "jarurat padi toh voh bhi karunga...lekin tumhe khud se alag nahi kar sakta...kabhi nahi...!!!" us ne Naina ko cheek apne hathon se brush karte hue kaha...
Naina:- "par mera faishla abhi tak nahi badla...main jarur chali jayungi aur mujhe koi nahi rok payega...!!!"
Rajveer:- "aur agar maine rok liya toh...
Naina:- "nahi rok payoge...
Raj jhuka Naina k chehre par...n showering kisses on her face... Naina chup rahi kuch nahi kaha...Naina k lips kareeb aa kar Rajveer ruka aur kaha :- "tum mujhe chod kar kabhi bhi...kahin bhi nahi ja payogi...!!!"
Naina ne apna hath rakha...Rajveer k face par aur kaha:- "i think tumhe kuch kahana hai...!!! kuch spl...!!"
Rajveer k ankhon me shararat thi...us ne kaha:- "kya kahna tha mujhe...zara tum hi kah do...!!!"
Naina:- "main kah chuki hun...ab tumhe kahana hai...!!!"
Naina ne zidd ki...Raj:- "kya kahana hai...???"
door k paas kuch aahat aayi...toh Raj Naina se alag hua...
doc aa kar Naina ka cheak-up kar k chale gaye...un k jane k baad Naina ne dekha...Raj gayab tha...lekin Aditi aur Vishal vohi the...
Aditi ko dekh kar Naina mushkurayi...Aditi:- bhai ko dhundh rahi ho...??? voh bahar maa se fone par baat kar raha hai...!!!"
Aditi aa kar Naina k paas baithi aur kaha:- "sorry Naina...yeh sab bhai ki wajah se hua hai...!!! na hi bhai tumhe jane ko kahta aur na hi voh log tum par goli chalate...!!!"
Naina:- "goli mujh par nahi Rajveer par chalayi gayi thi...!!!"
Aditi:- "kya...???"
Naina:- "haan...maine jab dekha ki us aadmi ne Rajveer ko point kar k khada tha...toh main Rajveer ko batane ja rahi thi...aur..."
Naina ne aage aur kuch nahi kaha aur mushkura diya...!!!
Vishal:- "aap us aadmi ko pehchaan sakti hai...???"
Naina:- "nahi...voh aadmi baht dur tha...aur face par ek kapda baandh rakha tha...isiliye main us ka chehra dekh nahi payi...!!!"
Flashback......
Vikram shaadi k liye haan kar k chala gaya tha...!!! par Rajveer ko abhi bhi Vikram par shaq tha...
baarat jane ko taiyaar thi...par Aslam gayab tha...!!!
Rajveer:- "Vishal... Aslam kahan hai...???"
Vishal:- "bhai...us ne kaha ki voh namaaz aada kar k jaldi aa jayega...!!! par abhi tak nahi aaya...!!!
Rajveer:- "maine kaha tha na ki use akela mat chodna...!!!"
Vishal:- "voh akela nahi tha bhai...us k sath kuch aur log bhi gaye the...!!!"
Vishal ne ek aadmi ko bulaya aur kaha:- "Aslam k sath toh tum bhi gaye the na...phir Aslam kahan hai...???"
dat man:- "Aslam ko kisi ka fone aaya tha...voh vohin khade baat kar raha tha...!!! phir kahne laga ki voh kuch hi der me ghar pahunch jayega...aur yeh kah kar akele hi chala gaya...!!!"
Vishal:- "aur tum ne use jane diya...kyoun...???"
dat man:- "hum sab ne baht mana kiya par voh maana nahi... akela bike le kar kahin chala gaya...!!!"
Rajveer:- "yeh Aslam kab se itna bewakuff ho gaya...??? kya kar raha hai voh...??? kahan chala gaya...??? achha Vishal use fone karo...!!!"
Vishal:- "kab se try kar raha hun bhai...ring ho raha hai par koi receive nahi kar raha hai...!!!"
achanak ek police van aa kar ruki...aur ander se Jigyasa bahar aayi...aur Rajveer se kaha
Jigyasa:- "aap ko ek baht buri khabar deni thi...!!!
end of d epi......
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okkk ab aap sab k comments ki baari...mujhe pata hai ki is ud me aap sab ek lambi chadi hospital k bhagam-bhaag ud ko xpect kiya hoga...par maine aisa kuch nahi kiya...kyoun ki mujhe story aage badhani thi...!!!
plz dont forget to write ur precious comments for me...!!! i will b waiting for ur generous support...!!! plz do comments...or press d LIKE botton...!!!😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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LRL JOKE
Suri jee ki death raat k 12 baje k baad ho gayi...unhe current laga tha...par marte waqt bhi un k chehre par ek lambi si smile thi...
God ne pucha:- sabhi log jab marte hain toh un k chehre par udaasi hoti hai...par tum marte waqt hass kyoun rahe the...???"
Suri jee:- "voh mujhe laga ki koi meri photo le raha hai...!!!"
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I have always loved Rajveer - Vikram face-offs....!!!!! And will continue to do so but only till its Vikram who is at the receiving end...!!!😉😉

So I liked it this time also...Vikram khud toh mota hai hi but uska dimaag usse double mota hai....Kyun Rajveer se pange leta hai....??? 😕😕

Naina is getting well....good...looks like Mana has done her job very well....!!!! 😛

The sort of confession and manaoing session was absolutely cute....!!!! 😳 And you described soooo wellll.....!!!! 👏

Pls pls pls put up the next part soon...!!!! 😃😃😃

Oh and congo shongo for TN 2....!!!! You are doing a brilliant job....!!!!! ⭐️
Edited by Dhara_s - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi priya 😛 😛 😛
the update was superb 👏 👏 👏
vikram ke saath raj ne bilkul sahi kiya.........he is so bad
raj-naina ka scene to bahut hi acha tha 😳 😳 😳
thanks naina ko jaldi se theek kar diya
their scene was just awesome⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
the whole part was gr8
plz continue soon
luv preet🤗🤗🤗

Edited by preet09 - 15 years ago

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